Hi 18, This is a very relaxed track with a pleasant atmosphere and a really nice female voice. And there is nothing to complain about about the mix. All very dreamy and just right for a relaxing moment after hard work. Class!
I really enjoyed the listen.
Very cool one and i would like to sing something to it - only if you don't mind :)
I can do it just for fun to the mp3 and or, if you want, send you the steem(s) dry and wet .....
Hello Jamid. While i wrote the answer to your comment i moved to your track list and searched for your last featured one .... then i found it and read your description and wasnt not sure if i could handle a song for a loved brother who died. cause in am not in a perfect mode for that right now. But i did and was happy that i did so, cause it is a real nice one and i am happy that you tried to make something that is more about your brother and the living with him and stuff, then about the lose of a be loved one. Really great work. I would be happy if someone would do something like that for me when it comes to my end.
I hope you will always remember your brother like this song is - fresh dynamic and catchy dreamy.
stay tuned my friend and be strong
joe
I am not a big fan of jazz stuff but i really like the cool mix of different styles and ideas here. The mix itself sounds really well in my ears and the work with/on the vocals is great. So this must be a burner for all the jazz loving ones :) cause it is really something that is a bit out of the box.
Hey Joe,
I'm sorry for the delay with my response. I've been on LM for over a year and still didn't realize I had to be logged in to get the reply button.
I'm glad you liked this track. I was experimenting with vocals, since everyone seemed to be posting tracks with vocals in them. I couldn't find any vocals that I could do something with so, I had thought about doing backdrops for spoken word a while back so I gave it a shot, broadened my horizons and all that.LOL
It was interesting for me to play without being the focus.
I appreciate your listen and your comments.
:) nice guitar playing. Sounds good to me.
Maybe not a real track but who cares?
Maybe you should cut it in 4 bars and load it all up into the loop section. I bet people will love a good acoustic set.
Sounds good. Nice work so fare. But i think you stopped working on it? Almost 2 and a half years later the same demo and question ......
As Wayne said - remove the auto tune and finish the song and all is good :)
Nice tribute, with good chosen sounds, to a real great artist.
I think i can say that the most of us wouldn't be here if he had never made music. But the most here maybe not even known who he was.
Thanks Friend, I am happy that you enjoyed my modest attempt. I have a great respect for the German Krautrock which I consider the highest form of musical art expressed in the last century. My models have always been bands like Kraftwerk, Tangerine Dream, Neu! and La Dusseldorf, but also individual musicians such as Klaus Schulze. Best wishes
Hello Henry Pascal.
Really nothing bad to say here :)
All sounds good and in the right place. Her voice is really special and i like the vibrato a lot. So i think you done a good job on what you wanted to do.
But in a way i believe that a much darker and a more wave oriented version would have been better. But that is just my opinion and is not any kind of critic at all.
A really nice one to listen to.
Much respect for both of you!
No problem with criticism, if constructive as your is.
Just i don't understand what you mean with "wave oriented".
Sure, to be a seventies theme, is maybe a tad brilliant, and this don't help to give that flavours.
It could be one of the fixing i can do, so... tell me! aahahh
Sounds good too me. A little short maybe but better some good stuff short then some bad stuff long :)
Nice work. So i wonder where your jorny takes you next.
This is really a pleasant job that you are presenting here. Sound nice and dark and as a singer you immediately have the feeling that you should sing something. The sound is wonderful as if played live.
I like it!
stay tuned
joe
(I really wonder why you just want to get in touch via soundcloud and not just use the looperman system?)
Hey this is not that bad like you said :)
Ok, it is a bit borning and need some mmmm more stuff like a vocal line or a melodie but else it sounds fine dark and dangerous.
That sounds really pleasant. Good sounds and proper mixing. If you could still find a woman or a suitable acapella, you could conjure something really special out of it. Or as my predecessor wrote - play a little melody with it.
..... If I think about it, a male voice could go too.
This is really nice stuff.
I like the dynamic and the vibe that's coming from this song.
