BradoSanz

This is a cathyc song. I enjoy the vocals and the airy atmosphere of the track overall. Lots of unique textures that keep the listener intrigues. Great work!

The drum beat and piano with the dancing vocals really make for a great RnB atmosphere. I may have to try singing on this if I get time! Love it. - Brado

Really digging that piano at the start. You did a great job painting a picture with the music. The distorted drums at the beginning, the voices, the uplift at 1:45 really brings the song to a whole. Great work here!

Like the distorted piano. The sub bass does seem to conflict in only a few spots with how busy it is but overall the beat really drives! Thanks for sharing!

Lots of high-energy in this one. Reminds me of an old survival game I used to play. Love it!

This is awesome! I appreciate the attention to detail in this song. As someone else said this song reminds me of Depeche Mode. As a vocalist myself, I really love her voice!

Dig your modern style man! Miss you! Glad to see you're still active :)

First - critique, vocals need to be adjusted. That is a minor issue however, and Im sure by now the issue has been addressed :)

The song has a great vibe that, like danke said, would really have a nice spin with some sort of gospel section to really fire it up. Great song you have here, looking forward to the finished product!

Brado

You made a nice arrangement! Is that you rapping on the song? The vocals could be a little bit louder to my ear, but that is a small issue :)

Brado

This is awesome! You remind me of Eminem a little bit! I'm glad you could use this!

Brado

You have such potential to be big. You're a phenomenal writer!! The ability to express yourself so passionately lyrically is a gift very few have in this day and age!

Brado

I'm REALLY glad you posted your comment on my loop. I would have never come across your music and its beautiful! You have such raw emotion that I can't over it! Beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss and the fakes you had to deal with. :(

Brado

Also, if you'd like to send me the piano file and your raw vocal file, I'd love to try and make the song something bigger (strings and whatnot) if you'd allow me, I understand if you choose otherwise. :) Let me know.

Brado

I. Love. This.

This is EXACTLY what I imagined them being used for, something as soulful and heartfelt as this song, right here.

I'm sorry to hear about the passing of your father. Your voice is absolutely captivating and I can feel your strength and your pain as well. Is there any way I could get the file of this? I love this so much. Thanks for sharing with all of us, this means so much to me as an uploader and is a great inspiration for me to continue doing more piano loops. You have an amazing voice!

Best wishes brother,

Brado

Hey phatkatz!

Long time no see, my friend. Is this guitar youre playing one you made yourself? It's been awhile since I've been active here and I'm glad to see you're still around :)

Where do you find the sounds for the swamp? Those are high quality and are always hard to find. You painted an image that almost made me think of the video game "Last Of Us". Great work!

Brado

How'd you record the guitar? This metal is brutal!

On a serious note, I dig the discord you built up in this track. I've always had a soft spot for those ambient effects you seem to utilize so well on this track.

Brado

"Very nice." - silverman

What did you use for the drums? This genre is my next task and I'd love to hear your thoughts. Did you mic the guitars or is that a plugin?

Best,

Brado

I admit that you're one of the first to post a decently-recorded "first track." in the Hip Hop genre. Dig it bro!

Brado

The energy is different but fresh, as priest39 mentioned. You chose some good sounds! Great stuff for using LM-based loops :)

I'm not going to cover what the others have already, and I do have another suggestion - maybe add a bassline to tie the song together! It'll help give the song purpose! Otherwise, I personally enjoy the reverse effect because its unique and a different way to listen to the song. You should record vocals over this in reverse too, just to make it one wild ride :)

Brado

Do you play the drums yourself? I believe you should look up quantization, itll help you a lot with making your music sound more cohesive.

Cheers,

Brado

I dig the message! The song itself is very catchy, lots of instrument activity and atmosphere - but seems to bury the vocals at times. I know you didn't mix it so it's not really a critique, more of just something I noticed. :) Your vocals are always solidly recorded so I have to ask, what microphone-interface-software setup do you have to make your recordings?

Cheers,

Brado

Let me start with some critique: but I would suggest pulling back on the dynamics just a tad. Raise the drumsLet the song breeze more and it will pay in dividends for the pleasant aesthetic of the song. A lot of the quieter sounds get mashed to oblivion when the song gets loud (1:50-2:00) for instance.

The drums need more punch and should be brought up a tad since they carry all the energy of the song. 3:26 for instance, feels weaker than it should be due to the drums not being more present and thumpy.

The good: A lovely, creative composition. I really like the piano riffs, they sound very happy and complement the song well. The ahhhs really add a nice dreamy effect. The melody was not repetitive as you added plenty of other instruments to do little runs of their own.

Good job, hope to see more from you!

Brado