i love that poem. i used it for a spoken word peice i did a while ago yours is much better. have used that piano sample too! great first track. will be looking for more! you should check out mine "Mr. Rock Flies"
peace,
neil
i love travelling by train you never know who or what you will encounter. i this case you got a great track for your the price of your ticket. great picture you've painted!
neil
next stop looperville all aboard!
does not sound amaturish at all. like your use of beats and fx. nice composition. vocals could be a little higher in the mix. vocals, especially ones you do yourself can be hard to mix. don't be afraid to put them up there for all to hear.i have the same problem with my lead guitar parts. nice work!
now there's a serious review from neil!
you are so sensative, just like micael! in his state of illness we must work to bring him bac to health! by the way, great track as always! i reposted "dangerous" https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/20685 if yu want out ceck it out, mon ami.
i've come across the vocals here just can't seem t remember where.
neil
Thanks man... appreciate the explanation.
You're welcome to join the contest... eventually we'll have enough tracks to make a promotional cd that can be obtained with 3 proofs-of-purchase from Huggies/Pampers etc.....
this most deffinately deserves a good mic on those vocals.not sure if it's just me but the song stops after about a minute. looking forward to hearing a good rock track her in looperland!
neil
Thanks niel, it's only 1:39 in length at the moment. I need to do some planning with verses and chorus and etc.. give this track a little more structure. Where the track stops is all that I recorded for guitar parts. Basically I'm taking a track that was a recording for a song idea and I'm starting the process of transforming it into a song. The original Pre-Demo was rough compared to where it's at right now.
haha thanks for all the reviews man...actually trev isnt my bro...honestly...haha tho i can see y u thought so...and wow i have a buttload of points by now
you've got some sort of psyco-cinamatic thing going on here! like the way you've put this all together. me say very cool! 100 outerspace points for you!
therealneil
great intro! this has so many elements to it i'm not sure you can put this into one genre! "techno-on the-d&b with a cinamatic overtone" that's what i call it!
good one,
nei
lol, thanks neil.
really appreciate your feedback!
to be honest i only spent two half days on this. but yes, i guess that is a fair while, as i was focused on it the whole time! i still think i can better it, but yeah...
on Off My Mind Ft. Ryan Birnie by Fresco
neil
on Hope I Fly by DopeonaRope
peace,
neil
on The Train by ShiftLifter
neil
next stop looperville all aboard!
on Stagnation by zuekeepor
now there's a serious review from neil!
Thanks again!
on Calming The Restless Soul by toddj
neil
Thanks,
Toddj
on Wrong Kind of Love by Soulfull
i've come across the vocals here just can't seem t remember where.
neil
on Smell...Change...Gag...Repeat by gargoyle
great contest! you win
neil
You're welcome to join the contest... eventually we'll have enough tracks to make a promotional cd that can be obtained with 3 proofs-of-purchase from Huggies/Pampers etc.....
on synergy comp- Catmikaze by DJVO
neil
on Supermarket by Littbarski
great piano!
neil
on My Baby (rough track pre-demo 3). by iDude
neil
on technophonic ultrasonic photon quark gamma ray by Sector7even
neil
on something happy by mandarrosa
100 intestellar points for funning around!
neil
on living room sessions by mandarrosa
neil
on Crazed Emotions by mandarrosa
therealneil
on Dave: Moose Of The Rain-Forest by mandarrosa
therealneil
on A White Horse - Pure Death Mix - w J Cash by AudioFiend
good one,
nei
on Lance Johnson the Surfer by Planetjazzbass
neil
nice verb!
on Ladies by Tiltedbeats
neil
really appreciate your feedback!
to be honest i only spent two half days on this. but yes, i guess that is a fair while, as i was focused on it the whole time! i still think i can better it, but yeah...
thanks mate
Butcha
on synergy comp "Drfiting" by Gsusfrk
neil
God Bless
Steve
on strings by freakwincy
neil
on Minds Rebel by Boson Havoc by bosonHavoc
raisin' havoc! me likey!
neil
on Testing by DaMann
neil
on Recolet by bosonHavoc
neil
on Let It Rain by Ashman1
on Bass So Strong (Jiggle) by Fresco
neil