I've never heard the original version but I certainly think this version is quite good Donnie! I thought the vocal track was cool. I don't think the effects were overdone at all, overall a really cool mix! Well done mate!
Yeah, I def agree. In the email that I tried to shoot TCM when I updated this I said the same thing about the vox. And oddly enough, effects are what helped smooth out the bass I added for this. Glad ya dug it. Later on!
This has a cool 60's vibe going on, been getting into the organ sounds a little more myself so I was really diggin this! Hope you can find the right vocals for it!
Stay Gone, I like the phrase, good theme for a song. Nice collab with all involved. I'm not a big hip hop fan but I liked this, cool vocals all around, interesting music too. Thanks for sharing your music CarmenAlegeria!
I like this, I hope you add some backing harmonies on the update and maybe some latin style guitar to add some spice! Good luck finishing it up and look forward to hearing it complete!
Great job putting this together, the music and vocals are a nice fit. I like the concept, a woman proposing to her man, that's great! Sweet voice, in time you'll upgrade gear and we will hear the full potential you possess!!
Thanks for the thumbs up.I made it with samples that I downloaded here at looperman. I also put together a cool military video to it on youtube. it's under Destruction.
Catchy track, liked the vocals a lot, I'm assuming you are remixing this(with the comments you recieved so far)but the idea is cool. Nice job with this one!
I like the feel of this track, maybe because of the acoustic guitar in it or just the melencholic tone of it but I think this is a real nice piece!
I feel people should focus more on their intent for giving rather than the lack of appreciation from others. Why focus on the negetive when the positive creates happiness rather than misery? And seeing as you can't control what others do or how they react, what is the point of feeling unappreciated. I think it's the wrong way to look at it. :)
Thanks for your review, yes i produced this track using my own experiences in life, and recently observing Minor2Go. I felt that he reminds me a little of myself, giving to help, but not receiving thanks for the effort. I agree with you, giving rather than lack of appreciation from others is a negative feeling. But sometimes, you do feel a little disappointed when this happens to you so many times, makes you wonder if people really don't care anymore.
I think vocals would work on this as well, there has to be an a capella here that would work. Interesting track, nice blend of sounds! Good job billion!
Good to hear from you. I'm glad you liked it. Within the energy of the words I wanted to make the voice was soft. I am very happy that you will have seemed fine.
Cool track I liked it! I would keep working on the mix, in my humble opinion. I would like to hear more seperation in the tracks and maybe a little more movement with the sounds in the stereo field. Things sounded a bit too centered in my headphones. I think it's possible for you to get a fuller mix, is what I'm sayin'.
I do like the idea, don't get wrong, the guitars are cool and the drums smoke! Nice collab!
Hey thanks for the crit man... I hear ya loud and clear. Been dually noted and I will get this fuller sounding soon. I'm also still waiting for more guitar from ALivid. If he sends me some more I'm gonna add some more sounds and tweak out the drums a bit. Then I will remaster this and repost... I appreciate the honest review man...
Thanks mate. Yeah, I've been thinking that too (for a while now actually). Though I left it alone for the most part because I'd really love to hear what other people would do with it, ya know. Speaking of which, lemme know if you do, cool? Glad ya dug it. Later on!
Hey, how ya been, figured I woud swing by and listen in. Hope you find yourself well these days.
This has a nice soothing feel to it. I liked the star treck reference in the last comment, ya, the beginning had that going, haha!! It seemed like when it stopped, you were beginning to go in a different direction with it. Do you plan on finishing it?
If you don't, it's no big deal but I did like what you put together so far.
Hey there Wayne,
Mega problems here, i.e computer crash, more surgery (i'm good - just rebuilding the nose is all ), new security program that forbids my music program to run... or as other people call it - Tuesday...LOL
I was thinking of getting Sony Garage Band - i think that is what it's called. I neeed something new ( and relatively cheap ). I feel the need to create again but anything I try sounds like 3 day old squirrel poop - if it could make a sound.
Oh yes, about that track. I started doing it and I said "dang, that sounds familiar, I wonder where it's from ?" When I received the first review that suggested the Trek ref, I said oh bugger !
The keys and guitar were pretty cool and really sold me, kinda 70's rhythm and blues. Great job with the vocals, thought the mix was tight, maybe center the keys more, my only suggestion. Well done!
I wasn't expecting the vocals to pop up but they were nice! Great build up of the song. The mix was nice and it put me in a better mood after listening.
Excellent collab, three artists I admire on this site putting a great track together. This is sweet guys, love the drums, guitars, vocals, ummm, I love everything about this!!!! Kudos to you all!
Glad I'm the first to review this. Pretty song, delicate, stirring, cinematic. Always a pleasure to hear your tunes, glad to see you posting again, things must be better!!
Nice melodies running amuck!! Great collab again with you two! I know what you mean about adding guitar. Sometimes I take the main melodies and use them up with bass, guitar and mando and now synth tracks until there is no room for a vocal track. It is officialy an instrumental at that point, haha!!
Hey Wayne!Thanks for listening to the song and you know what i'm talkin' about...you can only wait so long...lol..and it's not even my song!At least in SpellJammers case,he still has these songs separate also so if someone wanted to sing,there's still room and I could go back and just add a little lead.I'm afraid some of my own songs are too far gone in the instrumental world...lol.I haven't had vocals so everything I do,the guitar becomes them.A few songs posted I forgot to save the project so I would have to redo the whole song if someone wanted to add anything and I would of course.
Thanks again Wayne!
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Ableton is amazing, I'm so impressed with all the tracks people produce with it, this one is no exception.
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And you are right, you can do a lot with ableton in so many ways.
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I feel people should focus more on their intent for giving rather than the lack of appreciation from others. Why focus on the negetive when the positive creates happiness rather than misery? And seeing as you can't control what others do or how they react, what is the point of feeling unappreciated. I think it's the wrong way to look at it. :)
I digress, cool track!!!
Wayne
Thanks for your kind words...
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I do like the idea, don't get wrong, the guitars are cool and the drums smoke! Nice collab!
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This has a nice soothing feel to it. I liked the star treck reference in the last comment, ya, the beginning had that going, haha!! It seemed like when it stopped, you were beginning to go in a different direction with it. Do you plan on finishing it?
If you don't, it's no big deal but I did like what you put together so far.
Take care,
Wayne
Mega problems here, i.e computer crash, more surgery (i'm good - just rebuilding the nose is all ), new security program that forbids my music program to run... or as other people call it - Tuesday...LOL
I was thinking of getting Sony Garage Band - i think that is what it's called. I neeed something new ( and relatively cheap ). I feel the need to create again but anything I try sounds like 3 day old squirrel poop - if it could make a sound.
Oh yes, about that track. I started doing it and I said "dang, that sounds familiar, I wonder where it's from ?" When I received the first review that suggested the Trek ref, I said oh bugger !
Later dude. Thank you for keeping in touch.
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Glad I'm the first to review this. Pretty song, delicate, stirring, cinematic. Always a pleasure to hear your tunes, glad to see you posting again, things must be better!!
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Nice job Allen, the song smokes!
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Thanks again Wayne!
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