What a fantastic piece you created here. The arrangement is unique and works superbly well with the vocals. So much soul beaming off of this, and the jazz elements mixed with the beautiful vocals make for a fantastic listen. Great work, adding to the favs!
Hey - thanks for listening - its one for submersing yourself in and getting lost in the sound but 5 minutes is a commitment - took a bit to balance the mix and it is weird but as you know I like to experiment. The 412 riff is bit I like best!
Hey Buddy - yeah just a little example of our work together - didnt seem to get much interest and I dont have much space left for uploads so deleted it
Thanks for checking it out though : )
Hey CC - yeah I was thinking about how good you are at fitting the vocals in to your tracks when I was doing this but I dont have your discipline so the whole track is a bit loose - but that is kinda indie too hey - it probably does need some tweaking
That's good that your mood changes with genres. Great way to evolve your musical ears!! This is great man vocals fit on the money love the soundscape sounds
Thanks again mate - I like the sound of this one too but it still doesn't sound finished (like half of my tracks) : )
It's 40 minutes to christmas here and Im in need of sleep but will definitely give your tracks my ears in the morning so be posting some feedback soon (ish)
i’ve got this under my skin, mate. beautifully damaged, groovy as hell. really intriguing gtrs + electronics roomy but accumulating steam, awesome stuff happening by the 3.00 mark. the selection and placement of vox is extrasensory. weird, seething voodoo. cha cha cha.
Thanks Chris - yeah there's my guitar and I think 2 small samples of guitar as well. It came up a lot with the addition of the vocals - I was surprised they made that big a difference
This is perfect for what it is. Are you singing the track?
The voice is phenomenal! You have a hook there, and it sounds amazing and you hit us with it right of the bat. I had to replay the track because I missed its presence. The nature of a hook is that people will miss it until you bring it back. Bring that thing back somewhere before the song ends.
Sometimes when I record a hook, I think "Oh, would peoples ears miss this in about a minute?". Music can really be powerful for the listener but they shouldn't have to starve if you know what I mean.
You also have a great start to a little verse in there starting with "baby let me lift you up" and "I don't want to let you fall in love" I know lyrics are hard to come up with, but I think it could use a few more.
The arrangement is perfect on the intro "bars" and sounds like a hook to me. Maybe cut out some of the cluttered together filler vox hits and lay those few bars from the beginning down again where they fit.
I think tracks like these really let peoples talent shine through. I'm hooked on the sound of the whole track. Do I think you should put a lot of time into refining it? No, I think you established yourself on the record in a really creative way that showcases your talent. You'll look back at this in a year and say, Wow!
I think this track reminds me of my track New Money... Its not on looperman anymore. I had to delete it to upload other songs. But you could find it on any streaming platform, spotify, apple music, youtube etc... here is a link
Hey Johnnie - thanks for the great feedback - Ill give your old track a listen soon I hope. The vocals are samples 3 different sources. I'll have a play sometime and see if I can arrange this a little better - it's 25 tracks I think so might be a bit of a mess : )
Ian! This one has strong potential. I’m imagining some fire changes off that bass line alone. The vocals are right in there but the whole track feel's just plain great. The guitars are lush and the percussive edge gives an undercurrent that resonates with me. This is off and running. Push it all the way through. Faved easily. Peace
Thanks Mark - I tend to get a bit lazy toward the end of getting a track done and though Ive learnt a bit about production on my daw the craft of putting structure into a track is still underdeveloped in me - my process is way too random and Ive no discipline - no real craftsman would work like that ... but hey play is fun - appreciate your warm feedback and encouragement
they call him dimestop
he not just hiphop
he got a voice
aint no rolls royce
but he take higher than those jumbo flyers
n his tounge is sharper than mr michael myers
Ian your the experimenter, i love what you try we;ve been good mates a while now, yeah it lacks a little structure vocal wise but the track is original and hits the indie genre too, nice job
high marks for squiggliness. what a treat. louche lounge smoking allowed near the rhodes and it’s coming outta the flute too. it’s a colorful joint too and btw gravity does not apply in this establishment. i’m the guy clinking the empty bottles at the end — show me the way to go home!
this is wonderful, mate — it’s like your ‘year of the cat’! the aco just slinks right in like a cat into a smoky nightclub seriously looking to hook up without another cat. brassy af. very cool
Hey mate - yeah I like a bit of brass and the nest of rhythm is nice in this one - my guitars run right through but I kinda wish Id made more of that break around 110 - seems to finish a little early when I hear it now : )
really nice chill out track Ian the vocal is smokin' the brass is standout bro, great acoustic guitar, liking the percs and harpers tap and that background fx sounds like a whisper is a great add, cool and fresh
Now a days, it says your friends would be admired for even knowing what a harmonica is, he.
