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CitizenMofo

Los Angeles, United States
Joined : 20th Jun 2013 - 12 years ago
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Danke
Danke 6th Mar 2017 20:43 - 8 years ago

on STAND YOUR GROUND by CitizenMofo
what a stunning track...play music with full heart...play live music with only 1 acoustics and give a feeling as a band played not much artist can do that...filled with life, strength and strong lyrics that's what this extraordinary song gave to me...all my hats off...

10/10

handshake, Danke
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 7th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, Danke, your words made me very happy. You've chased away my self-doubts for this morning and made me feel like a king. THANK YOU.
mindhiest
mindhiest 6th Mar 2017 03:20 - 8 years ago

on STAND YOUR GROUND by CitizenMofo
perfect! absolutely beautiful. added instruments would of taken away for this simplistic beauty.vocals beautiful. that said, me personally would add a faint string drone. but that is me. got a fav.

roland
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 6th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, roland. The thing just blossomed when I took away the rest of the music, like clouds blown away from the sun. There's just something about her voice in this one... Interesting thought about the string drone - but when you've crossed the line you've crossed it and it's a slippery slope. A string drone leads to some piano accents leads to a bit of harmonica...and you're off to the races. Sometimes I say to myself, Do not cross that line, motherfucker! And so I don't. Thank you!
mindhiest
mindhiest 6th Mar 2017 03:19 - 8 years ago

on STAND YOUR GROUND by CitizenMofo
perfect! absolutely beautiful. added instruments would of taken away for this simplistic beauty. that said, me personally would add a faint string drone. but that is me. got a fav.

roland
JensTonic
JensTonic 6th Mar 2017 00:34 - 8 years ago

on STAND YOUR GROUND by CitizenMofo
The guitar sounds awesome on this track! But your vocals! wow! Great job!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 6th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks, JensTonic. Both the guitar playing and singing were done by Sunny War. So what the heck do I do, you might ask? Good question. Write the songs, produce. But with some songs, like this one, all you hear is Sunny.
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 5th Mar 2017 20:36 - 8 years ago

on STAND YOUR GROUND by CitizenMofo
Absolutely beautiful. Love the minimal approach, so vulnerable and personal, vocals and only guitar. We've become a society of intolerance and bigots, religion is no help either, I'll leave it at that. If we would work together, embrace each others differences then we could accomplish amazing feats, and maybe if there is intelligent life in the universe they just may contact us instead of sitting back learning what NOT to do from us. http://imgur.com/JwNw6PH Making slow progress, but here's a teaser :p
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 6th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
Right on, brother. Our institutions have failed us - are actively failing us. It's up to us as individuals. Just to be decent to each other. Seems we've forgotten how to do that. Lincoln had it right so long ago with his Divided House speech. And yet we still haven't learned. Mass protest is important - and necessary now - but even more important is personal kindness and decency to the people around you. As naive as that sounds. As you say, if we could do that, we could accomplish amazing feats. Because hate takes so much energy, whereas love is fuel for life. The cigar box looks really cool with the train, it's gonna be awesome. Thank you.
Neomorpheus
Neomorpheus 5th Mar 2017 18:32 - 8 years ago

on STAND YOUR GROUND by CitizenMofo
Yeah I totally agree the minimal aspect here really allows the focus to remain on the vocal and the power of the words. The guitar track is clean with beautiful tonality and the playing is tight. I like the choice of using a picking style here instead of strummed chords. Extremely well played, with some really slick articulation. The lyrics are poignant and convey a powerful message that is still a real issue within our racially divided society. Its a sad song really. To me it relates a view that when you break it down is really common to all sides. We continue to allow differences and past mistakes to cloud our judgement and foster mistrust and hatred. I someday hope songs like this won't have to be written bro, but who knows when or if that day will ever come.

Irrespective, excellent job with this one.
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 5th Mar 2017 - 8 years ago
Very very well put about the message, Neomorpheus, and I couldn't agree more. Yes, the golden rule is about fairness to all sides. Yet, while we claim to be a christian society, we'd be lucky if in fact 1 in 10 in our country follow it. Seems it's all become about hate, and power, and money, and pushing people's buttons in such a way that it absolutely precludes thought, judgment and decency. I've been around a while and seen a lot of bullshit and the resulting violence, but this is the worst it's been in my 50+ lifetime. So I'll keep writing my little songs because that seems better than a primal scream of rage. I really appreciate your thoughtful listen and comments.
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 27th Feb 2017 15:48 - 8 years ago

on LITTLE CLOWN by CitizenMofo
Hello Mofo.
Wow mate I do love the voice in this track.
The drum at the beginning it give you for a few second only some sort of anticipation feeling like you awaiting to be executed then the voice takes over to give you come and in your comfort zone feeling.
I absolutely love it and can't wait for the album to be released.
Really well done to you mate bravo.

