CitizenMofo...man..you are really kicking it through the goal posts with these tracks you are doing with Sunny...I`m usng my old Sony MDV600 cans tonight to listen (they push the highs a bit much but no hell on the lows) but the mix sounds really good in all frequencies these old ears can hear.....agree with Steve..you are going to have a super album..If I had been hearing a couple of your tunes on the radio I would have been looking for who it was done them...For somebody who claims to play nothing you sure have an ear for the composition...my old habits would likely have tried to throw in a little key variation or 2 in this one but at the same time I was enjoying it all the way...Sunny rocks and you are cooking up some good recipes with her....Ed
Thanks, Ed. Always, massive thanks. As for the key variations, so the other day at the studio with Sunny I'm like, "OK, there's this guy, Tumbleweed, Ed, on looperman, who's talking about key changes. How do you do that?" And so we talked about it and decided to look for places where we can do some key/chord changes. So - I'm learning, and someday soon you'll hear some changes.
Well, it's true, I can't play an instrument and I sing like a frog. (Nonetheless, I made an album called WWIII in 2015 where I sang all 17 songs - that was a big, dumb mistake, and I killed the album in shame as soon as I finished it.)) I've made music in my head since I was 2 but instead became a writer because words were my other thing. Young marriage, kids, raised 'em to adults, 40 years go by, and then a few years ago I started writing songs to capture the music in my head and began climbing the ladder to BETTER. Hundreds of songs later I'm finally getting somewhere, and Sunny is the magic ingredient that brings it all together. This is most fun I've had in a long, long time. It's just pure joy.
Slow, heavily reverbed drums are always a nice way to start. Very nice, clean bassline. Vocals are great without a lot of actual singing. Delivery is fantastic. Some lyrics supplied would be cool. Mix is really great. Guitar starting at 2:30 has a few distracting moments, but that's not too much to complain about. Maybe just a bit too bright there. Man, this sounds SO much more professional than anything I've done. Really good stuff. I don't favorite much, but this track gets it!
Thanks for listening and for the comments and favorite, Evan. Interesting - the guitar at 2:30 is a cigar box guitar loop from this site (which I should have mentioned in my intro but forgot), which we kept (instead of replacing with Sunny's guitar) because the chorus emerged directly out of it and so fits like a glove. I wish I could claim credit for the mix but, after I do the initial loop mix on Audacity, I get the final mix done professionally at the studio where we record the vocals and guitar. I'll start posting my lyrics. Thanks again, man!
Thanks, Steve. I'm glad you enjoyed the track and found it relaxing. I might have preferred to fire people up so that we mass together and storm Washington! - but I'll take relaxing. We should finish the album today in a long session and I'll be posting all the songs over time. I hope you like them. Thank you! CM
This really is an excellent, sumptuous, classy piece of music. Sunny War is a very talented singer and blues guitarist. Even just the first second of this is great, really hitting the sweet emotional spot.
I will return to do a much more comprehensive review later as I'm in a bit of a rush now.
Great work and I look for ward to the Sunny War + you album.
Thanks, StaticNomad. Sunny truly is something special. She amazes me every time in our sessions, her easy brilliance whether it's bass or rhythm or lead guitar, folk or blues or psychedelic or rock. And yes her singing is just as awesome although she doesn't think of herself as a singer. The vibrato she uses takes tremendous control so she stands stock still when she sings. I'm grabbing ahold of this moment and we're actually doing 3 albums back to back, APOCALYPSE, HELP and TRIBE. 10 songs each. About half recorded, couple more to write. It's the most joy I've had in years.
If you and Sunny play a bar gig in my town I`m coming by to sit in on the evening & drink a few brews...come to think of it I feel like a couple of brews right now (its your fault CM....haha)...super track guys...consistently good is hard to accomplish but I think you`re on your way...get that album laid down...Ed
Thanks, Ed. Ditto if you're ever in LA. Swing by and I'll watch you and Sunny jam. We just did guitar on two more songs last night - two more to go and the album's done (one of 'em). Just posted another one called THE THING I FEAR...
I don`t think we should even think about genres when we`re trying to create so you can pick any genre you like and I`ll still think its one hell of a fine piece of musical art CitizenMofo..Rock works fine...You`re right...the lady is one big talent..and she takes us for a great musical ride without much in the way of key changes...that takes talent and isn`t often accomplished in loop land..
her guitar and vocal delivery do the trick nicely...fab job by both of you..really enjoyed the listen.big fav & a standing ovation from this old guitar guy..more please...Ed
Thanks, Ed. Means a lot coming from you. For an old guitar guy, you sure put out some juicy sounds. I just posted another one called "Working On It", which started with one of your loops as the driving rhythm engine that called forth the song. Please check it out. I'll be posting a lot over the coming weeks. Been busy.
