Evisma

Definitely didn't disappoint me, reminiscent of some kind of crazy Tool, RATM, Coheed & Cambria fusion. Really interesting track. One thing that I really want to say is that the drums and bass are excellent for whatever reason lol, they just really pop and appeal to me. Once you reach :35, that guitar reminds me of Fade To Black by Metallica, very cool.

Overall, really crazy, fun, epic track.

New Year greetings.

I really think you should get yourself one of those 6 string things with the weedy thin strings as you'd no doubt kick ##### on it.

0:10 bass is aggressive and quite tribal-sounding with those drums.

0:21 nice melodic riffs that sit nicely (but with a lot of movement) and then go into what sounds like it might be a vocal tune. Easy for any vocals to follow that.

Drums don't sound too busy in this. As said before - much better than the drum loops you used to use as you clearly have much more control now.

2:29 I like the ending and how it winds down, even though it's not perfect.

Sorry that I don't have a great deal to suggest for this one. I liked it but feel it can be better though, short of adding some vocals or instrumentation, I'm not sure how.

Wut up bra! The song kicks ##### and I have only one suggestion for you to consider....somewhere in the second half, a breakdown would spice it up!!! Maybe a few drum rolls and yada. I see u said you were still working on it, cool, keep going with it and take a good amount of time and dnt b shy to put too much into it cuz this is the rare type that you could never mix too many tracks and sounds. That is a good thing! Ill c ya around dude, -E.A.83

The guitar addition sounds nice in the mix. Cool work with the piano the ending is cool. Drums are sounding really good especially around 4:20 into the song favorite part of the guitar. I heard the bass part you told me about, it sounds very interesting in this form. Mixed thoughts in this track and I liked it overall. Thank you for sharing Evisma, Peace.

If you knew someone in Hollywood, this could get onto an action movie soundtrack. Good vibe.
Mark.

Very cool track, the mix, the arrangement, production...all sounding great. I always like this style of rock, it's melodic and hard and thrashy at the same time. Enjoyed it very much. Great job on the bass track.

Wayne

Can you tell me what tempo this is at? I would love to make a drum track for this. I know I don't have anything in my loops or tracks that shows you but I am actually mainly a drummer and just make electronic music as a hobby.

Awesome GUITAR work here evisma.
I love the chords and the bass lines are sick.
Does sound slight akin to Tool, who are masters at this sort of stuff.
Ive only heard a few of your tracks but im already a fan.
Dying to hear more.

I really dig the track and my only "constructive criticism" would be to lose the chorus effect on the bass guitar and turn up the rythem guitar a bit. I think it would give it a little more punch and put some hair on its chest :) -peace

This is a great rock track in the Deep Purple school. The drums and mixing have been commented on extensively so I won't go there. Def, def would benefit from a vox, maybe put a post in the forum. If not there is a group on facebook called collab with me, that has a lot of talented people, many from this website. Great work here.

Hi dear Evan.
I enjoyed & liked this one.
I listened to that so many times.

TanX

I see that you are following MrNomad's comments, so you are in good hands
Anyhow,I will still add my two cents: intro is perfect.
The quick part does not sound as powerful as it should, but honestly I think it is a matter of mix: you have all the elements you need but the powerful ones are not loud enough.

Keep on the good work: we have some really interesting stuff here.
Ciao, Domenico

PS have you thought of a vocal part for this song?
Don't know why but I could imagine something like Marilyn Manson going on....

Reaqlly good track, a lot of really cool and interesting production tricks going on all lending to a very strong track but if I am to be 100% honest the drums disapear behind the bass when they come in and need to be much more in command than they are.

Great quality music mate....

This is very cool and creative! I love the change in the middle when the beat gets going! Bass and guitar are performed very well in my opinion! I kind of like the drums, but they could use some more power, maybe some multiband compression or something. Super awesome song! Faved for sure!

really marvelous ! i liked it very very much .

Just listening again and I'd now say that that intro is pretty much perfect. The 3 second reverse fade segues perfectly into that cool main riff.

Then on 0:20 we get the next riff plus the drum loop plus a few more things I can't be bothered to type out. Basically, things are arriving nicely in such a way that you can pick out each one. So it's also a good mix.

I think it builds very skilfully up to that main drum beat on 1:24.

The 1:24 to 1:45 sction is probably far too short - should be more like 40 seconds to a minute as you've already spent a while building it up so to then break it down again after only 20 or so seconds seems too premature and a bit of a killing of the energy you've built up.

As I said before, 1:54 to the end needs to be much longer and a return to some of the earlier intro elements (eg with new drums underneath them) would help lengthen what needs to be a longer piece. This isn't pop music so I don't think making it this brief length does it justice.

Cool - first time I've given some advice that I can then see has been taken. Yes, intro/start much much better now and more recognisable. Gets in to the good stuff much quicker. Then it really gets going on about 1:25, as before (I think was 2:22 on the previous version). Mix also sounds better.

The main thing now is to work out how to make it longer as it's definitely too short.

I think it sounds great now, reading StaticNomad's comment you improved the intro I guess because it sounded very nice now ;) I am waiting for a rough electric like guitar that kicks into it but you already stated that you were going to add a guitar part extra from your friend. Don't know if others agree but maybe shorten the intro just a little bit found the suspense before getting to the main part kinda long but that's also of course personal taste

this is second track of yours which I've heared & in both self style of yours is worthy of respects & admiration to me . my fav mark tells the rest buT is your collab requesT again regarding vocal ? I'll write U a notice ._____B

Nice Prog Rock sound

Hey, this is pretty awesome! I like how it builds to the crescendo! The only thing I wasn't partial to was the choir sounds at the beginning, but that's just me choir sounds annoy me... ha ha. But it's a jammin tune once it gets going! Nice one!