I like this, the guitar is squelchy, to me guitars need some effects when you are to create this type of atmosphere. They could even be louder I think. Lots going on, the flute is sweet, the electronic bits are neat, especially in my headphones.
Thanks BB - been making one just about every week but largely just learning through experimenting - posted the lasted and will post a few of the build up.
Ian! Right out the gate the direction you moved this track is spacious light and fresh. The delayed sax with the vocals is a solid creative touch. And yep I’m totally loving the saturation and the stereo separation. Great staging and presentation. Stellar as always my friend.
Hey Pseudo
You put this drums ande the rest really nicely together.
Hats off.
The vocal is also very nice.
I can see you growing and growing but hey...don't go too fast or I'll get such an inferiority complex lol
wow Ian this also reminds me of FKJ&Massego the youtube vid is great the two of them in the studio you probably seen it anyway millions have but its fantastic work mate, this is surely one of your top tracks, you must know you got it spot on, you had a feeling on this one the music possessed ya into to delivering a cracker, well do great listen big comparison, big compliment
Hey Paul - well I wish I sounded more like those guys : ) : ) but the feedback on this one is encouraging - my personal favourite (from my tracks) is always the one Im trying to make next - all good fun learning and creating hey. Thanks for the warm feedback mate
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This is the perfect place for experiments though and if people don't seem to like it... I try not to care. The main thing is whether I like it ;)
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Thanks for checking it out though : )
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Some lovely weird sounds Ian - it all works together and it's really exciting!
Merry Christmas!
Hope you have a lovely Christmas too
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Appreciate your listening and the warm feedback
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It's 40 minutes to christmas here and Im in need of sleep but will definitely give your tracks my ears in the morning so be posting some feedback soon (ish)
OH OH OH
Ian
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The voice is phenomenal! You have a hook there, and it sounds amazing and you hit us with it right of the bat. I had to replay the track because I missed its presence. The nature of a hook is that people will miss it until you bring it back. Bring that thing back somewhere before the song ends.
Sometimes when I record a hook, I think "Oh, would peoples ears miss this in about a minute?". Music can really be powerful for the listener but they shouldn't have to starve if you know what I mean.
You also have a great start to a little verse in there starting with "baby let me lift you up" and "I don't want to let you fall in love" I know lyrics are hard to come up with, but I think it could use a few more.
The arrangement is perfect on the intro "bars" and sounds like a hook to me. Maybe cut out some of the cluttered together filler vox hits and lay those few bars from the beginning down again where they fit.
I think tracks like these really let peoples talent shine through. I'm hooked on the sound of the whole track. Do I think you should put a lot of time into refining it? No, I think you established yourself on the record in a really creative way that showcases your talent. You'll look back at this in a year and say, Wow!
I think this track reminds me of my track New Money... Its not on looperman anymore. I had to delete it to upload other songs. But you could find it on any streaming platform, spotify, apple music, youtube etc... here is a link
https://songwhip. com/johnniesmoke/new-money
I spaced out the .com FYI.
Great track again!
Johnnie
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Mark
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he not just hiphop
he got a voice
aint no rolls royce
but he take higher than those jumbo flyers
n his tounge is sharper than mr michael myers
... um ... how Im doing : )
thanks for the warm feedback
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OH OH OH
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I like this, the guitar is squelchy, to me guitars need some effects when you are to create this type of atmosphere. They could even be louder I think. Lots going on, the flute is sweet, the electronic bits are neat, especially in my headphones.
Wayne
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Come back soon with more!
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Mark
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You put this drums ande the rest really nicely together.
Hats off.
The vocal is also very nice.
I can see you growing and growing but hey...don't go too fast or I'll get such an inferiority complex lol
: )
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