BrokenScythe

Alright Dalis time to give this thing a review finally! Sorry Ive been crazy busy with college :/

Everyone I show this to really digs it! You get down, your flow is on point, the lyrics are deep and have a melodramatic feel to em. You fit the beat really well. If I kept going Id just sound biased haha.
Dalis, i love this collab, and if you want to do it again on any of my tracks...id love it as well. You have a lot of talent, both as a rapper and producer. Hit me up whenever you want someone to check out a track, Id be glad to, for real.
Peace n keep grinding

This was chill, I like what you did with the synths as usual haha. Its def meant for a rapper to just flow right over. Great perc work, very fluid. This is chill, not my fav of yours but hey, when it comes to you thats still means this track is bomb Becca haha.

Alright enough love back for you! I got other Loop homies to repp haha. Im just playing Becca, Ive enjoyed what Ive listened to tonight. I think you are VERY talented and man...just keep grinding Becca. If you ever want me to check out a track just let me know whatsup, especially if its on your twinkle side of music haha.

Very chilled back, I remembe the homie Yesh showing me this, you get so down on the piano Becca. were you taught?
Great track, the beep synth could be a bit lowered, its kind of overpowering you know? Other than that this is chill, would like to hear a bit more perc work maybe? the beeps in the background sub for HHs well though.
Good work Becca, keep on grinding!

Niiiiice atmosphere! Really takes you over, great SFX, it jumps into something different than I expected though haha, but when that piano comes in Im realizing Im at home with it.(comfortable) Those synths are very powerful. Really full, it switches around nicely, like tha second distraught mel followed by the third, this sounds almost like a mix lol. So much going on, never a dull moment here haha. gahhh your breaks are very nice. Damn this thing MOVES, its like telling me "na na na, you cant stay here any more, we're leaving to the next idea NOW" haha.
Love it, its different and grabs you.

Thoughtful, first word that dropped in my mind. then the word progressive, like move forward and tough things out. I like how the piano feels so natural, really rings out. Many would say its off...I dont agree. Its where it belongs, you made that improvisionally, I can hear it. Really like this Becca, solid work.

Wow...you are a master of twinkle and soothe. haha Im man enough to say this is cuddle with my lady at midnight music. God...great chime breakdown. So much feeling, Im telling you your sound just cries right out at me. Like its jumping out of the track and into my soul.
Im not even being nice or flattering,trust me on that, its very great music. You deserve every compliment.
Bravo, amazing work. Faved this too

Very chilling, has a sorrowful yet hopeful aura about it, the strings...man they lay on so nicely. Love your rhodes work, really do. A lot of feeling in this, really cries out. Those twinkle touches are very nice. Niiiice wave SFX at the end. I enjoyed this, faved Becca, eagerly faved =)

Haha! Yeah man! O my dude, I just discovered another Loop talent. Like that distant xylo sound you have going on, this is very chill, Niiiice synth, good use of LFO. Like that reggae feel, fits this harmony nicely. Has a carnival feel to it too haha. Joyful and relaxed....floats on man, I dig it a lot. Faving this.
ooo man, then he hits me with the strings haha.
Great work, sounds very natural too btw.
Keep grinding brother

Movie track, insta movie track, just awesome. Im feeling this vibe. Faved man, faved. Very relaxedd. Really feeling it, just perfect for chilling, doing HW or art...whatever floats the day along. I actually think it should stay where its at...minimal and clean, its like listening to ambient music, just not as sporadic or swung.

Just clean that ending brother and you are in the excellence zone. Im thoroughly impressed.

This just inspired me...a lot. Im going to take a stab at making something so...peaceful.

Great work Thanx, truly, great work.

Wow this is dope! ahh damn I have to run to class e bDalis but ill back to really give this the rev it deserves :)
You did a GREAT job though! big ups to you Dalis L=

Be back later

Yeah this is really chill Thanx, I like how you handled that perc, I think its a bit sluggy at times, but it grooves along. Its really constant, but I dig those little oreintal touches alot.
Whoaaa now it steps up haha, gets moving. Im liking this L:
Yeah this is fresh, I think it could have maybe moved up to this a bit quicker, like 4 or 8 bars quicker possibly.
But yeah that perc is fun, very rhythmic, nice concise ending.
Enjoyed it :)
Im assuming youll continue this adventure of refining this track lol, quite the evolutional project.

Yeah this has that OG flavor for SURE. Im digging this vibe Yesh, nice piano/twinkle touches, the snare is a little off to me? It blares a little you know? and HHs! I like how it has a different feel to it.
As alWaYz you murder those strings, damnit Yesh! lol
I really dig this bro, but FINISH it! lol
Sat we hitting it hard, for sure.
Great work fam L=

This is a bit low, buuut I do dig the chill vibe to it, it has a haunting quality to it. I LOVE that synth you brought in! Nice break in, very spooky btw, and the mel is sounding very natural :D
I like that panned wind synth, blowing left right left right, and the way you add just a tad of saw to the synth work is nice, i think that tiny break down you had before the jump back into the main Bass n Beat was kind of low, but then again it maintained the haunt, Im digging this rise backk into the track! yehh, Im feeling this, very improvisional! Flows, and its fun to listen to. Hmm I heard a bit of a clash right at the end between the perc n the synths, and I felt cut off! lol
great track though, youre very unique Aelfo, and i like your sound.
good work, well constructed.

