Not a trap guy and didn't expect to like this... but I did! Nice structure, nice production, great song for your first cup of teat in the morning. Thanks man!
Michael Jackson meets Andy Summers (I heard a bit of Behind my Camel at the start). This is very nice, not sure why this doesn't have more plays and likes!
I think this would be perfect for someone to sing to, or maybe you can add an acapella?
Yes! Good song, and I much prefer a mix like this! From this you can add a bit of reverb, but I really think this sounds better.
Indeed you may want to think about either a bit better mike or a better setup (record in some space with the minimum of noise and echo, or even under a blanket) but I will say again your voice does not need autotune :)
Thank You!!! Yeah I literally record right in the middle of my living room from a usb mic to my computer. haha Would a pop filter work if I bought one? Or Do you recommend any good recording microphone? I never thought of trying a blanket! That is honestly a remarkable idea!! Thank you! I will have to give that a try!! :) And I appreciate the feedback so so much! Thank you!
I like this at around 70%. The beat is great, the chords are nice, the rap works for me. But it needs a variation, a verse, a break, etc. Also, the melody doesn't really work for me.
I think if you fix that, you have a really strong song, so keep going at it!
Sort of drum&bass jazzrock? I think styles/categories are silly. It's all music, and either you like it or not.
So. I think there's some very good bits, but eg the part between 1.13-1.48 is too repetitive and given what comes next I think you can probably do more with it. You have plenty good ideas, so don't settle for less!
WOW!! Fantastic voice (I'm reminded of Des'ree), and a really strong track too! Love the little background voice accents, and the rap is perfect here.
The only thing you could possibly improve is the drums; they're great, but they could have a bit more variation.
Love the track, instant favorite!
I like the inclusion of the sitar. Did you slow down the vocals? They sound a bit wacky - not bad, just there's something to it I can't quite put my finger on :)
I like it, I flat out love the Leo Valentine work so that's already a good start. I felt that at aroun 1:00 you could add an extra element to distinguish it from the previous 8 bars and build up the song, eg an additional beat, a guitar, some chords. Then around 2:34, you could maybe remove it a bit and introduce a break to build again to the final section.
Again, I love it; I'm just saying small things that I think would make it even more rounded. Good luck!!
Thanks @BaoBou I've noted your input and thanks very much. The reason I didn't add too much of elements was that I wanted it to be as simple and laid back not to be too busy. But I'll make another version and do it the way you suggested and see what's the final result. Thanks very much for your input brother, I really appreciate it.
It's really good! I think you can improve it even more by doing something about the mixing. I like the vocals and the music, but they feel a bit like two separate entities, and I think a good remix could help that. Good luck!!
All my favorite types of sounds in one song: 90s guitars, 2000s beat, and a bit of 80s noise in there too - and yet it doesn't sound dated. Well done my friend!
Well I've hidden some of my earlier tracks from 2018 ;)
It's a learning process. I found a local studio with some guys who know a lot about mixing; I take a lesson every half year or so, and each time I learn a great deal. But in the end that's not the main thing; just make sure to keep making music, keep enjoying it and keep improving bit by bit!
Very funky! I like the bass, careful to make the keys not too overpowering.
Since you're playing your instruments live like me, make sure to "warp" your tracks a bit to correct for errors, so the beat is sychronised in all your tracks.
It may feel like cheating a bit, but it makes it easier to hear the music, so it's really to the benefit of your track :)
Thanks buddy for the advice on the 'warp'! You are right about the keys too. This was an 'in the moment' jam and I was so pleased with the feel I didn't spend much time listening to the details. I like your mixing down on many of your tracks. You seem to get the balance right across all the instruments.
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I think this would be perfect for someone to sing to, or maybe you can add an acapella?
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Indeed you may want to think about either a bit better mike or a better setup (record in some space with the minimum of noise and echo, or even under a blanket) but I will say again your voice does not need autotune :)
Well done Kitty!
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I think if you fix that, you have a really strong song, so keep going at it!
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It's a nice track!
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So. I think there's some very good bits, but eg the part between 1.13-1.48 is too repetitive and given what comes next I think you can probably do more with it. You have plenty good ideas, so don't settle for less!
Good job though!
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The only thing you could possibly improve is the drums; they're great, but they could have a bit more variation.
Love the track, instant favorite!
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Again, I love it; I'm just saying small things that I think would make it even more rounded. Good luck!!
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It's a learning process. I found a local studio with some guys who know a lot about mixing; I take a lesson every half year or so, and each time I learn a great deal. But in the end that's not the main thing; just make sure to keep making music, keep enjoying it and keep improving bit by bit!
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Since you're playing your instruments live like me, make sure to "warp" your tracks a bit to correct for errors, so the beat is sychronised in all your tracks.
It may feel like cheating a bit, but it makes it easier to hear the music, so it's really to the benefit of your track :)
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