Great voice you have - did you put the rest of the track together too? It's a solid rock feel to it. Your vocals are stunning. Nice work. It sounds like it's taken some real care to get such a good result. It shows in the end result - very good.
Yes Richie I did do the vocals and I wrote the rest of the track as well. Now I am looking for some one who can help me to make a video for this track and help me put it together so I can see if it will "go somewhere" and see if I can get it to where I want it which is at the top!! If I can get someone to help with the video and ya know the hair the skin the wardrobe etc. I want to put it on you tube so we can see if we can get rich somehow!!! lol!! Thank you very much for your comment about my vocals and the overall track! It means I am doing something right!!! :)
This is an awesome track! I like your vocal stylings a lot! The instrumental is very good, especially the synth work! Thanks for the heads up on this track! Nice one!
Nice intro...
Love the bass and the fx...
Nice arped synths... fits very well into the main sounds...
Very nice melody you have going here!
Nice break... with lovely pads...
wow... I like that arped melody very much...
Great track! bummer you cannot FAV anymore on the Loop!
This is an awesome song! I really like how those loops fit in! Great use of the vocals, especially when they're chopped up! This is very pleasant to listen too! I like it much!
THANK YOU! you would be suprised to know that it was my first tech house mix at that!!! spread the word for me please? by the way I would like to know if you have any loops that you would let me use in a new mix?
ive been in the music since 2003 i started
playing guitar but i do have no other life than music xD
then i went on a music industry course and started producing but
ive probly spent more time listening than playing really
but actaully this songs good its my favourite one of yours so far
the sounds are really spread out like jam
and theres not too many changes in the song which makes it
better to dance too i think in all i really like this
thank you very much for your comments!! i am soooo ready to do another track and so now i am not sure if i wanna slow it down or speed it up again!!! i have to think about it for a bit first!! or what do you suggest????
Difference between Constructive criticism and insults: insults do absolutely nothing. You don't need to be an ass whilst reviewing, just give the uploader a hint in the right direction. Here Justing, let me show you how its done:
The pads and drums in the start are pretty good, but the pad is a bit overpowering though. The drums themselves are good, and they work pretty well with the guitar. The drum layering is pretty cool, and has a nice buildup to it. However, the actual part where the melodies come in could usea bit of improving. The first chord is pretty good, but it doesn't really work with the arp melody, although the filtering on the arp does sound pretty cool, it just doesn't fit really. The bass guitar also doesn't fit that well with the arp.
Its a pretty good track, but you need to work on it a bit more, because certain parts feel a bit awkward. What I reccomend is trying to find out which chords work well together.. unfortunatly, I cannot help you there, as I do all my work by ear, and know absolutely no theory.
i can hear that your really trying hard on this song
Someparts i will admit are pretty good
but it just sounds like almost like a lack of concept if you get what im saying i can recognise alot of loops and stuff
Are the voices saying bass from vengance?
i like this song a bit but you kinda need to spread the sounds out
its like youve just thrown sounds in there needs to be a logical order Form is Sooo Important in music and nowadays its more important than Melody and Timbre
Oh and sorry if i came accross as a d*ck in my last review
But i just didnt know how to explain in words what was wrong with the song since it was largely complex with its problems
but anyway good luck if you improve a bit you will hopefully go far
I have a question for you if
I may ask it?? how long have you been in the music business?? and have you ever heard of "low bass" frequencies?? you may want to check out this website:
www.bassmekanik.com
who is bass mekanik and a personal friend of mine as well and because i have many fans and friends both here in the STATES and over seas in the UK
i have many influences and many styles in which i am working on because one person or club may want dance, another may want trance, and another may want drum n bass or low bass tracks so i have to know all of the styles to be able to mix what they ask for! take a listen to CLUB EMPIRE AND STELLAR RAYS and see if you feel the same way with those tracks and i am easy going so i have no problems about your previous comments, and the vocals on the track are saying bass illusion one male voice and one female voice which is the way i wanted it and you may want to listen to SUB BASS ILLUSION 3 which has a totally different sound to it!!!
