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Ela re! A bouzouki... Now that makes me homesick :)
I like it! But... It feels like it could grow to something bigger?

I hear loads of stuff here,but there's also bits you might be able to improve on. Hear me out.
The idea of Gregorian chants and DnB is very cool. Other bits clash though; the "bell" like sounds (first I thought the nutcracker and then I realised l... Harry Potter?) after 0:15 and 2:10 are interesting but have too many dissonants.

The bit from 2:35 is very different from what came before, and I applaud you for that - in general the whole track is very ambitious, and I like that. But I do think you might be able to make it more one story; try to think what the core of your song is, and build up to that. If that road has detours, then great, as long as the listener feels you know where you're going.
I hope you don't mind I said this! Good luck buddy!

The genre is DarkNero. Let others define you - we can just explore ourselves while the try to box us in.
Good track. Good vocal too!

Promising! The vocals are a bit out of sync with the music (I think the guitar is ok) but that's something you can fix for the full version I think. Looking forward to it!

You know, that's a really sweet melody, and the only thing you need is some vocals - a slow low female voice, or even maybe just male spoken word. From the words "damals" and "weist du noch" I think it shouldn't be hard to make some lyrics... there must be a story there to tell.
Good luck :)

Ahhh cumpleanos feliz!

Hola Alex, nice new track, but do check how you exported it because there is a lot of distortion and clipping. You may want to lower some of the volumes.
Keep creating!

Awesome stuff. Not 100% why this showed up again 9 years after the fact, but timeless music never dies. Really good!

Loads of energy! Some of it could be more focused ;) but I can hear how much fun you're having!

That's a lovely song! Very well produced and super pleasant... That could be a hit!

Great man! I'm a fan of McNorad and did a track with one of his Acapellas... Also around 2020 I guess?
https://youtu.be/inPu-l3FnXc

Love your production quality and the little details you included in the mix. Great track!

This is a nice fun track buddy. Old time rock & roll!

You know what, 5 minutes later this is still stuck in my head, and I had this idea - it feels like the intro to a dubstep song. What if you slow it down even further (75-80 BPM?) And then go double time for some frantic dubstep?

You're getting old ;)
Haha nice! But there's still some distortion, especially in the drums I think. See if they go into the red?

No weed here, the guitar is my dope... but yeah that was dope buddy :)

Hey Ed, this is super. Crunchy drums, nice guitar chords, and what a magnificent vocal. Nice structure too... oh and there is a a lovely bass. It's got everything! Fav'ed!

The sound of the heartbeat with the spoken word gave me goosebumps man. That's awesome.
I like the idea of the track with the panned keys mimicking the heartbeat. Great idea. I do think the transition from the original heartbeat to the high notes (the C-F-C...C-G-C bit) is a bit sudden - I would consider to fade that in softer. You don't want to startle the baby, right? :)
And... congrats!!! Lovely track and I'm sure a lovely baby! (even if that's now 5, 15 or 25 years ago ;) )

Really good use of the acapella... Except around 1:20 where the vocal doesn't match your music. A bit of dissonance isn't so bad but here it doesn't work for me. The rest is excellent!

Hey Luvroxu, congrats on the birthday!! I love seeing your talent and you posting loads of stuff, that's great. You have a sound but you're not repeating yourself, and that's even better. I hope you found a community here that helps and stimulates you, because having fun with this is so important!
Regarding the track, I agree with Steve that there's an audible distortion you can probably get rid of; you possibly maxed out something. Try to fix that and it will be even better, because this is a fun track.
Keep creating, I can hear the joy and excitement and the talent!

That's really good and an engaging track; the idea remains the same more or less throughout the track but you keep it interesting.
The ending is a bit weird though? And to me it feels you maxed out the loudness so much that it's at the point of distortion - if that's not on purpose then you could consider to dial it back a bit?
Great job though, well done!

THAT GUITAR THO

Sssssssmokin'!!!

Zappa eat your heart out!!

It's absolutely lovely, very relaxing; I think you can make it even better by adding a melody, or maybe a suitable vocal. I realise that's why you call it a beat, but why not give it a stab yourself? :)

I think you got a great 4-bar loop there, and you definitely include some nice further elements, so it's not just a repeat. But to really keep the interest of the listener, it would be good to introduce another melody; switch it up a bit more.
Good luck, I think you habe a great start here and well done!

I like it! It's more a Saturday sound to me ;) but a lovely little song. All instruments played yourself? Well done!

That's with https://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/4047/questions-without-the-beat-yo-by-vashelite-80bpm-hip-hop-acapella?

Really good job man! I think you definitely enriched it, good combo like this. I don't think you need the fade-out, but maybe that's a question of taste ;)
In any case good job!