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I think this is really promising, and I say that as someone who is not a "trap" fan at all.
I think you can build on this and make a longer and fuller track; you already have 2 strong and distinctive sounds so it's a great basis. Good work man!

Super happy to hear you're back in action my friend! My favorite bit is the part from say 0:40, loads of interesting things going on, very good stuff, and the melody is simple but strong.
All the best Maj!

When Cruce says he's having fun, you know you're going on a trip. And what a trip it was! Really awesome and interesting! Lovely groove - just a bit sudden ending? Maybe put a "needle rips over record" sound there to show it's intentional?
Love it Steve!

Ok, now I know where the great comments on the vocals came from, you are an actual singer. If you live in London, Send me your rate and your phone number, that's awesome my man.
The operatic elements are fantastic. Beautiful opening, great composition; 8 minutes is long but it never bored.
You didn't ask for "helpful" comments but given how lovely your comments were, I will give it a try; I lived absolutely everything, but for me the piano parts can be even better (given how incredibly high the standard is for everything else in this track). The piano sounds like you play it at maximum volume, and I would like it to be more dynamic - it would be a great counterpoint to play it almost pianissimo, so the listener perks up. Just like you can get a classroom to shut up by whispering, rather than screaming :)
Cam, this was an amazing ride. Fav'ed and looking forward to more stuff!

Like it! Good stuff Kirk, but the first 30-50 seconds hardly register on my cheap inner ear phone headphones (that might be similar to what BoD is saying). Crank up some of the higher sounds a bit so people don't skip during the intro - because the rest is totally worth it!

I liked this anyway, but the bit from 0:45 is right up my alley. Good stuff and a nice mix of styles!

Holy smoke, that is really awesome. So many twists and turns, AND each one made sense. My only complaint is that it's (way) too short, but you know what, I'll just listen twice. You've got a fan, buddy!

The arpeggiated melody is really good, and it works really well with the beat. Good stuff man!

Quite cinematic! I see a shot with wide-open floodlands, or maybe a sunset over sea... very soothing!

Very jazzy! I had no idea what to expect there, but I like the keys. I think you can easily lift them a bit in the mix, I think the melody should be the main focus?
Muy bien amigo!

It's a nice loop, and I think you can build on this. Good luck!

Yeah I'm sure there was some pleasurable smoke in the air but you know what, I like it. I do think you could mix in some more melodic elements; this could either be the climax of a track or maybe an intro to something else, but I was intrigued throughout. Good start!

Another foray into 80s music eh? Love it man, although I wouldn't mind a bit of (syncopated) hihat in the drums for some more funk and some brightness. Great stuff and great use of the vocal!

Yeah, I like that. Good kind of sound, would be great for a nice vocal or rap or both. Well done - see if you can find an acapella? In my experience people very rarely take up the challenge so you may have to do it yourself ;)

Also a lovely track! Obviously your voice is the star, although the music could maybe use a bit more detail, but who needs that with a voice like yours. Oh, and more drums here which is good :D
Love your work buddy, anything new coming up? :) Let me know if you'd ever want to Collab, I'd love to see if I can create a track for you!

Ok, that's the kind of track I would usually skip, but you drew me in somehow and I liked it, actually. The rap is very strong, well timed and dynamic.
Good break too. I like it!

Jeugdsentiment! Leuk gedaan :)

I grew up with the music of Ian Duty. It was weird and exciting to us - we didn't get the lyrics, we certainly didn't get his appearance but boy did we get the energy. There's also this amazing docu on Stuff where they tell the story nobody wanted to perform after Dury because no band could top that energy.

Yeah, I get it, and you are getting very close to the energy of the band. And that's saying something. Very well done my friend!

Nice track, love the Chinese bells (are those 編鐘?) which give your track a very distinct flavor. Greetings from a former Hongkonger :)

I can totally hear how a Evanescense-like vocal would be amazing here (or Tori Amos maybe?).

I would urge you to give it a try - mixing vocals is hard (I ##### at it so I won't give you advice) but you know what, often when I try people give useful advice here.

The track cuts off unexpectedly mid-phrase at 2:24, was that your intention?

Good luck. It takes guts to put out your vocals, I know that, but trying and getting feedback can only make you better :)

Muy bien amigo, me gusta! I think you made a very good track for a rapper, looking forward to someone using it.

Short and sweet! I'd never heard of liquid funk (sounds like DnB to me?) But yeah, I like it! Good horn sound too, works really well!

Ooh, I think you went a bit overboard with the gain on the track and especially the vocals Alex, see if you can turn them down a bit? Leave some headroom.
Beautiful lyrics as always!

It's good, but I'm slightly confused about the provenance. Are you luriich? And did you find the acapella here on Looperman or elsewhere? Sorry, I'm a nosy #####:D

It's great Maj! I like how around 1:20 you go into a different, more orchestral section; I would maybe want that a bit louder to grab my attention. And then I was actually hoping that around 2:00 the 2 sections would merge :) but I also like how you went to the original theme.
Great stuff by the Vangelis of Looperman ;)