Thank you, crucethus. Yeah, Sunny's tone, talent and skill are pretty amazing to me, forcing me to up my game as a songwriter. She noodles around a bit and then we usually get the keeper on the 2nd take. She goes out for a smoke and me and the engineer just stare at each other, like - "Really? That can be done?" So I feel very lucky these days.
I definitely don't hear it as dubstep. It's got more kind of "horror metal" and hip hop in it. Quite catchy and well made.
I watched your video too, which suits it perfectly. This comment of yours is strange but also quite amusing:
"CitizenMofo
Hi. You're me, so why are you commenting? Because I like you and I think you're cool. Oh, thank you, I appreciate that. No problem. I like you too. Thank you."
Nice lead string and twinkly bell parts too when this takes off more melodically in the middle.
Droning, operatic vocals in the background work really quite well. Is that you too? Ogre vocals are the lead. Nice delayed vocal ending.
Great video! And a fun song. Ha ha ha! Sorry if I hurt any feelings but this makes me laugh - because I like this, it's hilarious in a good way and also very creative.
And then suddenly, it turns in to this cool hip hop (or what ever it is in the middle - always clueless about genres) track. And then the other style continues...very weird and wonderful.
Great! I think you should sing more. Don't be shy.
HI CitizenMofo!
This is a hard piece to comment, I had to go and listen to an other of your tracks to get a reference to what kind of music you usually do, and not sure if it helped.
Really? This is how this should sound?
Because I'm hearing some very good and interesting stuff underneath that alarming sound of the synth which takes over all the space.
And then comes that other alarm signal in the end. I'm confused. And the lyrics on top of it. About being numb...not feeling at all. Very alarming.
I`ll have to take your word for genre C.M..as I`m not much for genre knowledge myself....big mix and very loud (think you have a bit of distortion there...quite noticeable at the intro in particular)...on the other hand its creative stuff (unlike a lot of what our radios play) and the technical stuff is easy to fix..lots of power....good job....keep on....Ed
The more I listen to your tracks, the more I become a fan .
I love this one too, especially the cut vocals in the second part which you're a master at to me . And I smiled at this pella with a Frenchie accent :)
Thx a lot, CM . Bopped my head too ;)
Hi CM :)
You know how much I like how you play with snippets of vox and I had another good time listening to this one .
Love dancing on the dark side too .
Thx a lot !
Hey you, I'm always happy when you listen to my stuff and say something nice. So thank you. As it happens I'm in Europe for a couple weeks, in Frankfurt now, heading to Amsterdam by train tomorrow. I suppose I should be sightseeing or something, but feel an urgent need to do some loopin'. Hope you're well and happy and making cool music...
No need to speak English to be stirred by MLK's voice and eloquence and your music perfectly wraps it and gives much power to his words .
Kenny's so right : this is a really moving piece of art .
This is "muse-ic" .
Thx so much,
Respects
Carole
"Muse-ic" - I like that. Yes, I can't tell you how inspired I get by MLK's voice and message, and how much I miss it, and how much we all need it right now. I always appreciate your comments, Carole - thank you.
This a really moving piece of art. The music and spoken word are pitched just right to give the effect you were hoping for. It makes you wonder if there is any hope for the human race. Nice job.
Thanks so much, Darkreine. Yeah sometimes I wonder that. But, as a history buff, I'm reminded that the human race always seems to be on the brink of collapse or all-out war, and sometimes it happens and sometimes it doesn't, and yet we muddle through (at least so far), like the bunch of bumbling idiots that we are. The thing is, it's people like MLK and Bobby Kennedy, the good guys, that help us get through the hard times. These guys were two of the best and their loss was a great loss to our country. There I go, pontificating. Thanks again!
This is great track CitizenMofo! Had me wanting to spit when those drums and bass first broke in, lol. I liked how you mix the vocals. And the beat has some great change ups. The production overall sounds on point. Nice work and thanks for posting it.
Thanks for stopping by, Shatner. I spent quite a few hours on the mix, so I appreciate your comments. I came out of a long quiet time recently, where I had to do some internal rebuilding after a hard loss - so long that you wonder if you'll ever get back in the ring - but I did come out of it and now I'm so creatively on fire and productive and having so much that it's insane. I'll probably post every day for a week to 10 days, with some videos going to youtube during that same period. Ride the pony all-out while she's still got gas. Hey, I'm just blabbering cuz I'm happy. Take care and thanks again.