This is very unique has a nice vibe, very exotic sounding, and then it bursts into the real deal :D
Like that lava type sound coming out of this, very night like, has a dark feeling you know? I like that hint of vox as well, there's a lot of subtlety in this! little melodic touches that really make it stand out, and that lava mel returns! :D
Very catchy, has a great bounce to it. Its different but not in a bad way, its an adventure of sound, something fresh while still maintaining that jump of what is a catchy dance track.
Dig it, and I enjoyed it L=

O yeah, insta Fav. Thez has such a good flow, and Yesh, as usual, your beat is well deserving of such great lyricism. Thez has such DEPTH, my ears n mind soak it all up. Its just so chill dog, so chill and fluid.
Haha, its a Yeshtrimental, nice :P

Great collab fam, great collab.

Let me say this first, I think I like this version as much as I like the original, if it just had a fewww tweaks.
Lower the guitar, EQ it a deal, it blares out at times ya know? Also, an acoustic breakdown would be GREAT! and I really like the synthwork, make it stand a bit more! as well as the perc!
This has potential, really does. I like it, good solid cover. look forward to a new vers. L=

Yeah bro! feeling this! so much soul! smoooooth riding, reminds me of Old School tracks, you know on that Marvin Gaye tip. Loving it man, youre on fire dog.
your getting vox on this? female hook sung, love verses fo SHO
Classic man, really good.
Keep grinding!

yo fam, Ive listened to a few of your tracks before and never got around to dropping a review(i wasnt on my account)
You guys really are a great team, J1 your production has a lot of soul, and Tre P your lyricism and flow fits it really well. Really though, you guys are making some real, true Hip Hop. Im digging every sound.
This track is great, felt just a little short but maybe just cuz I wish it was a verse longer.(great track)
Keep grinding fam, J1 youre another inspiration that Ive found here on the Loop.
Peace to you n yours

Yeah this really bounces, has that smooth feel to it. Really nice! I dig it a lot! Like that hook synthwork with that slight choir touch, nice panning on that snare roll before the change up, yeah Im feeling this a lot actually.
Its dark with a night vibe, which I always dig, Im liking that you change it up after the hooks each time, keeps it interesting. thing is, I feel that the 3rd phrase was a bar short? not sure but it felt like it would give a vocalist too little space to finish the track up. Just one bar lol.
Great track, a great days work! props.
O and Im guessing youre new? Welcome to the loop, youre going to really dig it here L=

Haha very interesting little start, that really paced up! Its very different and silly indeed BUT its fun and moves lol
Nice little tidbit here, Im sure it made her smile haha
either that or say "uhh dad...youre weird 0.0" lol
Only kidding, nice little track, maybe extend it a bit? I felt like I got cut short lol

Yeah this has an awesome Egyptian type movement to it! Very Ethnic indeed, reminds me of Arabia for some reason. I Really dig this! great use of strings to give it flavor, and that flute worked well. Sounds very professional, and Im very sure you could have this in a movie, James Bond/Indiana Jones adventure type film.
Really great work, I enjoyed this!

Wow, this is very soothing. Nice syrupy vocals, great use of transitioning from mono- to homo-phonic, really works and gives the track a flow, and relaxed feel.
Guitar is very good,has a lot of heart in it.
I like how you brought in that small synth touch as well.
Then it picks up :D very nice, gets upbeat and fast paced.
Very great track! I enjoyed listening to it. L=

I feel this! Rizzo killed on the beat, the vox is tight but yo, Im not sure if its intended..but the rap vox and the hook screeches out to blaringly you know? I like it but...wait now hearing the second verse, its actually only the 1st verse that blares too much with FX, drop it a bit, the hook drop a bit more, but the rest is very sick as is. Has that dark, broken feel to it.

Great collab, for real, all you keep on grinding.

Whoa Lucky! my bro, I dig this a lot! spoken word or rap, who cares this thing is so perfect for a interlude type track bro. Hold this for when you drop a mix tape or something, because its got a great message.

Excellent track, different and has heart.
Telling you bro, its only a matter of time for you, time and inevitable practice.

Haha dude, this is a nice cold and noble type track. Has a sense of a regal knight, just asking for someone to go hard on it. Reminds me of a Jedi Mind type track, something Vinnie P could slaughter over you know?

Damn bro, seriously, cant wait to see this finished as well.
Hopefully sunday we can see if we can take it somewhere.
(check my rep to your rev on Winter Ice Feat LuckyFeather)