beautiful mix, choices of sounds, using these 3 awesome vocalists. great feel for mixing their voices - very original. has a cinematic feel to it for me. nice work!
That's good to hear, the greatest compliment actually - this track is ment to make people to want to dance (although I messed up the hole thing...).
The amazing pianoloop is from JoeFunktastic and you can find it here:http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/55334
I Have to agree with TheSZerit - This track definiately have merrit.... I mean my feet began moving in that peculiar way of mine at 0:32 and that is, if not a pretty sight, a good sign.
Rock on Mommy - Keep up the good work
your being too hard on yourself....this actually sounded better than what i was expecting, the problem is with your mixing and mastering....you may need either some studio quality headphones or monitors...then your mixes will be alot cleaner...also it may be bad software when converting into .mp3 format from fls in any event, nice track!!
~7h3z~
Yeah, hmm I don't know really what happened...it's just a complete mess. Probably due to all the things you listed here - from headphones to converting - and then some. Lol!
Thanks for listening and for the advice! :)
I hear some good elements in this track and some sounds that can be cleaned up easily. And i think if you work on adding more layers to the percussion and beats you can cohere this song together.
You should definately continue to work on this or come back to it at a later date. I will be working on multiple projects at the same time because I never know when something that doesn't quite fit into what I'm working on now will fit really nicely into another project.
It sounds like your DJing and mixing in a completely different beat at the end like your bringing another banging tune.
Anything else you want to get out of your system, throw it my way will you? The structure of this track is really good. I'm sure there is a producer out there that will master this for you.
Really, you like it?!
That's good to hear, I felt really embarrassed when uploading because the song felt like a big failure...haha.
Maybe there is something to continue working on then. When it comes to asking for help with mastering - I don't know how that works and the thing(what is it called?) in the DAW is a huge mess.
But Thank You for liking and listening!
This tunes cracking! are you using anything to sync your acapellas and get your tone? I use reason 5 find it difficult to get acapellas going in it. Thanks for your comment on my tune :D
Thanks!
I'm using FL Studios at the moment and even that is difficult so Reason is not an option, lol! The CPU almost cracked my computer when working on this song so I couldn't continue and had to cut out a big chunk in the middle and in the end using Audacity...oh my head...it's horrible...
Thanks for listening!
wow,dear colleague ''SJ'' , due to some issues about connection ,just today I've seen your reply to my frist comment. my appologize if I'm alittle careless about description below trax in looperman and have made such mistakes about singer and... about your track .best wishes & regards again.___Behnam
First obvious thing is yur good mix .combination of varous layers of sound takes much skills in counterpoint rules and carefull attention while composing.besides I want to admire you,for it's the first time that I've seen some female vocal has used any of male vocal acapella in her track (specially I should admire your choice,Cause that experienced man sings really lovely & welldone).about drum line I liked every thing(also that considered stop between measures) just think you could boost drum line volume about 1decibel.if I want to be honest I should tell you it's an innovative drum beats which I really adore it in various moments & parts. also your usage from various intervals in vocal melody attuned in this one is more professional than your other tracks which I've heard in looperman. and a remarkable point which seems is one of your strong point in your music(beside your Impressive voice) in considered lyrics,& set words which makes a perfect package & is remarkable. totally I should say I really enjoyed,& I prefered this one to the otherone which I'd commented on(from your tracks) last time,althought no doubt both show your worthwhile abilities & tallent & skils .totally I should say you're admirable for being a perfect package about your various tallents in music. regards & best wishes.___Behnam
Hi again, Behnam - Thank You for listening but one important thing: It´s NOT ME singing!!! Not in this one and not in the first track You heard from me. My voice is nothing like this one here, unfortunately. The voice here belongs to Farisha: http://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/4340
Maybe You could use her pellas in your Music also, it could actually fit.
Thank You so much for the review, although I can't take credit fot the vocals, or neither for the lyrics. The hole track is made out of loops from here - I'm not a musician, just a looparranger...sorry to disappoint You.