DUDE!!! its not my first song here on this site ok??? you may want to take a listen to sub bass illusion 3 and take a listen to stellar rays!!! i have a total of 10 tracks here dude!!!
This is dope!! Love the jazzy influence in this with the liquid movement runnin this track. Like those bass lines too.. Definitely got an old school feel that I like. I can see why it sat on the charts for as long as it did.. Added to my fav's.!!!
Good work!!! Keep'em coming.. Oh btw I sent ya mail back.
Man you made a Empire anthem track. I haven't been to that club in a while... I like it. It really does suit the club enviroment. Ybor was my stomping ground back in the day. Yours too I'm guessing..lol.. Nice highly energetic tunes.. I'll watch ya and see what new ones you produce.. Keep pushing them club bangers out!!!
Nice... I like the high energy you put into a lot of your tracks. Also sweet that you're from my area too... Nice to see some more floridians on here..lol.. Gonna check out some of your other tracks...
THANK YOU!!! I AM REALLY WONDERING WHERE YOU ARE AT? CAN YOU SEND ME A PRIVATE MESSAGE HERE OR NO??
PLEASE LET ME KNOW, MY ENQUIRING MIND WANTS TO KNOW!! :)
THANK YOU!! I AM THE mother of a 25 year old son named dj and yes he is a dj and yes i try very hard to make good tracks for all to hear!! thank you for your comment!!
BassMom, will you adopt me? It's hard for me to sit down while listening. I need to be moving girl. Really MOVING!
Stellar rays has an exceptional array of sounds, all mixed to a T and just the right condiments added for a spectacular tasting mix. I'm eatin it up!
Your mastering is 'CRYSTAL'. I want to pick your brain and find out what you know.
You have given enough length here for any DJ to use easily. There is never a dull moment in this one. Thank you for all that you've done to make this and share with folks like me. I am humbled. I am still learning what the types of music are. I think you've given me a perfect example of Breakbeat and will always remember your song as my best example!
Anytime babe!! and you can always find me on facebook also ok?? go to
www.facebook.com/BASSMOM45
what ever styles you are learning let me know and I will be happy to help you ok?? and yes I WILL ADOPT YOU!! I can help you to get going in the right direction with your music. I also specialize in drum n bass as well as the breakbeatz ok??
hit me up babe and we will talk!!!
on ONE FOR THE MONEY by bassmom2012
on FALLEN DOWN by bassmom2012
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on FALLEN DOWN by bassmom2012
Great voice you have - did you put the rest of the track together too? It's a solid rock feel to it. Your vocals are stunning. Nice work. It sounds like it's taken some real care to get such a good result. It shows in the end result - very good.
Richie
on FALLEN DOWN by bassmom2012
on STELLAR RAYS by bassmom2012
Sound Italo to me!!!
Nice arrangement and soundchoice...
TCAS
on DONT LEAVE by bassmom2012
on JUST CHILLIN by bassmom2012
on WARM EMBRACE SLIP HOUSE MASTER by bassmom2012
Love the bass and the fx...
Nice arped synths... fits very well into the main sounds...
Very nice melody you have going here!
Nice break... with lovely pads...
wow... I like that arped melody very much...
Great track! bummer you cannot FAV anymore on the Loop!
TCAS
on THE LIGHT by bassmom2012
on WARM EMBRACE SLIP HOUSE MASTER by bassmom2012
on STELLAR RAYS by bassmom2012
playing guitar but i do have no other life than music xD
then i went on a music industry course and started producing but
ive probly spent more time listening than playing really
but actaully this songs good its my favourite one of yours so far
the sounds are really spread out like jam
and theres not too many changes in the song which makes it
better to dance too i think in all i really like this
on SUB BASS ILLUSION 2 by bassmom2012
Makes you want to get up a do something you know.
on BASSMOMS RETRO ROCK FEAT DJ RAY RAY by bassmom2012
MStokes!!!!! i appreciate all of the reviews here ok???
on BASSMOMS RETRO ROCK FEAT DJ RAY RAY by bassmom2012
The pads and drums in the start are pretty good, but the pad is a bit overpowering though. The drums themselves are good, and they work pretty well with the guitar. The drum layering is pretty cool, and has a nice buildup to it. However, the actual part where the melodies come in could usea bit of improving. The first chord is pretty good, but it doesn't really work with the arp melody, although the filtering on the arp does sound pretty cool, it just doesn't fit really. The bass guitar also doesn't fit that well with the arp.
