Lives To Spend - Updated - Toastedavalanche

wow...:-)

one of your best, I think...

hello TA!

CONGRATS FOR THIS PROGRESSIVE, UNIQUE, SUPER COOL TRACK...

your voice is too good for this style but we know it...you don't have to work with it more unless that change what Bleep suggest is under cosideration...:-)

I very much enjoyed this track and you'll get many positive comments on this to make sure you are on the right way...:-)

handshake, fav, Danke

Hello T.A,

Nice surprise on this sound, full of melancholy inspiring me a desert and chaotic land under a grey and rainy sky... Your voice, as usual, make the job, and is perfectly served by instrumentation! Thanks for writing the lyrics, for those like me who don't understand all, it's cool to read your words and catching the real message. No doubt, It's contribute to the atmosphere of the song!

There are, however, something I’ve less enjoyed during my hrearing: it's about the voice which looks like a robot... if all the others vocals effects are really great in the track, this one, i don't like it... I know that it was a part of the purpose you were searching, but For me, I think you can easily replace this robot voice by a woman’s voice!

Being a big fan of the band The Cure, you imagine what a special affection I have for all that is melancholy, and inevitably, I find a touch of cure in your writing, probably at the level of the rhythmic.

Very nice inspiration in this song and of course a big fav!

Bleep

reminds me of a weird mix of ultravox (Piano drums) Lincoln park (Chord progression) and interpol (vox delivery). Really compelling dark song you can build on. I liked it a lot.
Cru

OK. I very much liked this track. And yes, you got the mechanical/cold feel you were aiming for. The melody was spot on for the track.

And, the vocal was excellent, in my view. I really liked it. But, I think it was set too low in the mix. I think that might have been was centralsdev was suggesting. That particularly applies to the sections where you pitched up the vocal. It was barely detectable above the backing track.

I've done that on some of my tracks where I, very reluctantly, had to do the vocal myself. I'm a lousy vocalist, so I bury the vocal on purpose. Your vocal was perfect for the track, so there was no need to do that.

Now I'm going to search your profile to see if you've posted other good stuff! :)

BRING THOSE VOCALS UPPPPPPP....i lovvvvvvvve it tho...for real

It's kinda doomy. Like "this person's making me sick" sort of a thing. I like that. Cool track.

you should work some more on your vocal!

ayy this is nice