Thanks - I just tweaked it - tried an eq the vox and on trumpets also up slightly in volume and turned the guitar down 1.5 db ... not sure if its better :)
Hello Ian,
I think it is a pretty cool track mate.
However, I think Paul is right about the trumpet.
I would try to EQ the voice a bit to make it clear too.
Overall it is a great track it is worth the extra work, mate.
Well done
Maj
Thanks for the constructive feedback Maj - been really enjoying your track (and the recent ones are especially outstanding) - I hope to get some more useful feedback and then I'll try some tweaking as advised : )
Nice listen Ian love the off key beginning, before it levels into a jazzy relaxed number. The female vox are smokey, the instruments are sounding fine pretty level, but I think the trumpet needs to be louder, on my headset it's sounds too quiet, the guitar a tad down maybe but not much else to add enjoyed
Hey Paul - it was birthday yesterday (Im so old ... ahhh) I worked and then had a couple of beers and made this ... cant have visitors or (apart from work) do anything - due to covid!
I'll have a bit of a play with the mix over the next few days - thanks for the careful listen : )
Me gusta mucho el tema amigo pseudobles, es tranquilo, relajado y la voz femenina a sido un gran acierto, le aporta ternura y sensualidad, enriqueciendo aún más la canción. Gran bajo y esa especie de violín me encanta igual que los efectos ambientales. Que tengas una buena noche compañero. Paz y salud.
Pretty interesting track, like the concept! So that's the author reciting it? The music is impactful, goes well with the topic. Sax was a cool addition.
"And an invisible chicken in every pot", ha, great line!
Hey Wayne - thanks for listening mate - yeah thats Charles Bukowski reading his poem of the same name (whilst getting drunk - he was somewhat infamous with the booze) - he is writing about the rain in the depression ... hence the line but yeah its a good one
That intro drum, very jazz very nice. awesome mix. I like the bass as well on here. very relaxing chill vibe with perfect sounds along the periphery of the panning. I had to fave this one and thanks for the download. really special treat this is.
The drum track jut meanders along, doing it's own little jazzy thing. I like the way the bass and keys work together. Interesting vocals/spoken word track.
If you go back into this, the one adjustment I would make is to add just a bit more reverb to the vox and lower the volume a bit to make them sit in the mix a little better, to me they stick out front a wee bit. I have issues with getting the volume right on my vocals all the time, it's hard.
Hi Ian listened to this earlier on SoundCloud whilst I was linking with an artist and singer from this weekend, i enjoyed it, listened here and enjoyed it again, them vox are great such a chilled relaxed vibe to this,well done, there's a bit of self promo there guys boost your followers follow people here, you don't have to use it cos you will have heard everything here anyway, everyone should follow everyone, makes you look more attractive to people just browsing looking for different, just a thought
Hey mate - thanks for the feedback - Im not sure who has a soundcloud but the idea of following each other sounds sensible (not that Im into 'promotion' ) Im more a FOBI that an FOMO person (ie fear of being included rather than fear of missing out) - the community here of course feels very supportive and inclusive rather than exclusive so that makes all the difference.
major disagreement w you re ‘boring’ — your sounds are anything but. your music always contains or is contained by the most super concepts, and realized with real presence. to me this track is perfectly consistent and works well to extend what you’ve accomplished.
i think best use i’ve heard thus far of steelyvibe, too. but i can’t help imagining what a few snatches of dialogue from the film would sound like!
Gran tema amigo pseudoble, me encanta todo, desde la melodía reposada, hasta esa voz femenina, dulce, sensual, que acaba por seducirte. El ritmo muy sutil igual que los efectos, muy integrados con el resto de elementos orquestales, sin sobrepasarse. Me gusta mucho. Que tengas un gran día. Paz y salud.
Gracias por la atenta escucha Sirefox y el cálido comentario. Me alegro de que te guste - definitivamente uno para los auriculares creo
Todo es bueno : )
Hey mate - thanks for listening - Ive done a few recently but although they sounded good were boring!! But trying to do different things so I guess I should expect the results to be more hit and miss. This one is very 'gentle' and for sue one for the headphones but I thought it held enough interest : )
Thanks Maj - I've made a few this last week but although the sound production was pretty good the tracks themselves were boring - I thought this one was better! Appreciate the listen and the warm feedback
This is absolutely creation at it's best. A very serene & calming listen here, without a doubt *Brilliant* work here indeed, the entire production is mint. Enjoyed my listen Kudos!
Hi Pseudoble, "floats along"...I think you did that fantastically. It's been a very long time since I've touched an MPC; you should make a few loops with it and post them, the sounds of the drums are quite rich and clear. That's what gives this track such a shine. The atmospheric sounds, sax, and the subtle hum...all feel really good; The only issue I have is the mid-drums loop (a break?) that comes in every now and then. I think it sounds strange to me because it has some low end sounds like bongos. Only thing I suggest is experimenting that fill-in sound. You could program a break using the drums you already have moving the track, so that the fill feels natural. Keep it up you're doing great. I'll ensure to listen more to other of your pieces.
Thanks for the careful listen and thoughtful feedback - I dont have an MPC - just the DAW! which is what I use with a mini keyboard (and I have other keyboards and guitars which I sometimes experiment with). I dont think I known for sure which bit has the low end sounds but Ill have a listen with the headphones on and see if I can find it. Even if I can I doubt Im experienced enough to fix it - very much have my L plates on in learning the software and putting things together. This of course is why comments like yours on looperman are so good - helps me (us) to learn : )
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I think it is a pretty cool track mate.
However, I think Paul is right about the trumpet.
I would try to EQ the voice a bit to make it clear too.
Overall it is a great track it is worth the extra work, mate.
Well done
Maj
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I'll have a bit of a play with the mix over the next few days - thanks for the careful listen : )
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"And an invisible chicken in every pot", ha, great line!
Wayne
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Thumbs up.
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If you go back into this, the one adjustment I would make is to add just a bit more reverb to the vox and lower the volume a bit to make them sit in the mix a little better, to me they stick out front a wee bit. I have issues with getting the volume right on my vocals all the time, it's hard.
Cool track, nice vibe!
Wayne
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i think best use i’ve heard thus far of steelyvibe, too. but i can’t help imagining what a few snatches of dialogue from the film would sound like!
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Todo es bueno : )
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Nice spoken word in it .
Well done!!
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This is brilliant mate.
The vox and the music blended beautifully.
Great track.
Well done mate.
Maj
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hats off, Danke
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Love your new one too mate : )
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