Hit it you have ( sounding like Yoda!!)a masterful track, music and vocals sitting together nicely.. definitely an Orlando influence in there, but with more than enough of your originality. I Recognise some of the loops but cant quite place them!! Just a couple of minor points - the intro is good but just wondering whether a male choral effect might add to it ( say between 0.10-0.22 when you have a really nice change)and just wandering if the change at 1.05 when the vocals kick in could be sweetened slightly? Just my humble opinion, and considering the crap track I have recently uploaded I should talk!!! No escaping the fact however that this is a very very good track. Well done and I will be spinning this on loopradio if that is ok with you. Thanks for sharing.
I did a version of this using Magix..going to delete it now having listened to this!, great use of the loops on Magix, and congratulations on the final mix, superb stuff!!
Potentially the makings of a great track, the two reviews so far are pretty on the mark, but not too difficult to fix and if you do sort the intro and outro it would be great to see the track a little longer because when it is going its a fab track. Neat work.
what a great track!! just two things...I think vocals are just a little drowned and the track seems to tail off way before the end?...it may just be me. Would like to spin on loopradio show tomorrow if ok.
I really like this, great beat, nice bridge with vocals sitting just right and the guitars are really tasty, almost got a 70's funk feel. Shame about no download, I would really liked to have spun this on my loopradio show. Good work.
What a gem of a track, love the intro, bridge then banging piano, a really nice use of choral effects (would have liked more!!) if anything some of the transitions were a little bit sloppy and just need a bit of polish, but this did not detract from a real good song. Great job.
Apologies for not commenting sooner ( I thought I had!) this was a track I played on my first ever loopradio show back in February, and rightly so. I love everything about this track, the way you set the scene, the subtle changes..but above all its a banging very well produced track. Thanks for letting me play it Steve.
Well have listened to your previous work and you have a lot of talent, and I don't mean that lightly! ok with this one you have all the basics right, a really good into, great bridge at 1.07 and some really clear vocals, the downside is some of the transitions were a bit messy and the shouted vocals really did nothing to enhance the track at all.. I would have banged in some strong but softer chorus vocals instead..hey that's only my opinion. This is still a good track and well thought out. Good luck with your new Magix software, its brilliant gear and I cant wait to hear more from you.
Once again you have produced a class track ( had a listen to some of your other tracks as well) and I am just amazed at your diverse talent! back to this one...just great work and like the most of the others, the piano work is faultless. Great job.
Overall a great sound and great use of DJghostSwedens 'pella, the mix in general is spot on, sure there a one or two sound issues which you know about, but doesn't detract from this being a class track.
A Pretty good track and in general all fits nicely, yes there is some tweaking to do ( vocals v music) the vocal coming back in at 1.45 is a bit messy, all easily sorted. A real good effort and I like it.
Just a perfect perfect track, love the guitar, drums and vocals ( oh I wish for a download..this tune is spinning round in my head). A great tune and great tribute. Many thanks for sharing Benham.
Hi dear Mark/larry
many thnx for attention & shared comment.
and my appology for download premission about vocal version of this music . particulary i had no problem to allow this one for download buT acording to I was not supposed to publish this cooperation with Mike & due to my great respect for Mike , I haven't allopwed this to be downloadable.other wise for sure especiallY for example U're one of the persons who is always free ( from myside) to have any downloadable or not downloadable trials of mine in this site.but generallY & this track away too , Mark almost majority of
my friends whom U usually may can find their comments below my trials ,are my friends who we're connected by mail & they'll recceive all my trials in email even if U may see that trial is not downloadable from looperman.for example if we look to this trial so far there's 10 comments & 8 commenter are those friends whom I'm honoured to send them
instrumental version of this track b y myself in email & just U & FreeRadical are the colleagues that we're not connected by email & that's in a situation in which I usually have this chance to have your idea below my trials (in recently time)so I'll write my email for U right now , and right in the same way I do with the other friends , I'll be honoured to send instrumental version of this for U too .
generally I'm not glad whenever I don't allow for download Mark...but I live in Iran,where copyright & royalty are not observed even by islamic murder governmenT in official media & I can never do anything if someone may abuse my trials in any manner ..& unfortunately majority of looperman id's too are fake names ,silent & the people who U never see they upload anything..& they just download our trials & then delet their profile..just if U take a look to my previous upload ''100''for thinking to street children'' U'll see for example 27-8 download that 25 download are fake,unknown or deleted persons ...& that's the reason why sometimes I don't allow my trials ....in fact that ''don't allow download''means for those fake persons...other wise i was honoured to always see all musicians who have uploaded even just one track in looperman download anyone of my trials...well obviously U're someone who doesn't need my trials cause he can compose something better if he really want to do as a more throughbred composer than me..so not needed me to describe there ain't be any problem from myside to see your id has downloaded all my trials...many thnx for attention & best wishes my friend.___B
I am big fan of your work and this is no exception, whilst I can see where Danke is coming from, I would call this fresh vintage if that makes any sense!! A great job with the transition between the two tunes, this is synth music at its best. Thumbs up Anders.
ok... big fan of my work.. I really hope you understand how much those words mean to me, and the following "this is synth music at its best" is out of this world.
