You definitely nailed the atmosphere of celebration with this one! I'm lovin that bass line! The FX are reminiscent of fireworks, which is really cool and creative! I like how you use that bell to build up momentum! Nice synth arpeggios too! Awesome work!
Hey Man! What's up?
Thanks for your great review! :) Yes you just described exactly all I wanted to create with this track! I had a lot of inspiration on this one and am glad you enjoyed and liked what I did here :)
Thanks again and have a great Christmas celebration man!!
Good to see you have another piece up for me to listen too, now have reviewed them all again lol, so you need to get cracking with more tunes okies...Like the intro here, maybe little long, prob about 30s, so love the vocal when it comes in, sweet voice, no idea what she is saying but sounds sexy lol, nice beat, synths and guitar in this one, have to say it has a very relaxing feel about it, totally love it, another fav here I have to say...Respect my friend...Estefano...
Hey Man! Thanks for reviewing another of my tracks!
Glad to hear you liked what I did here as this was a new attempt at another genre which interests me :)
The title means hear me señora and was written by Carmen stating what a guy would say to this woman.I'm glad you feel the essence of this track!
Thanks for the fave man! Don't worry I have a few more tracks finished and ready to be uploaded ;)
Will be coming by to listen to more of your great ones these days as well ;)
Enjoy your weekend and thanks again!
Hmm, I'm thinking that ya might wanna mess with throwing some modulation (or other similar effects) on this to add interest and more dynamic to the song before the vocals kick in, because though I love the vibe you've created here, it does seem a bit repetitive. Be a knob-tweeker, haha (sorry, bad joke from a sampler addict). I do think that this track blends well with the vocals. And I actually kinda like the raw quality of her singing (makes it seem more nature and live performance-like). Though, I won't hesitate from suggesting that ya experiment with effects on them too (just for the enjoyment of playing around in yer lab, ya know). Anyways, yer on the right track here. Just tweek it a lil and you'll be golden. Lates!
Hey Man! Thanks for the cool review! Glad you liked what I created here as it was something very different for me.Yes I know what you mean.I left the vocals like that so I can get the live feel as if it was taking place right at that moment! Those are some fine ideas though :) Thanks I will work on that.Glad you appreciated it man and enjoyed it! :) Have a nice day!
That must've been really cool. In an odd sorta way though. I say odd because I've been to places here in the southeastern US where books & films were set. And a fun bit of useless trivia is- I went to basic at where they shot the movie Stripes. My barracks was right down the road from the ones seen in the film and we'd actually run around them for our APFT (we also ran the same obstacle course they did).
Nuff about that and let's talk about the song now.
This def has a nice open and airy vibe to it (which I'm sure matches the vaulted ceilings of the castle halls). And the combined quality of the fonts ya used give it a cool feeling, that I know is usually present in old brick/stone structures. The bass sequence's steady, almost monotonous nature aides in painting a picture of falling rain striking the ground. The pads are kinda like the echoes of light cast out/down from the lightning. On the tech-side, the only thing I'd suggest at this point in time (since this was done so long ago) is to work on smoothing out that sudden end (make it soft & smooth just like the intro was). Lates!
Hey Man! Thanks for another great review! :) Glad you took the time to check this one out.Hasn't got as much attention as my other tracks.
Yeah it sure was an unforgettable experience visiting it! And in the perfect setting weather wise too.Highly recommended if you are ever in Romania ;)
I bet you too witnessed some great places in your travels as you said.
Yes man your description captured exactly what I was trying to portray in the song and what was taking place! Really glad you could feel all the atmosphere I put into the track! Very good! I agree on what you said about the ending.I got to go work on that ;)
Have a great day and thanks again for your time and nice words! :))
I love the power of the backing track but the vocals are almost lost in tyhat power. I would bring them a tad more forward and make this great track an awesome track.
Hey Man! Thanks for the cool and also constructive review! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the track as I also respect the amazing work you do on your tracks!
You really should be making movie scores man! :)
Yes I agree about the vocals needing a bit of strengthening as well ;)
Have a nice day!
Was here earlier to review this one for you then my PC frooze, so back again, hope to have better luck this time lol.
Liking the percussion, and the beat here, nice vocal by your cousin need to get her to do more, sounds good, sweet piano or is it a harp?? or both?? what ever it is it is very nice, this piece has a little bit of a ethnic sound about it, just occurred to me that you have this one under trance genre, not really quick enough for that genre, or strong enough bassline, I know sometimes it is hard to put them in set genre, to be honest dont know what other genre this would fit too, parts do have that trancy feel but mostly I feel it should be in another genre, claroty of it is sweet, good arrangement my friend, liking for sure...adding to fav's...Peace n Respect mate...okies off to check another one out now...Estefano....
