the emotion you put in was just crazy !!! this the sort of thing not many rappers these days would do, and for simply writing this for your dad you have my full respect ^^ anyway, i wish i was this good :)
all we do is flex, on those steroids / bitch watch that money stretch...
Haan, i recognize that beat, i like the sounds ya added with it ! gives it a bit more complex feeling, and a bit of dubstep style. great movement happening here, sounds like aliens landing on earth ^^ keep it up !
there's a nice melancholic and slightly dark feeling in the track. i like the drum pattern and the percussion on the chorus is a nice touch. This is very good for a first track on here: i remember putting out my first one when i was about 12 or 13 & it wasn't like half as good !!! you'll definately get better at it ^^
really hardcore & i like the progression in it at the start, the voice is kind of metal which adds to the hardcore effect. when the dubstep comes in it is real strong and i like the drum pattern pumping it along, lot of energy in this one. if anything i found the intro a bit long, if not it's very good ^^
this is hardcore !!! with the synth and the drums it sounds almost like a funeral march. i could imagine this with some rap verses and a metal chorus because the synth sounds like an electric type guitar (got a sort of metal feel if ya see what i mean)...
the notes are like words to the song, the song has a thought of it's own and i think if anything the sound quality adds to that effect because if not it would sound less natural (it's almost like ya can hear the piano's thoughts at work) or at least that's how i felt it... this isn't my usual genre but i found it really pleasant and it's got a strong ending where ya can hear the piano echoing off ! keep it up :)
dear James ,accordinG to that collaboration of mine with Chris(BrillBilly___althought that track was all by Chris & I just had gave him some haunting sound ,& actually Chhris ,my gentle friend had made me glad by writing collab) I know U & have listened your fantastic track .it's great to read your comment.beautifull explanation & analysis of yours is so lovelY & true for me .thnX for attention & taking time to comment James.best wishes.__Behnam
there's a sweet rock & roll type sound to it when the bass comes in at 0:34 and even with the drums, i love how it then stops and starts at moments. it's like robot's club music, the robotic type vocals add to this feeling. was just a bit odd the synth at 2:34 because it seemed a bit too natural too fit the rest of the track, but then that's just my impression. If not it's great with the background noises sounding like machines at work. I could imagine this as a soundtrack for a science-fiction film, good job !
i agree television is a huge distraction. anyway it was interesting to hear this subject taken up in a rap song. the beat has a lot of atmosphere and works well with the tv noises on it...
something supernatural is happening on here: can just feel it ! i like the metal vocals on as well, it adds to the surnatural effect with the mix of sounds. the vocals sound like aliens. this is just great: my fav halloween track i've seen so far !
i like the positive feeling on this one, it's a nice motivating track: sort of thing ya don't find often in today's hip-hop, and how it's mixed with a slight old-school touch. very good !
it's quite interesting and ya definately got a style of ya own: i like the accents on the chorus and ya got an interesting voice even though sometimes it's a bit quiet, like on the chorus, and sometimes on the verses try articulating a bit better. if not i see loads of potential, and ya flow is fresh: keep at it ! only way is up ^^
dubstep really CAN'T get better than this !!! i like all the energy put in to this and the taxi type noises at about 1:50 were a funny touch. don't know why but it makes me think of a rodent that's taken loads of sugar and is running around mad, hahahaha... It's awesome !
reminds me of like a video game, ya know like one of those worlds in Mario when ya're in the clouds or something if you see what i mean. anyways lots of work has been put in: good job !
good atmosphere to it, i like the way the beat is full of lots of background noises and yeah, that flow's fresh, one of the best raps on here ! keep it up :D
agree with harderthantherest: this ain't a chill out beat, but i like the old-school vibe you put in & it's also got a really uplifting feeling to it which i like ;) much respect!
now this is creative: I'm impressed. makes me think of a machine producing food. it's quite hilarious actually - at 3:07 the machine seems to be running out of battery, I'd personally have faded the track out there because after a while it gets repetitive after a while...
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Haan, i recognize that beat, i like the sounds ya added with it ! gives it a bit more complex feeling, and a bit of dubstep style. great movement happening here, sounds like aliens landing on earth ^^ keep it up !
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Thanks man - Im glad that you like it :)
/Cheers
Peter