Sounded really well on my speakers.
And the vocals are hot. Well preformed, well mixed and well mastered.
Nice track for sure. But it sounds a bit to high pass style on parts, for me.
But overall i like the song, cause it sounds fresh and has a nice groove.
This is a really nice produced, dreamy one my friend.
Just in a way i like it a lot. Dark and hypnotic - great!
Some mysterious vocals could/would work for sure to this already good track.
That was a real nice listening to a really good made track.
Very uplifting one, with a nice vibe and a in a way produced that people starts moving. so it has almost all what a good dance track needs. No, it has not almost all, that was wrong, it has all what it needs :)
I really could enjoy the listen to this fine slow hand dreamy one. But i could not get the ghost thing :) cause it is much to "friendly and heavenly" but it is also far away from angels.
So it must be just real good deep human stuff.
Really well played!
I guess as far as ghosts are concerned, I'm way more acceptable of the friendly and heavenly sort than the opposite type. So that's the idea with the peaceful and benign vibes I tried to present.
They always come back! :)
Better be careful when you walk around. At least at night, in the dark and all alone. Mostly you will only have a meeting with a normal stupid zombie but with a little luck there will be one of the higher thinking ones. And all i heard was that they like good CBG player for some fine colabs .....
Well done. Nice sound, nice playing, nice recording, nice feeling!
You're right Joe, they always come back! But what exactly is dead? https://youtu.be/PkJFq9tNe8w The stupid ones are pretty slow and easy to outrun, it's the thinking ones you need to watch. I hear there's a thinking German zombie looking to collab on some cbg music ;) I seem to be pulled in other directions constantly lately. I was just trying out this new build when I thought I better record it because I probably won't get a chance to later, it does need some minor setting up still. I have a new string bass to record with too with another started.
I'm hoping this winter to get a break and record/write again. Just sat down to wind a custom pick up for someone and I get called into work, the new normal...
Really nice stuff to listen to. Everything sounds good to me and the flow is very well done. the vocals sounds great but i really wonder why native english spoken people always forget to put the lyrics to there work. A lot of people here are just like me not to 100% into english and would love to read what they hear to get what you wanna tell us :)
Nice dark, dangerous and for my ears a little deadly track.
Excellent stuff for a bloody story of a man who killed (a) his wife for a strange reason ..... I really enjoyed the listen. I got the horror thing but i didn't got any jazz feeling. But that's just me and i am really not good in genres at all :)
on PLAYGIRL BY AAP FT LEO VALENTINE by djphildrummin
High energy on all level. Cool for sure.
stay tuned
joe
on 06 Twisted Misery by Eighteen
stay tuned
joe
I am happy to hear that the mix sounds good :)
Cheers!
~Eighteen
on The Street Lights Fly By by ClickbaitCabaret
Very cool one and i would like to sing something to it - only if you don't mind :)
I can do it just for fun to the mp3 and or, if you want, send you the steem(s) dry and wet .....
stay tuned
joe
on The Red Star Of Heaven by DijamMusic
I hope you will always remember your brother like this song is - fresh dynamic and catchy dreamy.
stay tuned my friend and be strong
joe
Thank you very much you are a good friend.
Thank you very much for the feedback.
Glad you did like it.
Thanks again Joe.
Maj
on its TIME ft Steelyvibe and Kurt Schroder by Jynxz
Good work
stay tuned
joe
I'm sorry for the delay with my response. I've been on LM for over a year and still didn't realize I had to be logged in to get the reply button.
I'm glad you liked this track. I was experimenting with vocals, since everyone seemed to be posting tracks with vocals in them. I couldn't find any vocals that I could do something with so, I had thought about doing backdrops for spoken word a while back so I gave it a shot, broadened my horizons and all that.LOL
It was interesting for me to play without being the focus.
I appreciate your listen and your comments.
on get well soon by marquecour
Maybe not a real track but who cares?