Its a pretty good track, but you need to work on it a bit more, because certain parts feel a bit awkward. What I reccomend is trying to find out which chords work well together.. unfortunatly, I cannot help you there, as I do all my work by ear, and know absolutely no theory.
Nice try.
Ste :)
on SUB BASS ILLUSION 2 by bassmom2012
Someparts i will admit are pretty good
but it just sounds like almost like a lack of concept if you get what im saying i can recognise alot of loops and stuff
Are the voices saying bass from vengance?
i like this song a bit but you kinda need to spread the sounds out
its like youve just thrown sounds in there needs to be a logical order Form is Sooo Important in music and nowadays its more important than Melody and Timbre
Oh and sorry if i came accross as a d*ck in my last review
But i just didnt know how to explain in words what was wrong with the song since it was largely complex with its problems
but anyway good luck if you improve a bit you will hopefully go far
I may ask it?? how long have you been in the music business?? and have you ever heard of "low bass" frequencies?? you may want to check out this website:
www.bassmekanik.com
who is bass mekanik and a personal friend of mine as well and because i have many fans and friends both here in the STATES and over seas in the UK
i have many influences and many styles in which i am working on because one person or club may want dance, another may want trance, and another may want drum n bass or low bass tracks so i have to know all of the styles to be able to mix what they ask for! take a listen to CLUB EMPIRE AND STELLAR RAYS and see if you feel the same way with those tracks and i am easy going so i have no problems about your previous comments, and the vocals on the track are saying bass illusion one male voice and one female voice which is the way i wanted it and you may want to listen to SUB BASS ILLUSION 3 which has a totally different sound to it!!!
on BASSMOMS RETRO ROCK FEAT DJ RAY RAY by bassmom2012
was on about
but i realised this was your first song in here so i guess youve improved
on BASSMOMS RETRO ROCK FEAT DJ RAY RAY by bassmom2012
Thank you for your comment!!!!!
on SUB BASS ILLUSION 2 by bassmom2012
on DROP THAT BEAT by bassmom2012
Good work!!! Keep'em coming.. Oh btw I sent ya mail back.
Blume:)
on SUB BASS ILLUSION 2 by bassmom2012
on CLUB EMPIRE by bassmom2012
Blume:)
on SUB BASS ILLUSION 2 by bassmom2012
Blume:)
PLEASE LET ME KNOW, MY ENQUIRING MIND WANTS TO KNOW!! :)
on CLUB EMPIRE by bassmom2012
Keep them coming
John
on STELLAR RAYS by bassmom2012
on STELLAR RAYS by bassmom2012
Stellar rays has an exceptional array of sounds, all mixed to a T and just the right condiments added for a spectacular tasting mix. I'm eatin it up!
Your mastering is 'CRYSTAL'. I want to pick your brain and find out what you know.
You have given enough length here for any DJ to use easily. There is never a dull moment in this one. Thank you for all that you've done to make this and share with folks like me. I am humbled. I am still learning what the types of music are. I think you've given me a perfect example of Breakbeat and will always remember your song as my best example!
Thank you sister,
PhasmataJ
www.facebook.com/BASSMOM45
what ever styles you are learning let me know and I will be happy to help you ok?? and yes I WILL ADOPT YOU!! I can help you to get going in the right direction with your music. I also specialize in drum n bass as well as the breakbeatz ok??
hit me up babe and we will talk!!!