I am Impressed Citizen Mofo, you are doing an awesome job of creating some very interesting pieces of music on this site, keep it up. I love the disjointed feel of this piece with the pella-vox having a very indie feel as well. good work
Steve
Thanks, crucethus, it makes me feel really good to get such comments from real musicians. Without the loops on this site, without others' work to build on and with, I could do absolutely nothing. Can't sing, can't play - helpless. But with this site and the mutual support of its membership, I am all-powerful! What a deal. Thanks again, man - respect.
kind of a multi-genre trip here CitizenMofo...I really like the cinematic genre as it gives you all kinds of license to take the music wherever the spirit moves you....you made good use of it here and you did a nice job of holding it all together with the breats & transitions....good on ya.....Ed
Yeah, I never know what genre to put my stuff in. I don't think in genres, just in sounds that I like. Which is probably why I'll never be rich and famous, oh well. I wanted a head-bopping body-mover that reached a sort of beatific climax. Whether I achieved that or not, it's good to hear that it resonates with someone. Thanks for the listen and comment, Tumbleweed, I appreciate it.
Thanks, subzone. Yeah I had fun with this piece, especially since it was a 2nd draft and the 1st draft was a wreck and a horror. Sometimes things fall into place with a little bigger push. Your comment made my day!
a score throughout the title sequence of a snatch or lock stock two smoking barrels type of modern street criminal plot with lots of appropriate visuals to link the two pieces in continuity like slamming doors when theres a large drum or otherwise hit in the arrangement of instrument loops which i presume the piece is comprised of- tetris style ,,,,sorta
i love the way you used the clips of spoken word and the dialect is very potent and i like how it distorts my audio/video mental stream when its rendered by memory
Thanks, SoulMaaaan, for your listen and comment. Yes! Distorting the audio/video mental stream through music, that's what it's all about. I don't like the cliches and triteness and shallowness that we're constantly bombarded, brainwashed, and dumbed-down with by popular culture. A big reason why America is in such dire straits, with criminals running our banking system and the 99% stunned senseless by the obvious collusion of government in financial crimes against the people. So we need some new sounds! Some fresh thinking! Some real truth! Some distorting of the audio/video mental stream! OK, climbing down off my soapbox now... Thanks!
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Well, it's true, I can't play an instrument and I sing like a frog. (Nonetheless, I made an album called WWIII in 2015 where I sang all 17 songs - that was a big, dumb mistake, and I killed the album in shame as soon as I finished it.)) I've made music in my head since I was 2 but instead became a writer because words were my other thing. Young marriage, kids, raised 'em to adults, 40 years go by, and then a few years ago I started writing songs to capture the music in my head and began climbing the ladder to BETTER. Hundreds of songs later I'm finally getting somewhere, and Sunny is the magic ingredient that brings it all together. This is most fun I've had in a long, long time. It's just pure joy.
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Take care.
Evan
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Steve
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I will return to do a much more comprehensive review later as I'm in a bit of a rush now.
Great work and I look for ward to the Sunny War + you album.
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her guitar and vocal delivery do the trick nicely...fab job by both of you..really enjoyed the listen.big fav & a standing ovation from this old guitar guy..more please...Ed
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Cru
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A pleassure to listent to
And thanks for your comment on my track ... really appreciated it.
Peace
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I definitely don't hear it as dubstep. It's got more kind of "horror metal" and hip hop in it. Quite catchy and well made.
I watched your video too, which suits it perfectly. This comment of yours is strange but also quite amusing:
"CitizenMofo
Hi. You're me, so why are you commenting? Because I like you and I think you're cool. Oh, thank you, I appreciate that. No problem. I like you too. Thank you."
Nice lead string and twinkly bell parts too when this takes off more melodically in the middle.
Droning, operatic vocals in the background work really quite well. Is that you too? Ogre vocals are the lead. Nice delayed vocal ending.
Good stuff...
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And then suddenly, it turns in to this cool hip hop (or what ever it is in the middle - always clueless about genres) track. And then the other style continues...very weird and wonderful.
Great! I think you should sing more. Don't be shy.
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This is a hard piece to comment, I had to go and listen to an other of your tracks to get a reference to what kind of music you usually do, and not sure if it helped.
Really? This is how this should sound?
Because I'm hearing some very good and interesting stuff underneath that alarming sound of the synth which takes over all the space.
And then comes that other alarm signal in the end. I'm confused. And the lyrics on top of it. About being numb...not feeling at all. Very alarming.
So tell me about this!
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I love this one too, especially the cut vocals in the second part which you're a master at to me . And I smiled at this pella with a Frenchie accent :)
Thx a lot, CM . Bopped my head too ;)
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You know how much I like how you play with snippets of vox and I had another good time listening to this one .
Love dancing on the dark side too .
Thx a lot !
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Kenny's so right : this is a really moving piece of art .
This is "muse-ic" .
Thx so much,
Respects
Carole
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Dont Seize out it's going to be a lot of visual stimulation mon ami!