The keys and guitar were pretty cool and really sold me, kinda 70's rhythm and blues. Great job with the vocals, thought the mix was tight, maybe center the keys more, my only suggestion. Well done!
I wasn't expecting the vocals to pop up but they were nice! Great build up of the song. The mix was nice and it put me in a better mood after listening.
Excellent collab, three artists I admire on this site putting a great track together. This is sweet guys, love the drums, guitars, vocals, ummm, I love everything about this!!!! Kudos to you all!
Glad I'm the first to review this. Pretty song, delicate, stirring, cinematic. Always a pleasure to hear your tunes, glad to see you posting again, things must be better!!
Nice melodies running amuck!! Great collab again with you two! I know what you mean about adding guitar. Sometimes I take the main melodies and use them up with bass, guitar and mando and now synth tracks until there is no room for a vocal track. It is officialy an instrumental at that point, haha!!
Hey Wayne!Thanks for listening to the song and you know what i'm talkin' about...you can only wait so long...lol..and it's not even my song!At least in SpellJammers case,he still has these songs separate also so if someone wanted to sing,there's still room and I could go back and just add a little lead.I'm afraid some of my own songs are too far gone in the instrumental world...lol.I haven't had vocals so everything I do,the guitar becomes them.A few songs posted I forgot to save the project so I would have to redo the whole song if someone wanted to add anything and I would of course.
Thanks again Wayne!
This has a nice easy approach to it and I like it! The tone on the guitar is sweet, especially the lead. I would turn the keys up a little bit. I felt they were lost in the mix and didn't stand out enough. Another cool track PM!
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
I'll check out the keys and see what I can do, I'm not totally satisfied with their sound and that's maybe why I kept the more in the background. Thanks for the feedback.
/pmk
Great track, awesome collab. Loved the music for sure but the vocals were such the standout in this track, sounded a bit like Cat Stevens. I will dl this and fav it cuz it's a wonderful track!!
Always value your opinion man. Chris does do a nice job with his vocals and mix. You guys are right.......a little like Cat Stevens. Take care Wayne and thanks for your listen and review.
Gord
I'm surprised I am the first reviewer cuz I thought this was pretty cool, especialy the guitar in the intro. I like the bass and the overall feel to it, an ethnic feel in a way.
I like the way the keys interact with the drumming, there is a nice play between the two. This has a nice bouncy, pop feel going for it. The horns you used sounded great as well. Nice track Vicen!!
It's a nice music in my ears (your words, I want to say). I'm glad you enjoyed it. If I could use horn section on every song ... but sometimes I think the songs are created by themselves, because the tools it needs the song, calls the song itself.
Very cool production, big ups for this being done in a real studio, hearing how electronic music is produced nowadays, I wouldn't have guessed it. Interesting sounds, liked how you snuk in the vocals in there. I could hear this in a sci-fi movie, great job!
thanx my friend, this 1 was a labour of love. i have been mainly in the d.a.w. world the last few years but im going to combine my hardware as a 1 side of my recording chain when i get my new mac and logic in the near future, mainly because im starting to miss it. thanx for listening have plenty more epics of different natures at my home page come past anytime and ill be sure to do like wise...........!1X1!........
Hey, great track wannafunk! Excellent job setting a mood for spending time with that special someone! I went to your profile page and noticed you were born one day after me!!haha Nice job with the mix!
Are you playing bass in this? If so great job! The horns were cool and you played some really nice licks on the guitar. The intro was fun! Nice chilled out piece of muic Jamie.
Got my lighter raised in the air and if I had long hair I'd be swinging it around in circles. haha!! Sound like you are having fun creating these metal tracks. The older(ahem)generation on this site rock, kids these days can't keep up with us!! haha Great track Spyder!
Yeah, you're right, Wayne: Metal was always my first love, and I'm havin' a blast gettin' back into it. I'm also workin' on some lighter stuff as well though. I really do like all genres of music. And I just got a new guitar emulator I want to play with for a couple of days ~ maybe it'll be a good one for Metal\Rock.
Thanks, as always, for listening and reviewing, bro.
Nice to have a touch of Jessica's music still ringing through the halls of looperman. This is real smooth and very well put together. Thanks for posting this Jamie!
Pretty good guitar sounds for vsti's(I read your last reply)! I would like to hear a fatter kick in there, just my preference. This really rocked, heavy guitar, very cool!!!!
Sounds like Kid Rock a bit!! Doesn't sound that bad for a live recording. A little more production is needed but the idea is there. You just need to project your voice a bit, gain a little confidence, your voice isn't too bad. Look forward to hearing it done!
Thanks! Ill work on "projecting my voice" more. I can do it fine when I'm rapping, and honestly I think I even sing more on key then too... which makes me think you're dead on about the confidence thing. I'll be sure to let you know when it's done! Thanks for the review!
Dude, whaaaa? Where did this come from? haha This is well done! You got something working here, keep this positive flow going. I like the music track as well. Nice collab!
well this is from a vocal track i made and i got a buddy who likes my style so he mixed in some music, so he did all the work. i simply wrote a song and spit it and he master'd it and produced it thanks for the listen my man.. go with peace man and for the kind words haha
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Glad I'm the first to review this. Pretty song, delicate, stirring, cinematic. Always a pleasure to hear your tunes, glad to see you posting again, things must be better!!
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I'll check out the keys and see what I can do, I'm not totally satisfied with their sound and that's maybe why I kept the more in the background. Thanks for the feedback.
/pmk
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Pretty good guitar sounds for vsti's(I read your last reply)! I would like to hear a fatter kick in there, just my preference. This really rocked, heavy guitar, very cool!!!!
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Thanks for the listen and review, Wayne. I do appreciate it, bro.
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