BaoBou

Strong rap man. I'm not a huge fan of the electronic "clicky" hihats (being a drummer :D) but actually it works here, and your vocal is key anyway. Good stuff.

Very nice amigo! Good modern tango vibe, and great use of the vocals!

Ok, listening to the track and reading the comments I have some ideas. Let's see where we can take it :)

That's a nice start! See if you can improve it and take it to the next level! Good luck :)

First of all, that's a really good track. I think if you take that to a producer, you can make that a hit, and I'm not kidding. Your voice is good enough, the tune is nice and poppy, you have all the elements, although it needs some finetuning.

Now, if I'm the producer (and I'm not), here's what I would do:
- make some changes to the melody/lyrics. Eg I noticed you sang do IT and rockSTARS with emphasis on the second syllable, when DO it and ROCKstars would flow better. Not that important, but it will help to create a hook

- then, more importantly, I would think with you about the structure. I think it needs more breathing room (eg don't go straight from chorus to verse) and a clearer hook/chorus. You consider basically everything a chorus, but that's hard to remember. I would consider to make "until I'm 27" your prechorus and the bit after that your chorus. Obviously the instrumentation also needs to reflect that; so the bit before "27" should be a bit calmer etc.

Anyway. I want to stress again I think you have something there; make 5 or 10 of these,take them to a pro and see what happens!!

Great Depeche Mode/Soft Cell kind of vibe to this, which I love! Fantastic vocals too, also Looperman or something else?

This is my favorite of your tracks! The intro is very musical, and the beat is strong.
I was going to make the same remark as Ian/Pseudoble that the beat is distorteling; maybe you did that on purpose (which is fine of course) but you can consider turning that and/or the master volume down a bit, so you would also have a bit more dynamics.
I like what you did though, keep creating!! Good stuff, you can be really proud.

That's awesome man. I don't know enough about Miles Davis to recognise a specific album, but I love the jazzy style and the groove.
I need to know though - is that a live sax or a vst/midi? It sounds bloody amazing! Mad props if that's you tooting that horn and also mad props if you managed to get it that way with a keyboard!

WOW!!
I am a huge fan of Danke and I know his band plays more like this - you added fantastic vocals to it and I think it's complete now. Fav'ed!

Dude!! That is really excellent! Absolutely thumping track, you don't get distracted while still including plenty variation and excitement. You could maybe leave a little bit more headroom in the mix (I think it's clipping in places) but this is really a very strong track. Well done man!

Ha, I see you uploaded our collab! That's great man - why don't you set it to featured so more people can hear it?
Oh, and add my name in the description ;)

The track is in F#m :) Still, close enough ;)
It's really fun! Nice structure with a break to the end and you made good use of the sounds - it could definitely have been some 8 or 16-bit game. Well done!

Wow, that's all in all a really strong song. I love the section from around 2:25 (Vangelis), then around 3:45 there was another highlight and then at the end from 5:00 you tie it all together. Very strong.
I also have 2 possible improvements you could think about:
- you almost lost me at the intro. I get what you're doing, but I almost skipped ahead to the next song thinking "oh it's one of those." But I am so glad I kept listening!
Your song is plenty long enough, so I think you could cut to the chase, or maybe start similar to what we now hear around 4:30. That I think would grab the listener immediately by the throat and tell him what this song is about.
- there is a background mid-high wailing noise (it starts around 0:32) which I don't like at all :D see if you feel it's integral to your song or maybe you can replace it. To me it sounds like an annoying toddler ;)
All in all, let my "improvements" not deter you. This is really really good and I want to hear more! Have a great weekend!

The music is awesome, and so is the vocal. I like the horns and the other parts of the instrumentation - all of that is great.
I do feel the mix/EQ could be better, especially on the drums. I can't hear your kick, and the snare and hats sound cut-off, as if you have a strict filter below 100 and above 1000 Hz (throwing out random numbers here).
I think that's a shame because it's such a good track, and if you get the drums alive, it would really be so much better!
See if you agree with me (I could be wrong - I generally am wrong about mixing), but in any case, love your funk. I found another kindred soul here I think and looking forward to more tracks!

That's bloody awesome Beerling! The drums were already a great intro and I was immediately hooked. You have a good balance between the parts with the booming drums and the bits without, to give the listener some rest. The only tiny minor thing you could look at is that your drums sound absolutely authentic while the key/synth parts sound a bit electronic; if it's midi you might find some that might fit even better.
But don't get me wrong, that would just be the final 1% and I fav'ed the track. Great job!

That's promising actually!
You seem to have completely maxed out the loudness, consider leaving a bit more headroom. But I'm definitely curious for the full track!

Fantastic stuff Mark. I was just about to ask if you needed a guitar solo and then I heard you actually found Jimi Hendrix around 3:25 :D
Awesome as always!

Dude, that's amazing. It's a fantastic combination of noise and music - you could go harder and make it techno, but you in fact stayed on the musical side.
Really special!!

That's a strong track man. I love how much variation and buildup you put into it, not everyone manages that, but it makes your track so much richer and more interesting to listen to.
One thing you could consider is that now your intro is quite long (essentially a minute). Think if you can maybe move part of that to the main section - it's certainly not a bad intro (it's actually really good) but some people have a short attention span, so it's not bad to show early on where you're going.
In any case, good to see you back, keep creating! :)

I was actually just having a chat with my girlfriend about what RnB is and looked it up on wiki - according to that definition essentially everything is RnB ;)
I like where your track is going, but it feels to me your bass is slightly out of synch (I think it's half a note lagging behind). Can you check that?
Good luck man, keep creating!

Hey, I recognise that acapella, I also gave it a try :)
It's a fun mix! I like your best and how you used it. You could try to play with the timing a bit; it feels to me that some of the vocals could start half a beat later, but it's a hard one to get right. In any case, I liked it!

Wow, this is really great. Very poppy but in a good way, and I love the Indian vibe to it. Great stuff!

Very cool and a very brave track. I also really liked the poem, I'll delve a bit more into him!

That's pretty good! Try to find a rap in the acapella section that suits this, maybe like Melvatron or MC Norad?

Dude, this grabbed me instantly! Super interesting chords, and really great keyboard playing, and good instrumentation too. Absolutely lovely!