Great mix, steady beat, vocals fit nicely (yes maybe a bit loud but not excessive, a bit of re- mastering would take this to another level)and the whole track feels good. Nice work.
Good stuff so far, I would like to see drums/kicks come in at around 0.10, the bass is a good touch and you can build on this. Try a bit more variance with the synths, some drops through the harpsichord synth would really make a difference. Look forward to the finished track. Good luck.
A Really good track, the vocals work so well, and I love the use of the bell. The synths and beat have a nice feel throughout, though a little more bass would have been good, there are also a couple of areas that need a little tweak... but overall a sweet piece of work.
thanks mark.think i knbow which areas need a tweak so i am going to keep workin this little by little till its very polished. cheers for the feedback bro
Great track, love the intro then the change at 0.38, some nice interchanges from.038 - 2.10, great guitar in the bridge and then into the outro, the outro was great as well. Nice vocal effect too. I Had the feel off U2 and New Years Day with the Piano sound ( that's probably just me!!)A really good piece of work, a fav for me and welcome back!
Hey thanks Mark/Larry! Glad you like this. Appreciate the comments and it's good to be back. I'll be posting more soon and listening to other inspiring tunes on here as well. Peace out! Dan
Fun fun fun!! it is a cross between pure pop and dance. A really nice listen and the only fault is as Dan says the vocals do tend to jump in a little bit. Good work all the same, thanks for the share and a play on loopradio for sure.
on Sweetheart Runner by TinyFinger
Will be playing it this Saturday between 10-10.30pm UK time if ok with you.
Thanks a lot,
Mark/Larry!
on Ecuador Dena rmx by denisrdena1
Its a good effort, and it does it for me. Nice job.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on My Light by Coopy
It hits the spot for me, no complaints. Keep them coming.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Sweetheart Runner by TinyFinger
Hit it you have ( sounding like Yoda!!)a masterful track, music and vocals sitting together nicely.. definitely an Orlando influence in there, but with more than enough of your originality. I Recognise some of the loops but cant quite place them!! Just a couple of minor points - the intro is good but just wondering whether a male choral effect might add to it ( say between 0.10-0.22 when you have a really nice change)and just wandering if the change at 1.05 when the vocals kick in could be sweetened slightly? Just my humble opinion, and considering the crap track I have recently uploaded I should talk!!! No escaping the fact however that this is a very very good track. Well done and I will be spinning this on loopradio if that is ok with you. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Heart of Stone by DJSYNTHO
I did a version of this using Magix..going to delete it now having listened to this!, great use of the loops on Magix, and congratulations on the final mix, superb stuff!!
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Making Me Melt by StrawHatDJ
Well you have done a neat job with this, just love the speed and attack, I could see this being background music in a film. like it.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Modern India by RealProblemShuckers
Potentially the makings of a great track, the two reviews so far are pretty on the mark, but not too difficult to fix and if you do sort the intro and outro it would be great to see the track a little longer because when it is going its a fab track. Neat work.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on ROVER Tralectrouse BirdVerb Vocal Mix by demostar
what a great track!! just two things...I think vocals are just a little drowned and the track seems to tail off way before the end?...it may just be me. Would like to spin on loopradio show tomorrow if ok.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
I Greets
Mark ;)
on SOS feat nightingale by raymond2wilson
I really like this, great beat, nice bridge with vocals sitting just right and the guitars are really tasty, almost got a 70's funk feel. Shame about no download, I would really liked to have spun this on my loopradio show. Good work.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
https://soundcloud.com/raymond2wilson/help-you
Or as original
https://soundcloud.com/raymond2wilson/sos-0314-feat-nightingale
Best Regards
on Piano Trance Project by jnoriega
What a gem of a track, love the intro, bridge then banging piano, a really nice use of choral effects (would have liked more!!) if anything some of the transitions were a little bit sloppy and just need a bit of polish, but this did not detract from a real good song. Great job.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Unit EM ft Raphael Tate Delreco Harris- speechless by UnitEM
love the beat and the vocals sitting nicely through the mix. nice track.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Yan Russ - I don t know-radio edit by YanRuss
Just such a great mix and well produced, big thumbs up.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Dancing To The War Drums by crucethus
Apologies for not commenting sooner ( I thought I had!) this was a track I played on my first ever loopradio show back in February, and rightly so. I love everything about this track, the way you set the scene, the subtle changes..but above all its a banging very well produced track. Thanks for letting me play it Steve.
