So nice

Very nice track, with soul & funky house vocals.Congratulations!! Good work friend!!!

i agree with clindsay "its not a mess"

very nice - not a mess at all - shades of Moby

beautiful mix, choices of sounds, using these 3 awesome vocalists. great feel for mixing their voices - very original. has a cinematic feel to it for me. nice work!

I like it the piano loop makes you wanna move

I Have to agree with TheSZerit - This track definiately have merrit.... I mean my feet began moving in that peculiar way of mine at 0:32 and that is, if not a pretty sight, a good sign.
Rock on Mommy - Keep up the good work

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nice!

your being too hard on yourself....this actually sounded better than what i was expecting, the problem is with your mixing and mastering....you may need either some studio quality headphones or monitors...then your mixes will be alot cleaner...also it may be bad software when converting into .mp3 format from fls in any event, nice track!!
~7h3z~

I hear some good elements in this track and some sounds that can be cleaned up easily. And i think if you work on adding more layers to the percussion and beats you can cohere this song together.

You should definately continue to work on this or come back to it at a later date. I will be working on multiple projects at the same time because I never know when something that doesn't quite fit into what I'm working on now will fit really nicely into another project.

It sounds like your DJing and mixing in a completely different beat at the end like your bringing another banging tune.

A very cool track! Nice combination of vocals! Enjoyable listen!

Anything else you want to get out of your system, throw it my way will you? The structure of this track is really good. I'm sure there is a producer out there that will master this for you.

Nice job, really.

Kenny

This tunes cracking! are you using anything to sync your acapellas and get your tone? I use reason 5 find it difficult to get acapellas going in it. Thanks for your comment on my tune :D