interesting what Mark said about the genre. i agree. i might say it is cinematic - evokes some dramatic action - a sci-fi thing for example. great start - neat epic sounds! power on! Dan
i love this "wall of sound" stuff. and yet you are able to make various elements emerge - tinkling bells, electric guitar riffs, etc. great transition to fast section. I would have developed the fast section more - was hoping you would give me a nice long solo! super mix, Benham! peace - Dan
Hi Dan ,well as We talked in email too, my access problem solved today & atlast I'm here again . greatest appreciations of mine for your attntion and interesting commenT & shared idea . it's always great for me whenever I see someone has left a commenT which has a suggestion in its content (like your commenT) .thnak U very much Dan for presence and attention.best wishes.___Behnam
the mood of your music together with the NASA track creates a powerful nostalgic feel at the beginning. i think transition into more active section is very slick. only thing i might say is that I felt the building drums was leading to a rocking guitar solo or something, but it does not go there. nevertheless - awesome work! keep goin'!
what a great voice. clear, expressive, alluring. i like the sounds/melodic bits you introduce here and there for variety. your song has a trance element to it which works well. best of luck in further development. peace. Dan
wow, that is a troubling vocal message! where is that taken from? you know - it is not easy timing the music and the drama of the music to fit around the vocal message. you REALLY get this, and it is powerful. i wish you best of luck in further developing this one. regards. Dan
i like the feeling a lot Dark. i like how you "wash" a sound over the mix here and there. it is very effective. i can really let myself be taken over by this mix. great work. keep going brother.
by 1:05 in you have found your way nicely (IMHO) i think you might look for a different sound in the opening (and for subsequent usage). i like the active quality - the counterpoint of different lines. a lot to work with here. all the best! Dan
i like your mix a lot. the notes when piano first comes in under sax are really neat. kind of non-tonal sound which I like (as you may know!) beautiful sax playing. i assume that is acoustic (if not - I am seriously amazed).
Thanks, Midisparks. Everything is (in a way) artificial. It was all the Fl studio presets. I simply tweaked certain things to give it a more natural sound. I am happy to see you enjoyed this track. Hopefully I'll be able to continue to amaze you. :)
you can always tell the true heavy metal cause the audio pattern is a solid block! LOL. anyway - there is some serious chops going on here, whether you like the wall of sound or not. which I do. keep screamin' brother!!!!
sounds great. can't beat that smooth old school electric piano sound. bass is full of personality. all the solos have great feel. wonderful work. congrats. best regards.
great sound. when the drums came in I thought it was going into a groove, but you had a different idea. when it transforms into that slow-motion section it is an amazing dramatic turn. brilliant playing and concept here. congratulations.
dear Dan , I was glad if U may describe for me ( in email ) more abouT your idea . majoritY of time I've enjoyed your idea abouT various trials of mine & would be glad to know our idea.
thanx alot my friend for your presence , carefull attention & cool commenT .my best wishes.___Behnam
i like your effect in the second section, and how the gentle piano line can be a bit more prominent there. it is an interesting genre - trance. you have a good feel for it I think. i also like your build into final section. nice work!
beautiful sounds and mixes, sir. i like how you changed up the groove towards the end. i needed that. great feeling beginning to end. big congrats on this track, Sea! Dan
beautiful lyrical intro. i am really hearing the rap over this one so I think you have succeeded. introducing classical feeling with strings,extended melodic sections is innovative fresh sounding. the "shouts" remind us we are still in hip-hop land! the dissonance in piano at the end is unexpected bite! nice work.
it's like she is in love and singing to this intense, super sophisticated android or robot who is responding with his crazy cyborg emotions. your sounds, and writing, and mixes are amazing and fascinating. always learning from you brother. keep going! Dan
great feeling. all the vocal mixing is first class - the chorus and the lead (IMHO). I guess you would bring it all down and keep the drums going for the rap? lots of possibilities here. great work. congrats!
beautiful rich string sounds and writing at the opening. really sets a mood of anticipation. the second section is a surprise! the flute almost recalls Native America. beautiful writing Marko!
great blend of sounds - especially the low synths. you create an effective mood of tension, suspense action - cinematic? interesting drum groove and variations. nice work!
it's really neat when a collab flows as this one did. you can feel the positive energy and the natural flow of it. the strings are a nice touch and give it a nice lyrical quality. nice guitar work. always a big fan of bringing the voice up in the mix. always something more to do of course! nice work!
Cheers midisparks glad you enjoyed the vibe. I tried the track with and without the violins and it won hands down with.
Yea I always like the vocals upfront especially if the vocalist is good like darkreine. Glad you like the guitar. I was trying to capture the guy crying over his lost love. Don't know if that worked but it sounded good lol.
sounds great. i hear some "pissed off" or "cussing out" vocals being delivered in this one! great guitar work/overall mix. good start for the day! peace.
Thanks bro, glad you liked it and I appreciate the feedback on the song in general and especially on the mix. I think I have come a long way in the Mixing/Mastering department. Was brand new to the whole recording and mixing thing. Was pretty lousy at it for a while. Seems like I can get a decent mix now. As for vocals, that is all that is missing. I pretty much consider this one done. I will attempt to figure out some vocal melodies for this and maybe write some lyrics but I am no singer. Maybe I will get lucky and someone who can sing will jump in on this. Everything I have done is open for collaboration.
Thanks again.
your sounds are like characters, spiv - full of personality. i read Behnam's comment above - he is right - it conjures some imagery - perhaps some animation. but it also has a hypnotizing quality that is twisted, disturbing. a lot of levels to your stuff - congrats my friend!
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