I have to slightly disagree with my esteemed colleague on about the drums. I actually like them. I think I would add more percussion building throughout the song to make it's mark. Overall what an amazing improvement in loop control and sounds, and you still get to include your signature echo-verb sound on the vocal, which gives the mix a Jamaican dub feel. (check out, Sly & Robbie, and Osbourne "King Tubby" Ruddock, Lee "Scratch" Perry, Errol Thompson ) and you will see that you are emulating some of there style. Great Job , keep looping your getting better by the day! :-)
Hi there!
Alright - You like the drums, I do to but I also can see what JoeFunktastic is talking about - actually I think it's that the piano doesn't sync with the drums all the way. It takes away the flow somehow.
Well, that I'm going to try to fix, and also increasing the pianosound should help a bit. And letting the drums build up is a definite Yes!
Oh, I SO want to be emulating Sly & Robbie, even a little tiny bit of emulating them will do!!! I love those Epic artists!
(The rest of them (Lee Perry etc.) not so much - I maybe should cut down on the reeverb and echoes a bit? lol
Or could it just be that I'm not really getting there Music? There are Epic too, no doubt.)
Thank you SO much for taking your time, listening and giving advice!
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I'll repost the fixed version here soon. This is very kind of You!
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The amazing pianoloop is from JoeFunktastic and you can find it here:http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/55334
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Rock on Mommy - Keep up the good work
/P
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~7h3z~
Thanks for listening and for the advice! :)
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Thank you for listening and - as always - for the good advice. Have a nice day and take care!
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It sounds like your DJing and mixing in a completely different beat at the end like your bringing another banging tune.
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:)
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Nice job, really.
Kenny
That's good to hear, I felt really embarrassed when uploading because the song felt like a big failure...haha.
Maybe there is something to continue working on then. When it comes to asking for help with mastering - I don't know how that works and the thing(what is it called?) in the DAW is a huge mess.
But Thank You for liking and listening!
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I'm using FL Studios at the moment and even that is difficult so Reason is not an option, lol! The CPU almost cracked my computer when working on this song so I couldn't continue and had to cut out a big chunk in the middle and in the end using Audacity...oh my head...it's horrible...
Thanks for listening!
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And You make some great loops so thank you for that.
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And also, welcome to Looperman! I noticed that this was your first comment.
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http://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/4340
Maybe You could use her pellas in your Music also, it could actually fit.
Thank You so much for the review, although I can't take credit fot the vocals, or neither for the lyrics. The hole track is made out of loops from here - I'm not a musician, just a looparranger...sorry to disappoint You.
Have a Beautiful day/ SJ
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I have to slightly disagree with my esteemed colleague on about the drums. I actually like them. I think I would add more percussion building throughout the song to make it's mark. Overall what an amazing improvement in loop control and sounds, and you still get to include your signature echo-verb sound on the vocal, which gives the mix a Jamaican dub feel. (check out, Sly & Robbie, and Osbourne "King Tubby" Ruddock, Lee "Scratch" Perry, Errol Thompson ) and you will see that you are emulating some of there style. Great Job , keep looping your getting better by the day! :-)
Alright - You like the drums, I do to but I also can see what JoeFunktastic is talking about - actually I think it's that the piano doesn't sync with the drums all the way. It takes away the flow somehow.
Well, that I'm going to try to fix, and also increasing the pianosound should help a bit. And letting the drums build up is a definite Yes!
Oh, I SO want to be emulating Sly & Robbie, even a little tiny bit of emulating them will do!!! I love those Epic artists!
(The rest of them (Lee Perry etc.) not so much - I maybe should cut down on the reeverb and echoes a bit? lol
Or could it just be that I'm not really getting there Music? There are Epic too, no doubt.)
Thank you SO much for taking your time, listening and giving advice!
Have a nice day/ SJ