i love spacey stuff like this! both frank and whyspr give up some good advice. me, i would put it away for a while an give it a fresh set of ears. little things like changing up the arangement to give your cool sounds more space. open it up a bit, add a little break, think about dynamics (like a rollercoasterm up and down) if i were looking for sample for this i'd go for an obscure vocal sample. i love the archives at www.npr.org
good luck,
neil
100 outerspace points for traveling to another planet. sorry about you folks, that's the best thing about being creative. if something is buggin' ya write a song to get you into a better space! outerspace!
your description is almost as epic as this track! you may have invented a new genre, "mad collab" i'll be looking for the finished product! nice one,
neil
Haha, thanks Neil. I always try to hit it on the head with the descs. As for the track, I figured I should try to go big considering it's name. Glad ya dug it. Later on!
you get like 1000 point for this track! at least 100 for the title another 500 for your tone and playing and the rest for standing on the edge and looking over!
thank you for sharing.
neil
you get some bonus points for your avatar! jack marhall
only been playing for 2 years! could of fooled me! i love spacey sounds and geetars! great soundscape you've created! well recorded and mixed. you should be proud of this one!
therealneil
Haha geez thanks! well i have been playing for a little ammount of time, and to be honest, the guitar in this song sounds a lot better than the skill it accually takes! its basically an Aminor arrpeggio, and its fairly easy to play once you get ehe hang of it! Yeah and it was recorded on an 8-Track hard mixer which was a bit of an effort to play the whole way through. But maybe i should do it again with new loops and equipment etc or leave it as it is im not sure. well, thanks for the review!
hope to hear more tunes like this from you! nice outside the box track. i'm thinking not having a bass line on this track enhances all that's going on!
therealneil, that's my tag!;)
ps your not going anywhere are you?
Neil,
I may well take your advice on the bass. We'll see. I do have a few ideas to at least try and see what happens. I can always stick with this rendition, but it still calls out to me for something more. As for going places, I am happy to get something posted here in the friendly confines of the looperman community. It feels like coming home in many ways.
Thanks Neil.
Voltage
when life takes you for a dive make a killer track like this one! sorry for your loss. like the sounds and dynamics you created. you have a nice blend of a few genres and it got a great flow to it. i'm glad you decided to share.
neil
Thanks Neil
I had a great base to start with and was supplied with the extra vocals, guitars and synths. I did a fair bit of filtering and messing with them though.
Cheers,
Trax
this just goes along with my newyears resolution, "be more like planetjazzbass"! great chords! i always know i can hear the great wall of planet verb! but never know what planet i'm going to! elaine's words are soothing like the music!
your humble servant,
neil
i love that poem. i used it for a spoken word peice i did a while ago yours is much better. have used that piano sample too! great first track. will be looking for more! you should check out mine "Mr. Rock Flies"
peace,
neil
i love travelling by train you never know who or what you will encounter. i this case you got a great track for your the price of your ticket. great picture you've painted!
neil
next stop looperville all aboard!
does not sound amaturish at all. like your use of beats and fx. nice composition. vocals could be a little higher in the mix. vocals, especially ones you do yourself can be hard to mix. don't be afraid to put them up there for all to hear.i have the same problem with my lead guitar parts. nice work!
now there's a serious review from neil!
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neil
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thank you for sharing.
neil
you get some bonus points for your avatar! jack marhall
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keep it up!
neil
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therealneil
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therealneil, that's my tag!;)
ps your not going anywhere are you?
I may well take your advice on the bass. We'll see. I do have a few ideas to at least try and see what happens. I can always stick with this rendition, but it still calls out to me for something more. As for going places, I am happy to get something posted here in the friendly confines of the looperman community. It feels like coming home in many ways.
Thanks Neil.
Voltage
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neil
I had a great base to start with and was supplied with the extra vocals, guitars and synths. I did a fair bit of filtering and messing with them though.
Cheers,
Trax
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outstanding,
neil
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peace,
neil
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your humble servant,
neil
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neil
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neil
next stop looperville all aboard!
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now there's a serious review from neil!
Thanks again!