Where You Are - Silvestre

1st Nov 2010 01:44 - 16 years ago
Tags :
Rock
7.57 MB
Description : This is my first comopocition with vocals i know my voice is the worst in the world and i have many mistakes but the purpouse to be in this great site is to share opinios all opinions and suggestions are welcome i am sure it will help me to be better

SINCE YOU BEEN GONE
I SEE THE LIGHT TO FAR AWAY
MY SIGHT LOOK S SO SAD
AND
IN MY EYES THE RAIN NEVER STOP

LONELY WITHOUT YOU
I AM LIKE WOUNDED DOG
LIKE BIRD WITHOUT NEST
LIKE TREE WITHOUT LEAVES

WHO IS GOING STOP THE RAIN?
MY HEART IS OVERFLOW
WHO IS GOING STOP THE RAIN ON ME
ONLY YOU
ONLY YOU CAN STOP THIS RAIN

STILL RAINING IN MY HEART
TELL ME WHAT TO DO
BECAUSE IN MY EYES THE RAIN NEVER STOP
PLEASE COME BACK TO ME NOW
THINGS I NEVER UNDERSTUD YOU MAKE ME
REALIZE
PLEASE COME BACK TO ME NOW

TELL ME WHAT WAS WRONG
TELL ME WHY YOU CHANGED YOUR MIND
HERE AT HOME EVERYTHING STILL THE SAME
THE THING I NEVER UNDERSTOUD YOU MAKE ME REALIZE
NOW I KNOW HOW MUCH YOU MEAN TO ME

LIVING IN THIS ORDINARY WORLD IS NOT
EASY TO SURVIVE
TELL ME HOW I LEARN WITH YOU
I NOT GOOD IN ANOTHER PLACE
BECAUSE I BELONG TO YOU
I DON’T FIND THE WAY TO MAKE YOU COME BACK TO ME

THE CAT AND THE DOG THEY ARE NOT FIGTHTING ANY MORE
THEY ARE JUST LOOKING AT THE DOOR
BECAUSE THEY ARE MISSING YOU SAME AS ME
THEY ARE ASKING WHERE YOU ARE

WHERE YOU ARE?
WHERE YOU ARE?

I MISS YOU
I MISS YOU
WHERE YOU ARE
I MISS YOU
PLEASE COME BACK

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give Silvestre some feedback.

CyberSon
CyberSon 4th Aug 2011 09:55 - 15 years ago
Hello my friend. This is a really nice track with a nice sentiment and meaning. Very melodic arrangement and it flows very nicely.

Regarding your vocals, I think your voice has a unique sound which sounds nice. I think with more practise it will be great. I'm trying hard myself to improve my own vocals and then mixing them into a track, well that's another skill in itself.

What I really must say, is I'm amazed and totally respect, that this is your first track with vocals and it's in English, which I imagine isn't your first language? My friend, there are many English singers whose voice isn't as a good as yours who would never be able to sing in another language! I certainly couldn't!

Massive respect to you Silvestre and keep up the good work!
Silvestre
Silvestre replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I realy apreciate your review, since I intented to sing first thing I encountered was my terrible voice having lots of problems to sing a good song, as many of the other fellows with the same suggestions I been trying to improve my voice following the advices of everyone I try to sing in Spanish which is my first language working in some projects .

For now I feel glad you pass by and check my track.

Sly.
digitalSKYY
digitalSKYY 4th Jun 2011 01:38 - 15 years ago
Awesome track!
Could use some better vox, but its a good start!

Keep Em Coming!

Cheers
Kenny Lee
Silvestre
Silvestre replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you CinematicRhythm I made this track long ago unfortunately I am not to good for vocals many times I been trying to do this much better as soon as I make some improvements I will post this again.

