LittleJay

hey hey,
first of all, hats off cuz I didnt see any more cinematic tracks here since last time I was here,
for a cinematic, it should be a part of something, you said, animation or something? right? its good for a part of an animation, it brought me to the world of dolls more than fairies xD, just kidding, but the way you made it is kinda more usefull for that reason, you used a bell that sounds like kid's music box, and thats cool, also, I will give you one of my key secrets (:) to help you complete that music, and that is to use female choirs, yes yes yes, they need female choirs to imagine fairies, its all about creating space
Kindest regards
J_*

Cool man, first time I say someone is using stereo enhanced guitars here :D GJ

nvm so cuz I changed my name lol
I mean it could be good if you rap on it or somethin xD

Hey EyeDye, idk if you still remember me or not, nvm :D
so, what about making this a music?

Hey,
Good song my friend
its good to hear young collabs (btw Im not an oldman =D )
by the way
no one of us wants to hear appreciating words here :D we are looking for feedbacks right? so lets go on:
1.you could make it more country

2.lets be honest, the main mastering of song is kinda great, but the vocal line, nah. so you could improve the velocity of frequencies between 9000-13000, (hmm maybe with some changes) to improve female vocal

3.add reverb, a big room reverb with 15% volume to your vocal line, maybe 20% or more it depends on you! trust me it will make your music, seem bigger, right? ok :D

4.to the singer: its better to stay away from your microphone a bit, and sing louder sometimes, your singing method is kinda boring and repetitive

5. 2key notes for the singer, for this song: soften your voice for a breathy voice, smile when singing

6.well lets go back to you my friend :D, sometimes, pan your toms, like in 3:22, like one on left, and one on right

7.why dont you use an exicer? harmonic exicer is one of the key steps of mastering, use an exicer for make your vocal bright and shining, you can use wave's exicer or izotope exicer

8.one of the things that is really on my nerve in your music, and that is lack of compression, its not your fault, the singer is singing in low volume and you can't do anything, but, if she sings a bit more louder, you can compress your vocal line then vocal line's volume will be balanced

9.a huge idea about your drop in 3:05, add a radio vocal effect on. yes really, just like radio, for this action, kill the whole frequencies except between 500-8000, (maybe with some changes), and also add a bell line to the drop to complete this action

10.well adding a solo guitar line after the drop, is what rockstars know as well, i think you know what I'm talking about :D,

well, sorry for the long story xD, by the way, it was 10 tips to have a better "boxing day"
Kindest regards
J_*

: this is my face when Im listening to this track lmao.
however its very usable in comedy series. damn seems like Im living in 80s :D Im not an old man but however I liked your track.

Hey. good job thats kinda... an idealistic track, I'm a great fan of this types of music, and actually have a lot of idealistic projects, there aren't a lot of people who try to make musics like this, value yourself.

well, its a long time that I didn't hear an electronic music like this. good job, well I hate saying just good job and shitty words like this but seems like you have enough experience in this industry, so no more things :D GJ.

haha, nice track my friend, sad cuz I just see comments less than one line for this good track, it deserves more.
first of all the drum collection you used is usable in dub and this kinds of genres and ofcourse dnb and nice choice.
I'm a fan of playing with vocals, automate them and more that you used it like hell and its kinda amazing cuz more than 90 percent of dnb musics are boring and they're more usable in resturants haha,.
you did something new in and that's that FM bass working and I'm a super fan of this, to do something new, well you remind me when I was a newbie and a little kid in music, I was trying to mix new genres, so I had to learn about every single genre, my first genre mix was chillout and hiphop hahaha it game me the potential of making 5 new genres in the future haha.
the way you finished the song is called reverseschool here and you can realize why its called like that, but it could be better if you add a single chord in the end
however nice dnb and I listened it all, GJ.

haha good one, I'm a big fan of that saxs in trap genre.
thats good that you made a trap with oldschool style that not a lot of producers make this.

also there are always things that I forgot to say and I should write another comment, the reason that I insist on playing with panning, is that your track is kinda mysterious and confusing type, so it can make it more confusing and attractive if you just play with pannings (in a controlled way),
regards
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I'm not into this genres a lot but, lemme give you some feedbacks:
first of all I like the start on 0:27 or same 0:28 and the bottom guitar till end.
I really feel the lack of roll off, which gave me a headache, you have a lot of additional frequencies that should be deleted, some lines should be limited and compressed, second part of the music is boring a bit, some lead instruments could be added there.
I liked the minor chords in 2:25
well, its better to reduce the amount of frequencies which are more than 10000 for your bells, increase the amount of under 150Hz frequencies for your bass (it makes your bass line powerful and will separate it from other lines and reduces some of additional freq and sounds.) and then turn its volume down between 3 and 3.5 decibels

nothing is wrong with your toms, they're really mixed well,
that jing jing bells in 0:27 are making a bad additional sounds, my suggest is to roll off freqs betweem 3000 and 8000 and reduce them, then use a stereo shaper to make it stereo (it will separate them and makes the listener to feel that they're more near to the ears) then turn the volume down betweem 2.5 and 3 decibels

the synth which starts at 1:13 is completely panned to the right, it could be better if you make it mono or for example change its panning from right to left then left to right every 3 or 4 or 5 seconds, it would be great

you need a bridge in 2:06 or 2:07, and also in 2:24 or 2:25 or 2:26 ( you can easily use a reversed crash (cymbal) and stick it to a normal cymbal then use it as a bridge for your changing times)

the panning of the female "ah ah" (or whatever :D) sound could be changed every 2 or 3 or etc seconds (your choice).

know this there is always room for improvement, your track is good enough itself and doesn't need to be changed, but thats just a room for improvement. there are more tips for this track but it will be boring if I write more xD so lets save them for the next tracks :D,
regards.

well goodjob, for me its a large intro for a trap but its ok cuz I think you wanna make it oldschool a bit so thats ok and amazing, also one positive side is that your track is not boring and it has some attractive parts and bridges. goodjob.

haha good fun track
found some free spaces that you could fill with something between 0:27 and 0:54
just that
nothing more is weird xD
goodjob

goodjob. this types of musics are usable in video games or minigames, loved that trumpet or whatever it is, its more a nostalgic track for me which reminds me the "pink panther" game in PS1 hahahaha.

Complicated, and also nice playing with panning, it makes it more complicated, but no more ideas about this types of music

lmao, thats a funky track, thats like an african-american music so for me its a funk.