Jamid
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 27th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, Jamid. I did not mean to make you feel like you were about to be executed, but yes, that voice - if I have to die, well it'd be ok listening to Sunny's voice. Just not anytime soon though! We'll be in the studio tonight doing another new song, so just days away from finishing the album. So 8'll be done tonight, with 2 half-done. I can't wait either. :)
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 26th Feb 2017 18:20 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
Any custom requests for that train tin cbg , like right or left handed, oak/maple fretboard/neck, colors or natural wood, anything special written on it (I sign and date them all and write built for 'name')? Got an oak neck blank ready to go and a maple piece ready to become a neck blank. I'll pm you to work out postage details when get to that point, will be a few weeks. Any customizations are simple when I know in advance of the build. Stay safe in those riots!!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 27th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Hey man, thank you.

She's right-handed.
Oak's always been my favorite wood. I don't really care though - maple would be beautiful as well. Since oak's ready to go, maybe oak. Natural finish, please.

I think all it needs to say is:
Built for Sunny War

"The Lone Rider"

That plus the train really says it all. Your signature and date. Doesn't need my name on it.

I'll look for your instructions as to postage. Thanks!
onlyhits
onlyhits 22nd Feb 2017 20:00 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
Great message and song! Very well produced, keep it up!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 27th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks, MelodicDreamer. Keeping it up is the only option!
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine 22nd Feb 2017 11:25 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
amazing !
it's a real lovable cinematic track .
I like space rock taste of guitar in it , and singer's voice .
I admire the subject (protest) of this .
very welldone .

Elena
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 22nd Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks, Elena. I appreciate your listening and your kind comments, which I'll pass on to Sunny War, the singer and guitar player. Thanks again!
mindhiest
mindhiest 22nd Feb 2017 02:48 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
awesome track. love what you did with the vocals. very dramatic sound. I picture a slow motion sequence with this. great job.
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 22nd Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, mindhiest. I really appreciate the comment and am glad you enjoyed it. Nothing makes a songmaker happier. I'll pass on your comment to Sunny.
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 21st Feb 2017 22:02 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
Hello CitizenMofo
I think you've done a wonderful job here.
I love the sound of the whole composition.
I love the dramatic sound of the whole of the composition. 
As regard to your description mate I do agree with you Wholeheartedly.
Really Well done.
Jamid
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 22nd Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, Jamid! Our music is heartfelt and I'm really happy it struck a chord with you. Along with the sentiment behind it. I appreciate your listen and comment.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 21st Feb 2017 20:15 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
Yo.

Good bell, decent groove and a nice, big synth rise and then it's vocals time. Everything's sitting nicely and I can hear her really well.

0:41 things get bigger and better. It's a good chorus. Most people wouldn't complain but those trap hi hats annoy me a bit . Probably a reminder of hearing them in so many shit trap songs.

Nice, wide stereo field. This is really well produced. A slightly minimal feel but there's also quite enough going on. A moving track.

1:56 that's a decent break and I like the fat drum loop. Then some more prominent guitar. Guitar is sort of subtle in this. I don't think of it as an obvious guitar track. Reversed guitar in the chorus is cool and adds an extra dimension to things but I might not have noticed it as being reversed if you hadn't pointed it out.

Nice, final chord ending. Much better than a fadeout. Nothing really to criticise so congratulations again!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 22nd Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks, StaticNomad. I always appreciate your thorough attention and generous comments. Yes, this is not a big guitar song where you go, holy crap! that's some crazy good guitar playing! We did a couple of those songs last night - just massively transformed by Sunny's guitar, though we had to work at it, doesn't always fall from the sky, but does always come, if we're patient. Songs that are GUITAR SONGS. Those really hit the spot. But with this one, a lot of the loop orchestration survived, even some of the guitar loops, and Sunny played around and within it. More GUITAR SONGS coming soon though - songs where Sunny shines like no one else. Also, kudos to David, our guy at In Fidelity Recordings in LA - it's just one guy. There's just 3 of us in there and so he's very important in capturing the sounds, helping to shape the mix, and keeping things rolling and efficient. By the way, I'm trying a specialty mastering service for the first time, just heard the free sample of one of our tracks - it really does sound way better. Fuller, richer, louder but still well-defined high quality. Sorry to blather on but thought that's something you might be interested in.
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 21st Feb 2017 00:07 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
Music soothes the savage beast. Peaceful protest gets alot further than violence. The country is divided and people are acting fkn insane! I'm out in the country so not much going on around here, nice and quiet just the way I like it. 'If we focus on helping each other, maybe we can climb back into the land of the sane' you speak truth right there CM. If more people would just see that. Keep doing what you do, loving the tunes!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 21st Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, phatkatz. Yeah I'm too busy making music to hate anybody right now. And every time I make a new song with Sunny I feel like hugging someone instead of punching someone. So there must be something to that savage beast bit! Thanks for listening and commenting. Let's all try to stay sane and nice!
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 18th Feb 2017 17:51 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
I love the beautifully sparse arrangement. It really allows the vocals to shine. I'm definitely getting a Florence and the Machine vibe from the chorus Vox.
It's a good message and shows that sometimes it is best to protest against injustice through empathy instead of anger.

