It's a pretty cool track, if I were you I'd redo the Let's go in the chorus, make them a little more in-time. Some of the vocal idea are really good tho and the actual concept is good. Have you ever heard of the Sumerian tablets? Like 3 thousand years before "Jesus" and the exact same story in every way.... so don't be so quick to "know" that the Bible is truth. The bible has a lot of good messages in it, but it's based on older texts.... Sorry, but that's the actual truth! They just changed the names.
So now were even! We've both shared our views with each other.
EDIT: Hey, sorry man I thought you were the MC. As for the Bible I know it was the same stories in the Sumerian texts, which are about 6 thousand years old, was also the same story in ancient Egypt again with the names changed. Don't know about further back than that. Anyway, I'll go check out your other tracks. Now I know I'm not going to get preached at. : )
I provided the beat for the track and nothing more. We wanted to record the track together in the city where i live, but due to complications, we were unable to do so, therefore, I can do nothing about the recording. Check out some of my other tracks like "Everythang (my homie)" my mixes are ON POINT. As far as the bible, we all have our beliefs and as long as u stand for something, you will not fall for anything "hint, hint" the bible is based on the Jewish text and orginal literature found in the motherland from the beginnings of time. It was edited by the Roman Catholic Church. Personally, I read up on my history as much as I read the bible so that I can see the whole picture. Thank you 4 u'r input.
it's a nice choice of sample, don't know if the Crunk pitched snare rolls work with the orchestral sample tho. Also, there's no bassline! All it needs is a big bassline g.
That's Vinnie Paz in the chorus right? Or is it Pun? Nice beat, when you say remix, how do you mean? Need to explain more in your descriptions, nice stuff anyway. You should check my tracks with Final Outlaw on my page, I think you'd like them.
Nice beat, drums and strings go really well together. Maybe double up the piano towards the end of every 4 or 8 bars with a string and octave higher. Should finish it off nicely. Peace from London.
Don't know why no-ones taking the time to review these tracks. You guys got some good stuff. If you send me some accapellas I'll tear them up. Check out my finished HIp Hop beat on my page called Blacklisted.
Sounds like a cross between funked out 12 bar blues and the Bottom theme song! I'd speed the whole thing up if It were my track. But of course, it's not! : )
Nice to hear some live instrumentation on here, you and your son have some some skills!
It's a little difficult to hear whats going on with the guitar, try boosting it at 6K for some extra clarity. Also I think there's a little too much of the main riff/section. If I wee you I'd condense this track down a little. That's just me tho! : )
Nice track man, I'm feeling this one. Trumpets remind me of 93 Till Infinity, which is a good thing! Would you consider letting me try spitting on this? Let me know. Nice work anyway.
Your vocals remind me of this guy I saw a video for a long time ago called Mortis, apart from your lyrics are much better/deeper. Not my kind of music, but I can appreciate the lyrics, no doubt.
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So now were even! We've both shared our views with each other.
EDIT: Hey, sorry man I thought you were the MC. As for the Bible I know it was the same stories in the Sumerian texts, which are about 6 thousand years old, was also the same story in ancient Egypt again with the names changed. Don't know about further back than that. Anyway, I'll go check out your other tracks. Now I know I'm not going to get preached at. : )
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Nice to hear some live instrumentation on here, you and your son have some some skills!
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Very orig, very nice stuff, off to the next track...