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Description : My first attempt at a hip hop track from scratch. Help me out, what does this track need to give it a true hip hop flow?

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  1. doofus
    doofus on Sun 30th May 2021 - 1 month ago

    I know you put this out there a long time ago, but it's still pretty sick man! And just for clarification, that is a good thing!

  2. Noctavius
    Noctavius on Sun 14th Dec 2014 - 6 years ago

    TALENTED INDEED!! Keep experimenting with different music man...if anything i would say make those drums more sticking ya dig...other than that...YOUR DOPE!!!

  3. ThaTruth1
    ThaTruth1 on Fri 1st Aug 2014 - 6 years ago

    I enjoy that voice sample. Drums are kicking. Had me rolling this early in the morning. Haha

  4. soundhound
    soundhound on Sat 31st May 2014 - 7 years ago

    This moves like it's going somewhere, solid mix with lots of flavour...
    You could have someone spitting some logic...Lyrically to meet the depth
    and swagger of the track..Can't be no stupid stuff...
    Also a guitar with style and simple lines...other then that the tracks talkin
    smack.. :-)

    Outstandingly done...

    Peace...TG.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thank you TG... I appreciate your comments and recommendations.

  5. SteelCityRed
    SteelCityRed on Sat 31st May 2014 - 7 years ago

    This Is Tight Ronabo After You Put The Finishing Touches On It I Would Like To Feature On It. Or Do A Song To It.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks SteelCityRed... I will contact you when I am done with it. I would like to hear a song on the track.

    Ronabo

  6. StrikingDaggers
    StrikingDaggers on Sun 13th Apr 2014 - 7 years ago

    Tight track Ronabo! I can't believe this is your first time. This is Hip-Hop for sure. I really like when track breaks in at the 1:15 point. What I would do personal is add a little more thump / bass to the kick and some crispness / reverb to the snare. Just my two cents but I also usually make old school Hip-Hop beats. I really like what you have so far. Nice work.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Hey Shatner, Yeah it is my first real attempt to a hip hop track. I normally play a lot of jazz chords and chill music. I really appreciate the feedback and glad to know that you think is a tight track. I find it difficult to mix and master tracks. I hope I can figure out how to get the thump and crispness necessary for hip hop. Thanks again bro.

    Ronabo

  7. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Thu 10th Apr 2014 - 7 years ago

    I think the mix is what would make this track sound more hip-hop.The track is great, and hip-hop comes in all flavors, but if you are going for that traditional hip-hop sound..I think building the mix around the kick would be a good start for this track.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks man. I plan to focus more on the mix to get a better sound. Good feedback.

  8. radioilluminati
    radioilluminati on Thu 10th Apr 2014 - 7 years ago

    I have one advice for you. If you don't over-compress your music, then it will not be as loud as other tracks, but the dynamic range will be greater(sounds better). My latest track is not over-compressed so it has more dynamic range: http://turnmeup.org/

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    good point... thanks man.

  9. benjizo
    benjizo on Thu 10th Apr 2014 - 7 years ago

    This is a good one,not bad for the first attempt.You got good synths there.Good one Ronabo.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thank you Benjizo. I hope to improve and get that radio sound. I appreciate you listening.

    Ronabo

  10. radioilluminati
    radioilluminati on Thu 10th Apr 2014 - 7 years ago

    You made a good track there! It is different than other Hip Hop beats. Different is good, because it makes you unique. Why make music sound like anybody else. Non of us look are are the same, why should our music not reflect our uniqueness?

    I didn't notice anything that was not working.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thank you radioilluminati for the feedback and comments. You are right about our uniqueness.

  11. CognacXE
    CognacXE on Thu 10th Apr 2014 - 7 years ago

    Man... Those synths pulled me in from the start!!! I can't overstate how much I love the synths here! Very easy to follow along with. Even the way you transitioned was very strong. I'd love to have this on my gym playlist. looking forward to see what else you do with it. Hell, this would even make a solid stand alone interlude.

    Great work,

    Cognac
    Cognac

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks Cognac. I appreciate the comments bro. I'll let you know when I am done with. It should be soon.

    Ronabo

  12. AviatOfficial
    AviatOfficial on Thu 10th Apr 2014 - 7 years ago

    WOW this is great...!!!
    Flow is good as a Hip-Hop song would be.I mean you have maintained the Hip-Hop/Rap structure here...!!

    Really loved those beats.Well programmed.I think you can lower the claps a bit and can add some Reverb to beats.

    Those piano variations are addictive and cool.Gives a real feel of Pop/Hip-Hop.

    Bass-line is really good.You can tweak it a little bit.I think its sounding more like a Dance or House bass(i think its only for me....don't change those keys,pitch and all....Just tweak it a little bit)

    Song is really perfect.You can extend it by 1 Minute..!!
    Awesomely produced....!!

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks for the feedback, Advait07. I really appreciate it. I still have work to do on it. I will add a little reverb to the drums, I think that is a good idea. I am going to add a bridge I think to compliment the track and see what happens.

    Ronabo

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