VENTURE - Silvestre

Really can hear the Deep Purple influence here (weren't their album covers great? I love purple). Love that bass.

Fayz gave some really good advice, so I won't repeat any. Definitely have to listen to more of your work so I get a sense of your style.

Cheers.

You've a great start here. I can't wait to hear your final version. That one riff is awfully close to the riff for Deep Purple's smoke on the water.

ALl The Best

John

I think this track has a lot of promise,you really showed your versatility here!I like some of the suggestions Fayz made especially about the drums- maybe a little compression as well as EQ.I like your guitar work,and the bass is pretty cool!The dirty organ gives it a Deep purple feel.Once you work out the kinks I think this could be great!

i thought the into bass line was kinda sweet but then the second part to it didn't really match up with the first one. the track sounds good, however the guitar's are kinda everywhere, i think there's too many different sounding guitars. i also feel there's a lot of open space that could be filled. like the track just doesn't have a full sound to it. i would run the drums through the eq and try to get a nice "pop" to them. and since your guitar is you main sound i would amplify that, maybe add a few fx, to fill the empty space more. another thing you could do is put something off in the background. i would suggest taking something simple and make it wide (reverb, delay/echo) but then make it so it's there in the track but not so noticeable this would also help fill the track.