The idea is solid and I agree with Terry, needs a few things like Eddied Vedder vocals, snappy drums and a deep bass. That's all, lol. Great bones to a song!
Nice solemn track Michel. The vox are nice, professional sounding. Trying to make a comparison to the vocal track, reminds me of a few singers but not one in particular. I guess that's a good thing.
At first I was wondering how dubstep was the genre as it started out as a fine piece of cinematic/orchestral music. As the song progressed I saw how you developed some dynamics by adding some of those dubstep elements, some subtle but effective to build the track up and create an interesting piece. Liked how you ended it as well, nice track!
I like the mix, nothing's overpowering anything else and I can hear all the elements of the track. Cool vocals, I like the reverb/delay? on it. Well done!
Happy birthday! Is that kick drum your heart passionately beating? ;) Nice track, there is a cinematic feel to it, a longing sort of feeling. I hope you can find a singer to serenade your ex.
btw, I still keep in touch with my first serious girlfriend from high school. Still friends, just texted her some pics from high school I found the other day. Good times, precious memories. Hold onto yours and enjoy them.
To me, the thing with singing is to be original, to find where you feel comfortable singing and just go for it. Your wife will do much better and feel more confident once the first album is out. :)
I like the atmosphere, smokey bar, dimmed lights, dark, dangerous... Did you say verbal pollen? lol, great lyric! I like the change through the middle, breaks it up a bit. A woman's vocal just going off in the background would sound nice like on Pink Floyd's album Dark Side of the Moon, the Great Gig In the Sky.
Although this isn't my usual listening genre, i feel the track is put together very well, kinda pop sensibilities mixed with some electronic sounds and the mix isn't crushed with compression. Actually, I think some more compression could be done to the individual tracks to even some things out some more. Vocals are pretty cool too. Gave it a few listens, catchy for sure!
Cool! Made me smile from the get go. Sure, that genre sums it up. Sounds like the gang showed up for an ultra jam and had fun. Don't get much musical diversity here so this is soooo welcomed. There was a guy here named jfw who did a lot of Steely Dan styled jazz and some interesting music. A lot to absorb, gave it a couple listens, fun!
Hey Richie, been a while, good to see you! I like the song, good pop song, calming. I like her vocals, soulful. Kinda reminds me of some of Paul Weller's material from a few years ago.
Hi Wayne. Nice to see a familiar face. Yes it's been a while but it's great to be back. Thanks for the comments. Much appreciated. Hope you are well. Keep safe.
A little P Funk groove, very upbeat, fun! So many cool things here, I liked the vocal? treatment at about 1:50, sound like you manipulated some vox there. Nice mix too!
Cool track! I agree with Patricia, the mix puts you in a live venue. Man can she sing. The music works so well with her singing too. Well done to both of you!
Nice chord changes first of all. Nice vocal track, as usual. I do especially like the change at the end, picking it up the with the horns gives a nice lift to the track, well done!
What a nice song Patricia! I like songs that have vocal phrasings like yeah, yeah, yeah's, ooo la la's, and like you did here. Songs with these types of lyrical hooks commonly get quite popular as far as the billboard charts go. Who doesn't like to sing along to songs with these hooks in them?
Hey there Wayne.
I'm sorry, sometimes I do not do very well keeping up with all the comments. :-(
I think I have decided, between last year and this year,
that pop is a very "corny" genre with "corny" lyrical gymnastics and shenanigans, the more "corny" the more catchy. Lol
My grandchildren have adopted this one. lol
We tell ourselves it's "corny" and we hate it,
but find ourselves humming or singing it.
If any of that makes sense! Haha
Thank you Wayne! :-)
I like the deep bass, the snap of the snare and the overall feel of the music. Reminds me of acid jazz, Mushroom Jazz cd's. The vox sit in there nicely, the delivery and cadence are a cool opposition to the music, one is in your face and rigid while the other is laidback and a bit trippy. I used to listen to this styled music while watercolor painting, put a cd in and hit repeat, it really helped me focus on the painting.
You do a fine job with the mixing Patricia! The music is cool and open for vocals but having a great lead vocal plus background singing too always adds so much to an instrumental. Lyrics are catchy and the music has some catchy bits as well. Well done to both of you on the collab!
Sorry for being late to the party, I threw my back out and was out of commission for about a week. The piece gives me the feeling of a passage of time, indecision and uncertainty. Nice sounds, cool effects and a neat idea!
Has some nice acoustic and percussion sounds that I personally think go very well with the vocal approach and mixing. Not complicated, open, wide mix and it will appeal across many genres with how it's produced.
Hey Patricia, good to see ya! I love everything about this, the music is interesting, soothing and the sax is splendid and the piano is perfect! I've always enjoyed your vocals and the harmonies are soooo good! Such a wonderful collab!
Cool track, the singing reminds me a bit of the band Roxette. I like the drums popping out in the mix, impactful. I think the vox could come up a smidge but the idea is solid and catchy.
You're right about the power of Lauren's voice, but there are 2 "snags" on her recording which forced me to lower her track a bit to avoid being noticed too much !! with more time (and courage) I could have done it, but hey it's a draft and at the price I am paid, it's already not so bad (smile)!
Michel
I love the simplicity in music. We don't usually hear autoharp much so it's certainly welcomed. You voice works well with the feeling and mood of the song and the words are meaningful and strong. Real. Honest. Music.
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Cheers!
Wayne
tanks again !
Michel
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btw, I still keep in touch with my first serious girlfriend from high school. Still friends, just texted her some pics from high school I found the other day. Good times, precious memories. Hold onto yours and enjoy them.
Wayne
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To me, the thing with singing is to be original, to find where you feel comfortable singing and just go for it. Your wife will do much better and feel more confident once the first album is out. :)
Wayne
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The vocals are from Sergi Yaro; he's also in looperman !
Otherwise, I will apply your advices and I thank you for giving it !!
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I think LM should be the most musically diverse place on the net. I love it.
Thank you for your listen and comment.
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Enjoy the holidays and keep safe!
Wayne
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Cheers,
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Always a pleasure!
Wayne
I'm sorry, sometimes I do not do very well keeping up with all the comments. :-(
I think I have decided, between last year and this year,
that pop is a very "corny" genre with "corny" lyrical gymnastics and shenanigans, the more "corny" the more catchy. Lol
My grandchildren have adopted this one. lol
We tell ourselves it's "corny" and we hate it,
but find ourselves humming or singing it.
If any of that makes sense! Haha
Thank you Wayne! :-)
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Wayne
Coming from a musician as well as a vocalist,
that means a lot.
Thank you.
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Wayne
Many thanks for your feedback mate.
I am glad you like it.
I appreciated.
Maj
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Nice job, great idea!
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Wayne
Glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed collaborating on it. :-)
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Well done folks!
Wayne
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