Very best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on 15 Minutes Isnt All We Can Have by MOONLYTE
Well have listened to your previous work and you have a lot of talent, and I don't mean that lightly! ok with this one you have all the basics right, a really good into, great bridge at 1.07 and some really clear vocals, the downside is some of the transitions were a bit messy and the shouted vocals really did nothing to enhance the track at all.. I would have banged in some strong but softer chorus vocals instead..hey that's only my opinion. This is still a good track and well thought out. Good luck with your new Magix software, its brilliant gear and I cant wait to hear more from you.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Of darkness and stars by johnnyproducing
Once again you have produced a class track ( had a listen to some of your other tracks as well) and I am just amazed at your diverse talent! back to this one...just great work and like the most of the others, the piano work is faultless. Great job.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
I will try to stay diverse in what I produce and I think that it is fun to try different styles. I will see what I can come up with next time
Thanks again for the kind words
on Make Me Move feat DjGhostSweden by Leverett
Overall a great sound and great use of DJghostSwedens 'pella, the mix in general is spot on, sure there a one or two sound issues which you know about, but doesn't detract from this being a class track.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Moments in space by FreeRadical
Well I don't mind which area this sits in, for me it is vibrant, banging, fresh and fantastic. Does an aspirin and big mac count!! great stuff!
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Bastille - Bad Blood - Remix - FreeDownload by Lenerd73
A Pretty good track and in general all fits nicely, yes there is some tweaking to do ( vocals v music) the vocal coming back in at 1.45 is a bit messy, all easily sorted. A real good effort and I like it.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on 1981 featuring MStokes by deciBel
Just a perfect perfect track, love the guitar, drums and vocals ( oh I wish for a download..this tune is spinning round in my head). A great tune and great tribute. Many thanks for sharing Benham.
Respect and best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
many thnx for attention & shared comment.
and my appology for download premission about vocal version of this music . particulary i had no problem to allow this one for download buT acording to I was not supposed to publish this cooperation with Mike & due to my great respect for Mike , I haven't allopwed this to be downloadable.other wise for sure especiallY for example U're one of the persons who is always free ( from myside) to have any downloadable or not downloadable trials of mine in this site.but generallY & this track away too , Mark almost majority of
my friends whom U usually may can find their comments below my trials ,are my friends who we're connected by mail & they'll recceive all my trials in email even if U may see that trial is not downloadable from looperman.for example if we look to this trial so far there's 10 comments & 8 commenter are those friends whom I'm honoured to send them
instrumental version of this track b y myself in email & just U & FreeRadical are the colleagues that we're not connected by email & that's in a situation in which I usually have this chance to have your idea below my trials (in recently time)so I'll write my email for U right now , and right in the same way I do with the other friends , I'll be honoured to send instrumental version of this for U too .
generally I'm not glad whenever I don't allow for download Mark...but I live in Iran,where copyright & royalty are not observed even by islamic murder governmenT in official media & I can never do anything if someone may abuse my trials in any manner ..& unfortunately majority of looperman id's too are fake names ,silent & the people who U never see they upload anything..& they just download our trials & then delet their profile..just if U take a look to my previous upload ''100''for thinking to street children'' U'll see for example 27-8 download that 25 download are fake,unknown or deleted persons ...& that's the reason why sometimes I don't allow my trials ....in fact that ''don't allow download''means for those fake persons...other wise i was honoured to always see all musicians who have uploaded even just one track in looperman download anyone of my trials...well obviously U're someone who doesn't need my trials cause he can compose something better if he really want to do as a more throughbred composer than me..so not needed me to describe there ain't be any problem from myside to see your id has downloaded all my trials...many thnx for attention & best wishes my friend.___B
on Space bells from inner world by aelmen
I am big fan of your work and this is no exception, whilst I can see where Danke is coming from, I would call this fresh vintage if that makes any sense!! A great job with the transition between the two tunes, this is synth music at its best. Thumbs up Anders.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
Thank you Larry!
/Anders
on Within Your Soul by drmvss
Great mix, steady beat, vocals fit nicely (yes maybe a bit loud but not excessive, a bit of re- mastering would take this to another level)and the whole track feels good. Nice work.
Best wishes/Mark/Larry!
on Silent Spotlight by AviatOfficial
Good stuff so far, I would like to see drums/kicks come in at around 0.10, the bass is a good touch and you can build on this. Try a bit more variance with the synths, some drops through the harpsichord synth would really make a difference. Look forward to the finished track. Good luck.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Debunked by cosmicinfluence
A Really good track, the vocals work so well, and I love the use of the bell. The synths and beat have a nice feel throughout, though a little more bass would have been good, there are also a couple of areas that need a little tweak... but overall a sweet piece of work.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on AWAKENING by dansjoy4
Great track, love the intro then the change at 0.38, some nice interchanges from.038 - 2.10, great guitar in the bridge and then into the outro, the outro was great as well. Nice vocal effect too. I Had the feel off U2 and New Years Day with the Piano sound ( that's probably just me!!)A really good piece of work, a fav for me and welcome back!
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Sexy Girl Nex Door Ft Mr Shammi by Bathers
Fun fun fun!! it is a cross between pure pop and dance. A really nice listen and the only fault is as Dan says the vocals do tend to jump in a little bit. Good work all the same, thanks for the share and a play on loopradio for sure.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
I thank you for that you took the time to hear it and for your nice comment that makes me feel good :-)
I love to listen it to http://www.loopradio.net/
Greetings
Bathers