Very cool start to this track and I like the melody but it def needs more variety in sounds all the way up to the drop.. Drop is cool also needs some work , to me it sounds very all over the place. As you said this is only your demo, I think once ou are done it will sund great ! Can't wait to hear it.
Thanks Living! Yeah, this is only the demo version. When I make the full one, I'll be sure to fix the things you and the others have stated. I'm happy you like it thus far. Thanks for the tips and comments, take care!
This is very cool. My ear hears a dog barking at some parts lol i dont know why. But this is cool I love when the piano kicks in its so erie !! Awesome work as usually man !
hahahaha well... your kinda right, i had a vocal sample on my computer, so i had an idea of distorting it, adding reverb e.c.t and placed it a couple of times in the track just to add a bit of flavour.
its either that or the noise in Neuro's loop.
And yeah the piano does sound erie :D haha it wasn't intentional to be honest lol, think it comes across that way coz of the atmosphere of the track or something :)
Anyways, always a pleasure hearing from you.
Thanks :D
Dont bash yourself it sounds good. It has a nice melody and smooth sounds. However I have to agree with Xyllent that the sidechaining is a little weird. I also think that if you added some subbass to the intro parts just to fill the the surrounding sounds it would make it sound that much fuller.
Very cool track. I saw the movie a while ago very weird. Over all everything sounded good & the track had a good flow melody wise. I think the percussion should be a little more pronounced if you are going for trap especially the snare sounded like it had a long reverb trail. Look forward to hearing your next work EB.
This track sounds really good aside from everything you put down in the info. Man at 1:34 It would sound so freaking powerful if a whole band came in as a chorus with really punchy drums flooded cymbal type of stuff. Overall I love the piece.
Very cool track loving just about every aspect. There is just something about the piano in the intro and the beginning of the next repetition. It just sounds plain, to me it sounds like mabey the piano should be a little more wet sounding with atleast a little more reverb or something. Overall though this is very cool its very chill-like.
This is an awesome start there is so much you can do to make this track sound more alive . I just can't put my finger on what thought Mabel some kind of subtle saw synth. Unfortunately if I were to listen to this before reading the info I wouldn't know it was a video game based track. Other than that this track is a super start ! We should collab sometime man I think you and I could do something pretty cool. I just need to get in touch with the newer styles of electronic music .
haha no i started the track with the idea of making a video game style song, but it evolved to become not so video game based.. u get me? haha might not be explaining that well.
and YEAH! i know you make good quality stuff so id be happy to collab :)
This is nice man I love th sax!! Incorporating a saxophone into my music is something I would really like to do but I don't know what kind of software can replicate that sound. I love the sound man !
Very cool track. Almost erie in a sense with those dark vibes in the beggining. I would really like to see the walkthrough that this is on. Very nice work man !
Hey man cool track. I would say for 1:00 to 1:10 is my least favorite. There is just something about that synth that I can't dig. The rest is really cool. I love the super saws the are very of and stand out. Nice track overall.
Honestly the only thing I didnt care for was the bridge only because it just sounded out of time but thats niether here no there. This track has nice bass and a really solid melody. Love It ! Can definitely be a club song for sure. Every track you put out is good man! Nice job on this one. H
I can hear what you're hearing. The thing is, it came in on time but the cutoff was so low, you couldn't hear it. Which made it sound off beat. I will fix that in a bit. Thanks for the comments and always stopping by, take care!
As I'm listening to this right now. It's a perfect ending to my day. I just stopped working on one of my tracks after listeing to the same loop for like 3 hours and this sounds so nice and soothing to my ears. Definitely digging how the melody is just continuous throughout & the subtlety of the drums. Very very nice work !
Thanks. I can understand that. I started 'laptop music-making' in 2012 and remember a great amount of time I spent on each sound. I am a classicaly trained keyboardist but that was really a new thing for me, lot of hard work. I felt like I was wasting my time. No difference these days. What can I say... effort is needed till you get to this point when all is effortless (sounds like a maxim lol).
Don't feel bad man I have only been doing this electronic music since June. What software are you running? I pretty much do everything in ableton live 9. Learning tha daw for mixing is pretty easy but I still need a lot of work. You will get it eventually.
I have been only producing for about 9months and cannot get mixing down right :( and I am to poor to get a song mixed by someone. one of my goals for the new year is to learn how to mix!!!! if you have any videos that will help please send a link to me!!!!
I like this track very much. The one thing I think I dislike the most is the male vocal . The thing I liked most about this track were the female vocal towards the end of the first half of the song. They sounded perfect. Overall nice oldschool feel and a great mix.
Thanks. I wasn't sure of that male vocal either but i got p***ed off trying to find something else that fit. Perhaps i'll go back and look at it again for a fresh idea.
Cheers for stopping by and commenting.
FR
This is very nicely put together. It shouldn't be very hard to figure out where to go from here. The question really is what kind of overall theme are you going for. Like tumbleweed said, put it away for a day or so and come back to it with a fresh perspective. The creativity will come.
Thanks Livingsoulsdie however i already finished the track keep a eye out for it tomorrow when i release it. It will be my NEW YEAR track since i am 18 days late Rofl. Took a long time to put this together so i am hoping you guys enjoy it when you hear it :) take care and have a good day
Levels are crazy high., it clips way to much. If you can get a handle on the DBS this would sound that bad. Just rememmber. , nobody likes clipping. It was a problem I use to have myself.
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its either that or the noise in Neuro's loop.
And yeah the piano does sound erie :D haha it wasn't intentional to be honest lol, think it comes across that way coz of the atmosphere of the track or something :)
Anyways, always a pleasure hearing from you.
Thanks :D
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