DanGoldstein

it is an interesting attack effect you use. i like the parallel thing going on between base and the meowing synth. that is what it sounds like to me. there is a lot of variation, a sense of different sections. that keeps the interest for me. sounds great. thoroughly enjoying it!

listening to a girl coming is always a turn on of course. finding music to fit it takes some thought and you did a good job of that. this would be a great track for a porno movie. very imaginative use of sounds. you create a neat, dark-side mood. very compelling. I love it when it is just the girl and the drums. nice break there! nice work!

nice "washing" sound in the opening synth. very smooth, patient transition into your groove. that patience - to allow a natural development, evolution in the track is so important and you seem to get that. great work. look forward to hearing more! peace.

nice orchestration at the beginning and throughout. the string hits are really enhancing all the way through this banger. lovin it! so is that your guitar playin? or you create those riffs in computer? just curious. awesome either way. peace. sounds from the ending that you are moving into a new section. fantastic work. congrats! Dan

you have a good feel for the chill vocal delivery. not everyone gets that. interesting words also. I guess that is your literary/writing interest coming through. it's an interesting track. smart ending! peace.

real powerful stuff. was pretty in a trance with it. you have a lot of talent. keep going!

happy stuff. very nice mix. sounds great. like the synth sounds. peace.

i like the "stutter" technique. it creates a kind of tension, an uncertainty. there is a good tension and contrast between the straight ahead string melody and this tripping beat. okay - now that tripping beat is done for a bit. some piano comes in - nice - a counterpoint. back to the beat now! around 2:35 or so it seems you are starting to develop something different with the strings. this might be the point, if you choose, to wander away from the groove and develop another section, then come back. but it is wonderful as is. thoroughly enjoyed. peace

never heard the original but everything on this mix is beautifully balanced. the synths are warm and the violin line really enhances with a counterpoint on top of the mix. it's a nice concept. i'm about 2:58 in now. i like how you take the mix down here for a little bit - some transperency - some breath. very rich beautiful sounds. nice mellow licks. thoroughly enjoying it! crazy piano lick at the end! congrats to both of y'all!

awesome guitar playing - full of rage! great technique. yes - some silence for a second. very important. very good. and again. a good composer is a master of silence! when the bottom drops out and you keep going on the guitar is powerful. great instrument choices for this hardass rock track. great mix. nice work. peace.

hey Behnam! it was really cool to hear the addition of vocal to this track which I remember. yes - her voice is beautiful - and the mix is fantastic. nice work. really enjoy it. peace.

i like the scale a lot. what are your notes? you have a great feel for playing off of those drum loops. and yea - they are smokin'. you really have a feel for a good grunge mix. keep goin' man! peace.

that is a great bass sound that cuts so well through the synth chords. you write with great intensity and you keep it up! maybe just a bit of EQ on those high notes! nice work! peace.

Piero, it's a gorgeous mix, and full of joy. and of course, Ms. Patricia always delivers a passionate vocal. for my taste, I would compress just a bit the instrumental to allow her voice a bit more headroom. that's fine tuning and my little preference. this is a great sound! big respect. happy holidays also!! Dan

the everlasting is the change. yea - for sure. the one thing that stays the same. but ironically, in your track, you create something unchanging (sort of). it is a terrific hypnotizing experience. it is a meditation. glad you recorded it and glad I listened thru. thanks, man. peace. (love, and money!) Dan

in my old school way of describing stuff - I call this an "exquisite" ambience. it is very subtle, the mood, the use of sound, the mix. it is a refreshing, open feeling - interrupted by the hard panned vocal "hits". these seem to say - hey, there is a guy, an artist struggling behind the scenes. and now the vocal asserts more - becomes a part of the groove for a few seconds.
i really respect that you just hold to the mood you establish, find creative ways to add color, variation. I would call this "hip hop ambient!" you just invented a new sub-genre! LOL! big congrats! nice work! Dan

LOL! big sound! I know it's gonna be a thick sound when the audio form is a solid rectangle! but really it is a great mix also! i love the build with drums/percussion at the end. that's like taking off on a space ship - boom! you've got a great start on this one. what are your plans with it?

it's cool to hear your voice (and the English accent!LOL). but really a beautiful delivery, Kerry. the piano playing is very smooth and the mix is all just right. beautiful job. peace.

your use of clapping as a unifying factor is very effective. i am not an expert at classifying the tracks. my guess would be "lounge". you develop a lot of interesting groups - lots of interesting sounds and mixes. look forward to hearing the kinds of melodic material you might layer on here and there. perhaps you will decide to limit yourself somewhat to a few of the great ideas you have in this track. there is a lot here to work with! good work and good luck bringing it further along! Dan

crystal clear vocal mixing IMHO. that is such rich electric guitar sound. it's amazing how much a nice piano adds. great song and great work. hats off!

your drum work is really interesting. i love the super clear bass that finds its way around the sound field. all the sounds are very spacy, beautifully crafted. mixing is fantastic. really this is first class stuff IMHO that transports me to a different world. just sad that it ended too soon. best of luck with your release december 1. peace.

the "chorus" is really beautiful. i like the sound of the voice. neat effect on it. lost in a dream yet existing in a world of fantasy. i like the electric guitar touches. they are perfect. the piano soloing at the end really winds it down smoothly. you were working the end beautifully. did you purposely cut it hard off like that?!

i have rarely heard such a beautifully integrated vocal. not only can I hear the words perfectly but tonally (color), it is such a beautiful mix. hats off on that. it is very smart taking it all down around 2:50 in to just voice and a beat. just a great song. all the power. this pup is getting shared big time!

rich beautifully mixed sound. super epic feel. i particularly like your use of various bells. lots of interesting elements. perhaps you could EQ a bit here and there as you go along to let the various new elements shine. great work!

just thought I would listen to one more to get a better feel for your stuff. it is very poetic in the rap. "when you become the key all the doors'll let you in?" (somethin like that). in the day - (in the white day) it was Crosby Stills and Nash sayin' "but you must learn to turn the key before she'll let you in") you are a great artist. beautiful hypnotic track. all the power and much success.