toastedavalanche

I like it. Do you!

good:)

overall a really good track, man. I don't comment much when I know it's a bad song in general, however cheers. Would definitely like to remix it.

Great job

I think I got to the level that I like your numbers without compromising ... even though I would have enough to suggest, I don't care ... this is your art ...and quality art...

handshake, Danke

wow...:-)

one of your best, I think...

hello TA!

CONGRATS FOR THIS PROGRESSIVE, UNIQUE, SUPER COOL TRACK...

your voice is too good for this style but we know it...you don't have to work with it more unless that change what Bleep suggest is under cosideration...:-)

I very much enjoyed this track and you'll get many positive comments on this to make sure you are on the right way...:-)

handshake, fav, Danke

Hello T.A,

Nice surprise on this sound, full of melancholy inspiring me a desert and chaotic land under a grey and rainy sky... Your voice, as usual, make the job, and is perfectly served by instrumentation! Thanks for writing the lyrics, for those like me who don't understand all, it's cool to read your words and catching the real message. No doubt, It's contribute to the atmosphere of the song!

There are, however, something I’ve less enjoyed during my hrearing: it's about the voice which looks like a robot... if all the others vocals effects are really great in the track, this one, i don't like it... I know that it was a part of the purpose you were searching, but For me, I think you can easily replace this robot voice by a woman’s voice!

Being a big fan of the band The Cure, you imagine what a special affection I have for all that is melancholy, and inevitably, I find a touch of cure in your writing, probably at the level of the rhythmic.

Very nice inspiration in this song and of course a big fav!

Bleep

reminds me of a weird mix of ultravox (Piano drums) Lincoln park (Chord progression) and interpol (vox delivery). Really compelling dark song you can build on. I liked it a lot.
Cru

Definitely one of my favourites, TA! I think you nailed this one.

Again, I agree with Crucethus. More reverb is not the way to go on this track. I'd like to hear the vocals brought up and forward in the mix. And, more intimate vocal delivery. There's a unique character in your voice that you need to bring out more I think.

As with your other tracks, I really appreciate your emphasis on melody. And, it appears that you have a knack for lyrics as well! I'm jealous! :)

Eric

I agree with Crucethus. A very beautiful melody on this track. This track deserves a lot more listens and a lot more comments, in my view.

Your voice is very distinctive. It has a lot of character and it works really well on your tracks. But, I think that you haven't quite found the right treatment for it in recording. I've got very little experience recording vocals so I don't really know what I'd do differently. But, I think I'd experiment a bit to get an even more intimate "feel". You have moments in this track where I hear that coming through, but not consistently and I want to have even more of that. Might be the volume you sign at. Might be how close you are to the mic. Might be the type of mic. Might be a question of compression and EQ. Or, all of the above. You have it really close on this track.

Well, TA. This is one of your tracks that I hadn't heard before. It was very enjoyable. I think I've said it in other comments, the thing I particularly appreciate about your music is the strong emphasis on melody. And, even more, melodies that can actually stick in your head. Your arrangements are quite engaging as well. I guess you play a lot of the instruments live?

I'm enjoying working through your music there on Looperman. I don't know how I lost track of you.

Regards,

Eric

Well, I see that I've heard this track previously, TA. Now, that I have re-discovered it I totally agree with my comment posted back in 2017. This track could definitely support some vocals. I heard a melody line in my head again as I was listening to it. That, for me, is the sign of a track that connects with me. Always is.

OK. I very much liked this track. And yes, you got the mechanical/cold feel you were aiming for. The melody was spot on for the track.

And, the vocal was excellent, in my view. I really liked it. But, I think it was set too low in the mix. I think that might have been was centralsdev was suggesting. That particularly applies to the sections where you pitched up the vocal. It was barely detectable above the backing track.

I've done that on some of my tracks where I, very reluctantly, had to do the vocal myself. I'm a lousy vocalist, so I bury the vocal on purpose. Your vocal was perfect for the track, so there was no need to do that.

Now I'm going to search your profile to see if you've posted other good stuff! :)

BRING THOSE VOCALS UPPPPPPP....i lovvvvvvvve it tho...for real

It's kinda doomy. Like "this person's making me sick" sort of a thing. I like that. Cool track.

you should work some more on your vocal!

ayy this is nice

Nivel

Do you have any Stems?

Awesome!

super

Linda música

Salut à toi,

Parfois quand une pépite est postée, nul besoin de commentaire, juste quelques mots pour saluer la performance et surtout un grand merci de permettre le téléchargement! je le prends avec grand plaisir, j'adore, tout simplement j'adore!

Respects

Bleep

this gave me a heavy mac demarco vibe. love it.

Vocals instruments mastering and composition are all on point