Silvestre

My English is Google, so I prefer to put the commentary in Spanish.
Me a encantado la musica, la melodia es muy buena pero tendriamos que mejorar la voz. Seguro que mejoraria mucho.
Animo, seguire escuchandote.

opening guitar sound is a good sound. The bass is very heavy in the mix. its tough to get that right. Maybe some compression or EQ a little better in the mix. The vocals are hard to understand. maybe pronunciation is something to work on. Timing is key too. Make sure the vocals follow the rhythm just like you would with any instrument. Work on hearing what notes you want to sing and hitting the pitch. It may work for you to have a very specific melody to work on. that way you have a road map and foundation to build on. Then try your best to hit those notes. Vocals are very tough to get right. you may also benefit from some vocal exercises on your own that help train your ear and your voice to hit the correct pitch. good luck and keep working.

Good description, really cool beach rock. Actually, it's great.

/pmk

Hey Silvestre. This is great! I agree with you that the Rhodes needs to be more in the back and the second guitar needs to be more in front. You just need to master this one, man. Set your stuff up in the soundfeild so everythings not center and bring the bass and rhodes down a bit. Try closing your eyes and imagine this band on stage , where would eveybody be on stage? Now set the pans to where you see them in your mind, but keep the drums and bass center. This is really nice man... just a little tweaking in post production will kill your need for another instrument. Seriuosly Dude, I'm not trying to put you down, cause this really is great and has everything it needs... its just all walking all over each other the way it is and its hard to focus on the flow when everybody is "speaking" at once.

yeah its a bit loud with that vocal thing at the start..

as far as the violin thing goes maybe you can get a better

selection of that going because they are very light here.

Thanks

I love good instrumentals, so I downloaded this one.

About the only suggestion I would make is to practice your mixing. You have a cool tom-tom section in the middle which cuts off too suddenly, which is a little jarring.

Keep up the good work!

Sonny

Sweet track Silvestre. Really liked the keys in this. The guitar track was impressive and the track had a nice laid back blues feel to it. Nice job!

Wayne

Ya I like it. Very good guitar playing. A little blues to this too. I think the time you spent was worth it.
Gord

Buena música, que a ratos me recuerda a Beatles (sobre todo el bajo... el sitar tambiÃÂn ayuda). Realmente suena enorme. Gran trabajo.

The leading Sitar together with heavy electric guitar chords - that is a cool fusion rock sound - I like it.. good work!

This is pretty cool man! The timings a little .... well.. I don't know. It feels like you didn't write it but rather just pressed record and went b*lls to the wall! It reminds me of some of the jam sessions I've sat in on in the past!! Good feel though... and thats something you can't learn... you got it or you don't!

The piece around 0.50 is beautiful, whole track is nice. I very much like the ambiance in here, the guitar sounds a lil too monotone for me, I'd give it a slight pitch here and there, but depends what you like. Great how you done the synths, can't figure out is that a live instrument or clever bar placement.

I think this track has a lot of promise,you really showed your versatility here!I like some of the suggestions Fayz made especially about the drums- maybe a little compression as well as EQ.I like your guitar work,and the bass is pretty cool!The dirty organ gives it a Deep purple feel.Once you work out the kinks I think this could be great!

Gran música compañero. Realmente con fuerza esta balada. La utilización del órgano es genial para generar potencia. Mágica composición.

Powerful track, loved the harp and vocal pads. The cello and strings were nicely placed in this. I might suggest a little eq on the overall mix, it sounds a little hot on the mids and highs, maybe redo the mastering if you mastered it. Overall very cool track!!

Wayne

Absolutely excellent piece of work. Love it. Incredible guitar work.

Faved and Downloaded

John

Excellent piece of rock. I agree with Kikajon, this is a definite fav. Plus I gotta download this baby for the car.

All The Best

John

Well done, man. This puts a smile on my face and I totally love the reversed guitarsolo.
It's a fav.
/pmk

This sounds like The Pretenders, Like a decent 1985 record. It would be decent to have a Chrissy Hynde type Vocal on here, maybe a Synth bridging the Verses? Anyway, I like your energy!

cool bass tone, guitar sounds a bit digital... do you ever try mic'ing your amp?

reminds me of The Ramones.

Otro buen ritmo de Rock. Realmente potente y rítmico. Me ha encantado. Sigues haciendo buenos temas.

I like the feel of this 3 piece instrumental. I think the title is appropriate, this song has that "driving home on Friday after work" feel to it, this pumped me up man!! Great job!!

dl and fav!! thanks.

Wayne

Nice track, this is a very good instrumental. Love the stereo effect on the guitar has a very surround sound feel to it. Great job on this, nice use of different sound. Keep it up man.

This is rather good, some really, really nice parts. The first piano and guitar blew me away.
Now, for some critique: This sounds like you had a lot of ideas and laid the out in a line – I wish you'd saved some of them for another tune. The themes are really good but they deserve to get their own song, if you see what I mean.

I really think you're a talent and I hope you don't get this wrong. I do think this is something good that has the potential of greatness.
Take care
/pmk

Buen tema de rock. Bien utilizados todos los instrumentos. Realmente me ha gustado el tema y la concepción que tienes del desarrollo de la música.