The more I use GarageBand I realize how great it is. And this track is evidence enough it really sounds well. I also like the sound of your (?) voice.
Anyway, one think you might consider applying is the AUMulibandCompressor (not the standard compression) effect under the edit tab to even out some of the volume differences in the vocals. It works miracles and I use it quite frequently, vocals just sounds better with it on.
/pmk
Hey man! I like these raw guitars, even if I think the guitars are a bit to much off in the tuning.
Besides that, this reminds me of Niel Young, one of my all time favorites. The vocals works fine, a I lika that nice touch with the strings in the end. Good work!
Cheers
/pmk
Yeah Kikajon,I think too that guitars are out off tune,but I dont have the nerve to play all again.I was in the mood to express that energy and not had enough concentration and will to polish all the details.One day maybe I finish it and correct all the errors.Thank you for you time,and of course your comparison with Niel Young who is also one off my all time favorites...
Hi, I'm listening on my laptop and the mix feels a bit uneven, or unbalanced. There's something about the drums, I'm not sure. An other go in the mix might do the trick.
Having said that … I really like this song, the voice and the guitar solo is fierce. I think the chorus is great.
Keep it up.
/pmk
I agree completely with your observation. Thats me singing and I don't consider myself a singer. The drums are off I know. As far as the solo goes its Real Strat and Guitar Rig 2 and my Korg M3
Nice, soft track and a great vocals performance. If I could make a suggestion; check the gain settings on the vocals, now it sounds like you're in the red. Maybe try a little compression too.
Having said that, I like your voice. Keep it up!
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and I welcome your inputs. Had great recordingproblems, all solved with a new microphone. I learn more about the software everyday. Yeah, I should do a new recordning... just a little lazy ;)
Hi Emann
Some really good guitar work here, nice chord progression and vocals.
If I may make some suggestions: less reverb effects on the vocals and some of the guitars – it's hard to separate the sounds and it gives an untight feeling. A bit more work on the production would make this song great.
Cheers
/pmk
Update: This second time around it sounds better and I like the lead guitar sound, Les Paul?. Keep it up.
Thanks for the possitive advice. No axcuse, but time always seems te an issue. Lately I've been rushed 'to just get the song finished,' and have permitted things that could have been improved, Maybe I'll edit this and clean it up a bit.
Perfect title for the song, sounds lika a marching tune for some serious head to head battle. Great piece, thrilling and great sound. Well done, keep it up.
/pmk
Hay Allen. Very sweet playing – there seems to be no limits to your skills. I like this very much, it shows a totally different style than what we do together – and you shine here too. Professional is the word.
/pmk
Thanks Kikajon,I'm afraid I'm showing my age and the fact that I've played covers for 30yrs...lol.
I appreciate the complement and I guess the bottom line is it doesn't matter how you get there as long as you do.I would like to say that I pursued all these different genres but they came to me and it has proven to be an advantage now in collaborating.
Thanks again.
Sweet track, love the guitar sound and the laidback drums (That beat is one of my favourites in GarageBand). The only thing about this track is that it feels a little short…
Great job.
/pmk
That beat is one of my favorites too ... but it is the first time use. I made a small modification, and was very good. Posted on LM to receive some criticism and suggestions, and I was glad you enjoyed . I'm trying to finish this track soon, and I believe the final version had been good. Thank you my friend .... VlaRB ..
Thanks Kikajon! I have some major work to do on completing this one. I haven't decided what direction to take the rest of the song yet. It may also be a while before I can complete it due to having to go to work and attending college classes at the same time. But, I should find the time to get it done sometime in the next two months. Thanks for fav-ing man!
Sweet track, nice arrangement. I like your voice and I think you use it nicely but I'd like it more in the center, the pan is a bit to far out to one side. A small matter, it's a great song.
Keep'em coming
/pmk
p.s. Jag såg att du är ganska ny på sajten,
Välkommen till Looperman.
Thank you. We love making up and recording a song a week. I am listening to some of your tracks and you are amazing. So, getting a compliment coming from you....I am the lucky one for sure.
Great song and what can I say but: excellent!
Man, you shine and you're one of my favourite singers and the one of the best here at looper. period.
/pmk
I dig your voice and the tune is pretty good. I think it could gain a much with a sharper production: a new mix, better balanced volumes etc.
keep 'em coming.
/pmk
Thank you very much for you review, thats what I was thinking Id need to improve my production and sound quality, you know those volumes really take time, but Ill try, theres no excuses
on Forward March by lilyn
Anyway, one think you might consider applying is the AUMulibandCompressor (not the standard compression) effect under the edit tab to even out some of the volume differences in the vocals. It works miracles and I use it quite frequently, vocals just sounds better with it on.
/pmk
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this piece was indeed very inspiring for me too ... ;-)
peace, rei
on Dying Time by MADVICKO
Besides that, this reminds me of Niel Young, one of my all time favorites. The vocals works fine, a I lika that nice touch with the strings in the end. Good work!
Cheers
/pmk
on Badass by SpyderX
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Yeah, I've been concentrating lately on getting mean guitar sounds and "catchy" riffs. Glad you liked it, bro.
Peace,
Mike
on Lagrima by ramsbottom
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on Paradise by bbelle
Having said that … I really like this song, the voice and the guitar solo is fierce. I think the chorus is great.
Keep it up.
/pmk
on Kodoku Collaboration with Koukotsu by jfw
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on The Heat And Me by BrianMaiden407
I totally dig that oriental touch and that wailing sound... A really great track. Excellent production.
A definitive fav!
/pmk
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Having said that, I like your voice. Keep it up!
hälsar
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on Steal Away by Emann
Some really good guitar work here, nice chord progression and vocals.
If I may make some suggestions: less reverb effects on the vocals and some of the guitars – it's hard to separate the sounds and it gives an untight feeling. A bit more work on the production would make this song great.
Cheers
/pmk
Update: This second time around it sounds better and I like the lead guitar sound, Les Paul?. Keep it up.
on Night Of Champions (David Robineaux Edit) by geussepe
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on Love Us FEAT Louise Van Veenendal by CalifKen
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on Time For Change - SpellJammer Collab by AllenV
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I appreciate the complement and I guess the bottom line is it doesn't matter how you get there as long as you do.I would like to say that I pursued all these different genres but they came to me and it has proven to be an advantage now in collaborating.
Thanks again.
Allen
on theFlight by VlaRB
Great job.
/pmk
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on do you still love me 2nd version by josephine
Keep'em coming
/pmk
p.s. Jag såg att du är ganska ny på sajten,
Välkommen till Looperman.
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p.s. Welcome to Looperman.
on Dead Flowers Cover 2010 by gastler
Cheers
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on HEY HELLO HAPPY TO FIND YOU by Silvestre
It's a fav.
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on We Only Know Whats Wrong by Tacatta
Man, you shine and you're one of my favourite singers and the one of the best here at looper. period.
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on IM a PD by Jolita
keep 'em coming.
/pmk