Are you trying to do the modern talking drop? If so then you did a good job pulling it off first time. My only note is that the first part of the track where the drums started loses the overall hype of the track, meaning add more ambiance and booming effect to the listeners so that they can feel the drop coming to them.
I hope you understand what I'm saying and btw, a good first track you've made. Still has room for improvement and hoping for more of your tracks soon. :)
I like the piano at the first part. The only thing that I noticed is that the hype of the track loses after the piano part. I think you should increase the bpm so that the fast drums give hype to the track itself. But overall, its nice.
hmmm... very chill i must say. there are parts on the track that needs some tweaking just like what mudhoen said. But the overall track is great and has potential.
really like the vibe in this track. the drums are a little bit loud but it doesnt matter to me :) the groove in your track is very powerful. Keep it up XD
dark sounds you've used there... pretty nice and interesting. I was kinda expecting of a "big" drop on the last part but its still good. Keep up the the good work.
I do respect a lack of words in relation to art, so don't worry about that. I like to write lyrics, and I am ever so thankful for this time when I have the words to speak... it was not always this way for me. Most aspects of this song became the way they were due to me setting time limits on myself, because of being unsure of what the near future would bring. I am also thankful for that, since all is well personally. Thank you for listening and leaving your comment!
The first part was nice. The transition to the drop was not that smooth and goes to screaming after the 1/8 drums. I will give your track a favorite if those transition of yours are fixed.
Overall, it's nice and there's still room for improvement
Very Nice XD, i didnt know that you can make that kind of music in PS1 (mostly people call it PSX). Im just wondering if I can also try this on my emulator XD.
Hmmm... it really is interesting to hear this kind of track. Very unique synths that I've heard from this track. There's a story in the track you've made, that's all I can say XD. Btw, good job :)
thank you for listening and your comment! Synths were Roland and Microbrute. It is nice that you experienced this composition of sounds being narrative.
idk why but... there's something quite going on with the percussions bruh... The synth is nice but the hats are too.....hmmmm i might say that its a little bit off...
Anyways, Overall is very nice. Need a little bit of tweaking (since it is only in beta) and a very good job.
Hey man, I reworked alot of the stuff on here. The percussions should be a lot more clearer and balanced, and a helluva lot better. Thanks for your words!
And as for the structure, I don't necessarily have a particular template that I produce tracks from. I find that pre-structured tracks sometimes get boring because everybody uses the same structure, you feel?
Most of my music doesn't follow a particular structure like intro-verse-chorus/drop-verse-chorus/drop-outro...as someone who has been involved with music his whole life, I've heard far too many songs like that.
I'm doing my best to break the mold as much as I can! Hopefully it's working :)
on Touch Of The Irish Aka One For Ed by Orlando51
I really like the overall track. Calm and very heavenly I must say. Very well done my friend.
-ReonN
All the best_______Orlando
on Raster by acesmith
Ambiance:
Try adding dark pads at your track.
"Booming" Effect:
Add some more reverb on the snares. Also, It will be more cool if you use more harder snares.
on Raster by acesmith
I hope you understand what I'm saying and btw, a good first track you've made. Still has room for improvement and hoping for more of your tracks soon. :)
-ReonN
Do you have any tips on how to add "ambience" or "booming"?
on Passive Aggression feat WithoutMyArmor by zacvoos
-ReonN
on Rotation by smallpaul
Keep it up!
-ReonN
on Boss Battle - Lead Synth and Synth Solo by bobbleit
Used your track on making a new track lol. Tnx btw
on Strong Enough --SikNoiz Remix-- by SikNoiz
Keep it up!
-ReonN
:)
on Back Again by Fl4zh
Keep it up!
-ReonN
on Amixx - EDM Test by Amixx
Good work!
-ReonN
I'm really appreciated
there's more to come :)
on Another Day With You x The Days With You EP by bitronix
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on Napalm - Quickbeat by Paganini
on A Song Without Vocal by Fl4zh
Unfortunly im the kind of guy that never finishes anything...
on Shadowland Original Mix by GoldenOokami
really like the vibe in this track. the drums are a little bit loud but it doesnt matter to me :) the groove in your track is very powerful. Keep it up XD
-ReonN
~GO
on Perpetuate by the_Ebola_ProJeKt
- ReonN
on Modern Disease by Spivkurl
well, the overall mixing was good and there's almost nothing to say about the track. splendid work.
-ReonN
on Counter Attack by DJVercas
-ReonN
on The Lords eye by FrozenStick
on Legend Of Your Hands by MGproduct
Overall, it's nice and there's still room for improvement
-ReonN
on Katy Perry - Firework - Kaulin Remix by Kaulin
Very nice remix you've made there haha
I'm hoping to listen to more of your remixes :)
ReonN
on Yours Within -ft NanuNanu by ValveDriver
the track also feels like you're on the land of the arabs because of the vocals.
I like it and keep it up XD
ReonN
Take care.
Sloe
on Download V Number 1 by PatrickFox
Very Nice XD, i didnt know that you can make that kind of music in PS1 (mostly people call it PSX). Im just wondering if I can also try this on my emulator XD.
-ReonN
Thank you. :D
I loved Music and Music 2000. Had many hours of fun with them. :D
You can play it on an Emulator. It works really well. :D
on Premonator with Spivkurl Promenade Mix by promenade2239
-ReonN
thank you for listening and your comment! Synths were Roland and Microbrute. It is nice that you experienced this composition of sounds being narrative.
Thanks again!
Alex
on Gravity Falls 8bit v2 by FrozenStick
The Chiptune is a little bit loud, but it is nice. I'm hoping for more of your chiptunes m8 XD
ReonN
on Bounce - Original Mix by GoldenOokami
Anyways, Overall is very nice. Need a little bit of tweaking (since it is only in beta) and a very good job.
-ReonN
~GO
on Glaciers by skwishfish
Also, very curious about the structure of your track. Not a ordinary house track but something else.
-ReonN
And as for the structure, I don't necessarily have a particular template that I produce tracks from. I find that pre-structured tracks sometimes get boring because everybody uses the same structure, you feel?
Most of my music doesn't follow a particular structure like intro-verse-chorus/drop-verse-chorus/drop-outro...as someone who has been involved with music his whole life, I've heard far too many songs like that.
I'm doing my best to break the mold as much as I can! Hopefully it's working :)