TA
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 20th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks for the listen and comment, TA. Florence and the Machine - I hadn't thought of that but now that you said it, yeah, definitely! Yes, I am full of rage, and it scares me. So I am trying to turn it into music instead of something ugly. Focus on the things I'm for and not the things I'm against. It does me some good, at least. Again, thanks.
Danke
Danke 18th Feb 2017 09:06 - 8 years ago

on HEY BUDDY HEY by CitizenMofo
great song again...you can't make a mistake with this voice...brilliant groovy this time and the structure is awesome too...soft parts than the 'radical' ones...

handshake, Danke
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 20th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks, danke. I had fun writing this one and Sunny as always hit it out of the park. We're recording tonight - can't wait. Many's the danke loop that will be involved...
Daniall
Daniall 17th Feb 2017 15:01 - 8 years ago

on WE RE COMING by CitizenMofo
well i don't like rap on rock beats . guitar sound makes me feel alive .
it's a good corporation .good job man .
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 16th Feb 2017 15:24 - 8 years ago

on WE RE COMING by CitizenMofo
What an awesome collaboration. Like all good protest songs it really gets the blood pumping. When people try to tackle important issues in music, I often find that they have good intentions but no conviction. The whole message lands flat against deaf ears.
This song has a lot of passion from all the players and that is infectious.

Excellent stuff.

TA
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 16th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
TA, you just made my day. As far as passion, you're talking to a guy with the Bill of Rights tattooed on him, and the Preamble, and...goes on. You never know how things will come across to others and sometimes you just feel plain crazy, like am I the only one who gives a shit?, so your comments made me very happy. Thank you!
kingmadi
kingmadi 16th Feb 2017 15:13 - 8 years ago

on WE RE COMING by CitizenMofo
Wow this is amazing. I really enjoy music that gives us a voice. Thanks for this!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 16th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks, kingmadi! I am smiling now.
kingmadi
kingmadi 16th Feb 2017 15:08 - 8 years ago

on THIS ROAD by CitizenMofo
Wow I'm astonished. I don't even know what to say haha... keep it up!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 16th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, kingmadi! I was a bit down earlier, wondering wtf am I doing?, and you and looperman picked me right up. I appreciate it.
mindhiest
mindhiest 15th Feb 2017 07:04 - 8 years ago

on SLEEPING BEAUTY by CitizenMofo
this is amazing piece of work. great vocals. love that (destuction?) guitar sound.not sure if that is what it is called, nice almost dark but not quite. beautiful,
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine 14th Feb 2017 22:33 - 8 years ago

on H E Y by CitizenMofo
hey , I dig it , it rocks .

you have used megapaul guitar loops ,that german guitar player ,
if you mean those rhythm guitar and power chord .

as a rock fan , I enjoyed this one too .
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine 14th Feb 2017 22:26 - 8 years ago

on THIS ROAD by CitizenMofo
hey it was a briliant music !
what a good voice you have !!
:)
to be honest after seeing that avatar I didn't expect
a female singer !
it's superb .

Elena :)
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 15th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks, Elena! Actually, that is me in the avatar, although since then I've gotten another large tattoo on my back. (Last one.) The singer is indeed a female named Sunny War, who I met busking on Venice Beach the day after Thanksgiving last year and realized immediately that she was very special. We started collaborating in December and are making a series of albums together. I'll pass on your comment to her. Thanks so much for the listen and response!
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 14th Feb 2017 18:11 - 8 years ago

on THIS ROAD by CitizenMofo
Oohh fk yeah! Plz don't stop! I post alot of music exclusively to this site. Looperman has had alot to do with keeping me making music, and is only the BEST music community on the web :p
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 15th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Looperman is awesome. There's no way I could even come close to doing what I'm doing without it. Every time I come here and start listening to loops I'm inspired and something comes out of it. Long live Looperman!
imakebeatsLF
imakebeatsLF 14th Feb 2017 18:03 - 8 years ago

on THIS ROAD by CitizenMofo
liking the experimental melody of this track, lots of interesting elements to it! Vocals are good and sit really well I think, good production quality and all round great track

ebaby's 'the move' bass is awesome, I've used it in a couple of tracks before, the low end is so warm and shaky

keep at it guys

PEACE

(LF)
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo replied 15th Feb 2017 - 8 years ago
Thank you, LF. Yeah that's a killer bass loop. In fact, I think maybe the bass overall needs to be a little bigger in the track. The melody came out of the bass loop with the talking in it, just rose out of that groove, and then actually Sunny changed it up some when we recorded - since we have completely opposite voices. Saturday, there was nothing. Monday, there was that recording. It's so friggin fun to do this stuff. Anyway, thank you for the comment and I'm glad you liked it.
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