Forget if it's not Hip-Hop, this is certainly an interesting track. Unfortunately it doesn't sound very hopefull at some places.
I've been listening to some of your other songs. They've all got interesting synths.
I'd love to rap or sing on one of your tracks, though something shorter than this. There's only one problem: I'm not good at writing lyrics!!!
Very shaky latin like beat, I don't know if I'd have put it in this song but that's your choice.
Some interesting different synths in here and I like the way it changes at different points.
I don't know if I'd have called it Techno, it sounds more Hip-Hop to me, but on the whole it's an interesting production.
This is a track that kind of makes you voyage. It made me feel like I was floating over the ocean.
The piano melody reminds me of a french rap song, by a group called Sexion d'Assaut. The song's called "J'ai pas les loves". In both songs the melody sounds similar, however the fact that on this track it's the piano playing the melody instead of the guitar totaly changes the perspective of the track.
The production itself though is super. Im downloading this.
It's interesting that the vocals were in french. Where did you get them from?
In fact the whole track itself was interesting. There was some strange percussion behind and the track itself had a very ambient feeling about it.
Hi, I'm glad you liked it.
The vocals were taken from the Godard's movie Alphaville. A quick search on YouTube will let you find it.
The strange percussion is actually a guitar!
Thanks! :)
BTW: there is another track in French on my profile "Le Fait". Since you are a rapper and if you feel like, feel free to add some vocals!
This was quite a nice suprise to only hear percussion. I don't know if I'd have put it under electronic becos it sounded more like hip-hop to me. But yeah you're right, the beat's super. It might be nice as well with a little vocal to rap at certain points where the beat seems a bit repetitive, but that would be your choice.
All can say is that as it is it's a great production. Keep making more tracks like this.
Thanks for the reply. I had fun making this track. You said, “It might be nice with a little vocal at certain pointsâ€Â. That sounds like a good idea, just one problem with that... I can’t sing.
You're joking! I wish I could make tracks with such great quality. Me my quality is awful. However the mix itself is super. I loved the bass drum. Keep this up. How do you make tracks like this?
A nice beat here, I wish I knew how to make such good beats. The rap glues well alongside the female voice. A sure favourite. Do you sell albums and are you famous? You should be. I can't wait for another song. It's a pity you've only done one song so far. Tell me when you've got another song uploaded. This is the best hip-hop I've so far seen on this site.
Me as well for a few of my tracks I start of with no idea of what to do but you've done a nice job. Reminds me of a french rap song by Sexion D'Assaut which I hear often. The beat in both songs are certainly a success.
Interesting choice of instruments. Some nice loud beats which seem to have glued togethter well with the piano and synth. They make it sound as if there's a car window being smashed. The only thing that might need changing is the ending.
Appreciate the feed back on this one....Not exact albums yet but i'm still a work in progress....Yeah piano's and violins and cellos really get me inspired for some reason..
Everything in this track's perfect, and the vocals sound inspired by the singer William. The only thing I might have to say against this is that at some points more beat might have been needed.
This has got good synth behind it. Try adding some vocals to your tracks. This like all your other tracks has a nice beat. Do you have any ideas on how to make good beats because I have trouble making beats?
start off with a melody..could be a sample....make sure your tones are new...i often join two kicks together or two claps or snare to make the track fat....pan you synth extreme left and right..make sure your kick and clap are the loudest...rest your ears and come back and ad something every 5 minutes...it will be great in the end
Hey James, thanks alot for your words, I appreciate that!! It takes practice and patience, so just keep at it and you will get better every single day you practice. Well I usually have a routine when making beats...First off, I use FL Studio 9, I start off by coming up with notes for a possible synth, then I use VST's to make a few synths with those notes...once I got my synths done, I then build a beat around them and go from there...hope that helps! If you have anything more you want to know, e-mail me at:
There's a good bass but it needs to be a bit louder. It's nicely rapped but you needed to say that there was adult content in. It's also's a bit repetitive and needs a second verse. The beat was sweet though, good job.
thanks for the review, i really appreciate the praise=) every now and then i try to find elements to mix together that shouldn't really work, heh. so i'm glad that you find the song interesting. i'll keep you posted as the song develops. thanks again!
I love the beat and the bass and the synth sounded like bells. Despite the beat being one of my favourite on this site, the synth needs to be reworked. But apart from that this super. Great stuff.
Nice voice but it sounds hollow, however that might just be an interesting effect to show the emotion of the song. Before I worked with Jamstudio. It's a super sight to help make music with.
P.S. If you're still on Jamstudio check out my track "Just Rock The Town". It rocks according to me.
You're welcome. I like to surprise people with my music. I know you might not consider this a regular style of trance or trance at all. I guess I never really tried to make it sound like trance, structure wise. So maybe it's a new style of trance. Well, thanks for giving it a listen to. Thanks for your review.
I like that bass that acted like a drum, but I'd have prefered the beat to come earlier. Around the middle of the track there were some interesting background noises which gave the track an interesting ambient feel. Well done ( love it ).
You're right, this and my next piece Black Jungle are in a different style ... but only for the fact that nature gave them with sound samples from Bebop ...
Try, listen to others and learn! Making music is a passion and a great pleasure.
Listening to her satisfaction and the possibility of further development...
Merry Christmas!
Good beat but not enough bass for my liking, ah I've just heard some synth but try starting with the bass or synth instead of the beat.
Keep working on this, I see you've put some hard work in to this.
Merry Christmas.
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I've been listening to some of your other songs. They've all got interesting synths.
I'd love to rap or sing on one of your tracks, though something shorter than this. There's only one problem: I'm not good at writing lyrics!!!
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Some interesting different synths in here and I like the way it changes at different points.
I don't know if I'd have called it Techno, it sounds more Hip-Hop to me, but on the whole it's an interesting production.
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The piano melody reminds me of a french rap song, by a group called Sexion d'Assaut. The song's called "J'ai pas les loves". In both songs the melody sounds similar, however the fact that on this track it's the piano playing the melody instead of the guitar totaly changes the perspective of the track.
The production itself though is super. Im downloading this.
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In fact the whole track itself was interesting. There was some strange percussion behind and the track itself had a very ambient feeling about it.
The vocals were taken from the Godard's movie Alphaville. A quick search on YouTube will let you find it.
The strange percussion is actually a guitar!
Thanks! :)
BTW: there is another track in French on my profile "Le Fait". Since you are a rapper and if you feel like, feel free to add some vocals!
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All can say is that as it is it's a great production. Keep making more tracks like this.
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Your suggestions are good and i ll work on it on my next beat. i ll do too the change for the adult content.
Thanks again.
Peace
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Yeah! If u have little time u can add ur vocal on it!
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P.S. If you're still on Jamstudio check out my track "Just Rock The Town". It rocks according to me.
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Try, listen to others and learn! Making music is a passion and a great pleasure.
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Merry Christmas!
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there's some interesting melodies behind this. Keep making more tracks like this.
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Keep working on this, I see you've put some hard work in to this.
Merry Christmas.