Thank you for your kindness looking at my work

Sly
Vicen
Vicen 3rd Nov 2010 08:08 - 16 years ago
Gran composición otra vez. Tienes el ritmo en el cuerpo y un sonido muy peculiar que looperman necesitaba.
Bueno, amigo, tu voz no es mala. A mi me gusta. Si que es cierto que debes practicar un poco para entrar en el momento adecuado y que suene todo mejor. A mi me pasó al principio. Tengo composiciones guardadas hoy en día en que mi voz suena a destiempo y mucho peor de lo que te puedas imaginar...además no tengo una gran voz. Yo suelo decir que era mi ÃÂpoca punk. Si cuela... cuela.
Silvestre
Silvestre replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Antes de subirla queria consultar contigo pero ya que lo hicistes no se de que manera me vas a ayudar a mejorar la vos ya empieso hacer algunos ejercicios para mejorarla estoy por comprar una guitarra electrica saves que estoy en una silla de ruedas devido al accidente mis dedos aun no se han recuperado del todo . aparte de eso tambien tengo que salir a trabajar el tiempo que le dedico a la musica es poco pero me emociona el compartir en loopermanlas experiencias y mas que nada me motiva para aprender un poco mas ya que cantar una cancion es una del las cosas que pense que seria impocible en mi vida pÃÂro ya ves aqui voy y me siento mejor al ver que poco a poco lo estoy hacien con ayuda de todos especialmente tu que desde que te escuche me hice fan de tus vos se que tener una buena vos es un don de dios y tu lo tienes y eso te ayuda a tener tu gran talento el cual admiro mucho

que tengas el emjor de tus dias
Gordw
Gordw 2nd Nov 2010 21:59 - 16 years ago
Ya know, your vocal is good, Just the timimg and the holding of notes is a little off. But your voice is great. If this is your first attempt........well I have to tell you it's good. Keep working because your vocal sound is unique and good . All the best.
Gord
Silvestre
Silvestre replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I never though start this song I didnt know what happen to me it make me see a lot of thing that I have to learn to be better as always I apreciate your review

all the best for you
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 2nd Nov 2010 01:29 - 16 years ago
I'll get back to you on it about it as soon as I complete a few of the other projects (including collabs) I have on the currently have on the go.

As for friend, of course I consider you a friend :-) Did you know you were only 2 months and 3 days older than I?

All The Best

John
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 2nd Nov 2010 00:25 - 16 years ago
The backing track is absolutely fantastic. LOve it. The vocals could use a bit of tweaking, but, at the same time, are kind of charming as they currently exist.

You skill never ceases to amaze me (Faved)

Friend and fan

John
Silvestre
Silvestre replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
HEY JHON WE CAN MAKE THIS MUCH BETTER IF YOU LIKE I AM SO GLAD YOU CONCIDER MY SELF AS A FRIEND IF YOU HAVE AN IDEA HOW TO MAKE THIS BETTER I WILL BE HAPPY TO SHARE WITH YOU THIS TRACK
Puchineli
Puchineli 1st Nov 2010 18:24 - 16 years ago
My English is Google, so I prefer to put the commentary in Spanish.
Me a encantado la musica, la melodia es muy buena pero tendriamos que mejorar la voz. Seguro que mejoraria mucho.
Animo, seguire escuchandote.
Silvestre
Silvestre replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
gracias por tu tiempo la verdad nunca pense que fuera tan dificil cantar pero ya he comensado con algunos ejercicios para la proxima despues de todo me parece algo emocianante compartir experiancias en este gran sitio saludos
elrod
elrod 1st Nov 2010 02:02 - 16 years ago
opening guitar sound is a good sound. The bass is very heavy in the mix. its tough to get that right. Maybe some compression or EQ a little better in the mix. The vocals are hard to understand. maybe pronunciation is something to work on. Timing is key too. Make sure the vocals follow the rhythm just like you would with any instrument. Work on hearing what notes you want to sing and hitting the pitch. It may work for you to have a very specific melody to work on. that way you have a road map and foundation to build on. Then try your best to hit those notes. Vocals are very tough to get right. you may also benefit from some vocal exercises on your own that help train your ear and your voice to hit the correct pitch. good luck and keep working.
Silvestre
Silvestre replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thank you elrod am glad to have your review i will follow all your advises is my first track and i wil be more careful before upload the next in mean time i will take my time to review yours

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