Maybe you should cut it in 4 bars and load it all up into the loop section. I bet people will love a good acoustic set.
stay tuned
joe
on H O M E by DynamiteSkye
As Wayne said - remove the auto tune and finish the song and all is good :)
stay tuned
joe
on In Memory Of Florian Schneider by Stereonomicon
Nice tribute, with good chosen sounds, to a real great artist.
I think i can say that the most of us wouldn't be here if he had never made music. But the most here maybe not even known who he was.
Good work!
stay tuned
joe
on Xenius99 - 8D Foley FX - PLZr Remix by PLZr
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joe
on 18 feat LeoVal - Youll be alive RetroFuture Vision by HenryPascal
Really nothing bad to say here :)
All sounds good and in the right place. Her voice is really special and i like the vibrato a lot. So i think you done a good job on what you wanted to do.
But in a way i believe that a much darker and a more wave oriented version would have been better. But that is just my opinion and is not any kind of critic at all.
A really nice one to listen to.
Much respect for both of you!
stay tuned
joe
Just i don't understand what you mean with "wave oriented".
Sure, to be a seventies theme, is maybe a tad brilliant, and this don't help to give that flavours.
It could be one of the fixing i can do, so... tell me! aahahh
on DJ Arlph-Black Smokes by JCJMusic
Nice work. So i wonder where your jorny takes you next.
All the best
stay tuned
joe
on MurdaCase by KnightHeir
Extremely good approach, respect!
stay tuned
joe
on birds that fly against thunder by Farlord
I like it!
stay tuned
joe
(I really wonder why you just want to get in touch via soundcloud and not just use the looperman system?)
on BAD -actually is by LilDiaper
Ok, it is a bit borning and need some mmmm more stuff like a vocal line or a melodie but else it sounds fine dark and dangerous.
stay tuned
joe
on Chill instrumental by Quasisea
..... If I think about it, a male voice could go too.
Definitely a very dreamy song.
I like it!
stay tuned
joe
on Cool Like You by BCVProductions
I like the dynamic and the vibe that's coming from this song.
Sounded really well on my speakers.
And the vocals are hot. Well preformed, well mixed and well mastered.
excellent!
stay tuned
joe
on Imagine That I Wanna by JackLake
But overall i like the song, cause it sounds fresh and has a nice groove.
stay tuned
joe
I think I know what you mean, I'll think about in the future. I'm just doing trial error at the moment so trying different mastering sounds!
on WiseManLynnjr tell me lies ft Degrassi piano by Wisemanlynnjr
stay tuned
joe
on Heart of fantasy by adamms
Just in a way i like it a lot. Dark and hypnotic - great!
Some mysterious vocals could/would work for sure to this already good track.
I really enjoyed the listen
stay tuned
joe
on Raveyard by acesmith
Very uplifting one, with a nice vibe and a in a way produced that people starts moving. so it has almost all what a good dance track needs. No, it has not almost all, that was wrong, it has all what it needs :)
stay tuned
joe
on NO EVIDENCE by Frostdog
on Ghost in my Guitar by Neomorpheus
So it must be just real good deep human stuff.
Really well played!
stay tuned
joe
Thanks for the listen and comment Joe.
on Walking Dead by Burtsbluesboxes
Better be careful when you walk around. At least at night, in the dark and all alone. Mostly you will only have a meeting with a normal stupid zombie but with a little luck there will be one of the higher thinking ones. And all i heard was that they like good CBG player for some fine colabs .....
Well done. Nice sound, nice playing, nice recording, nice feeling!
stay tuned
joe
I'm hoping this winter to get a break and record/write again. Just sat down to wind a custom pick up for someone and I get called into work, the new normal...
on Paralyzed by Stretchfyb
cool one and i enjoyed the listen.
stay tuned
joe
on THE CHOKE - Blood loss DEMO by thechockehold
Excellent stuff for a bloody story of a man who killed (a) his wife for a strange reason ..... I really enjoyed the listen. I got the horror thing but i didn't got any jazz feeling. But that's just me and i am really not good in genres at all :)
Great work!
stay tuned
joe