EDIT
My friend I need more great tunes from you, just thought I would check out another one, no more :-(
Already review then all :-(
Hey Man! :) Yeah those things can happen with the internet.I know hehe.Thanks for your really cool review man! As always it is much appreciated! Glad you enjoyed what I did with this.It's a piano you are right ;) Yeah if I had to describe it I'd say it's got that underground feel with Trance influences! Glad it worked! Thanks for adding to your favorites! :)
Wow you have reviewed them all! Got a few almost finished so be on the lookout to be posted soon!
Thanks again! Have a great day!
Love the purcussion. It's got that tribal groove thing going on that makes you wanna dance, and the chiming arp gives it a dreamy floaty lift. All together it gives sense of the exotic and radiates a lovely chilled vibe. Keep up the good work fella! ;)
Hey Man! Thanks for the cool review!
Glad to hear that you liked what I did with this track and also that you could feel where I was trying to go with this one :) It's one of my faves so I'm glad that you liked it! Have a nice day!
This is a really cool and unique style of trance! Love the different percussive elements you've included, especially those distorted ones that come in every now and then! Great bass work too! I like the chaotic melodies a lot! That sound effect that sounds like a zipper is really cool too! Those vocal clips add a lot to the mix! Great work on this track!
Hey Man! :) How have you been?
Thanks for checking out my new track!
Thanks for your really nice review! :)
I'm glad you really liked it as I tried to something a little bit different with this track.
Will be checking out more of your stuff soon as well.Have a nice day man!
sick, i love it, don't even got any criticism to add. Love how that bass indulges itself through the depth of the drums, cool flow and indeed energetic. You description fits perfectly. When the melodic layer comes in around 1.40, followed by subtle bass accents, it gets super! and from there it's pure trance indeed, real fine work, a fave of mine. Also this track doesn't get any boring anywhere along it's duration, very nice build up, cool hats around 4.35, from there on the flow just totally caught me moving to it and at 5.41 it's super how the extensions do their work.
Hey Man! Thanks for checking out another of my tracks! Thanks for the very cool review :)
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it a lot and could get you want to move :) It is a fave of mine as well and I put a lot of feeling into this one as it was one magical summer :)
Glad my description worked with how the track sounds also! Have a nice day man!
whoa i like the depths of the whole thing. the rhythm sounds unusual but catchy, somehow a tiny bit disturbing with them accents here and there. It's cool how there's a wall of atmos to it, but this track doesn't captivate me until around 3.20-3.30, there the rhythmic section distracts me while the ambiance does it's job, and well. With a great job on it's quality and massiveness I wish for more dynamics in this, but that's personal taste. Also it sounds good when the wall sort of drops off near the very end, would be cool if that happened once or twice during the rest of the track, it could make room for some excitement. Gonna check out some more of your work now, good job on the mood in here, to keep happiness spread and equaled. After listening to this my mind constructs fitting synth play which might've been there, like a ghost effect, nice artwork by itself this is.
Hey thanks man! :) Glad you enjoyed what I created and could get the feeling I was trying to create for this track! Yes Venice was an extraordinary and mystifying place and that is why I have put all these elements in the track.Thanks for your ideas they are very useful and I will take them under consideration ;)
I'm glad I could intrigue you with this track and capture your attention.Thanks again! Have a nice day!
love the slighty tribal/ethnic percussion that sneeks in half way. Traceys vocal snippets work really well and the track's got a fab rhythmic groove. Would be great build up track in any DJs set. Keep up the good work fella! ;)
Hey Man! Thanks for your great review! :)
I appreciate it! Glad to hear you liked what I did with this seeing as it is also one of my new tracks!
Thanks a lot for your cool comments! Have a great day!
Here to check out another of your tunes, interesting sounds you have going here, notice you have it under trance, to me sounds little more techno or more industrial, arrangement is good here as it keeps changing and keeping the listener interested, I am listening to this one on a laptop, some levels seem little high but that could be the speakers on the laptop, great synths and affects you have here, really liking them, have to say a extremely good listen, adding this baby to fav's, dude need more works from ya, run out of tracks now lol, really looking forward to your new piece's soon, Peace and respect my good friend...Estefano....
Hey Man! Thanks for a really cool review! :)
I'm glad to hear you liked what I created here as it was a bit of a different style I attempted just as you mentioned.I consider it Trance with elements from more underground styles.
Got to check out that about the sound levels.Haven't heard it out really loud on big speakers so am not sure but will check it out.Thanks!!
Thanks also for adding it your favorites and of course for your constant support of my tracks! I appreciate it man! :))
Have a great day and don't worry I have a few new tunes coming the Looperman way shortly ;)
Hey Man! Thanks for the review! :) That was what I was going for as Venice is a very unique place so I wanted to pour that essence into a unique sounding track! Have a nice day! Glad you enjoyed it!
Hey Man! I'm glad to hear you liked what I created here! :) Thanks for your nice review!
FlorinB92 that is another user here on Looperman has selected it to be on his compilation called Mystic Dj Presents Summer
Nights:Trance Compilation Vol.1.It will be a mixed and unmixed formats.And JoyfulWAVE
is making the covers for the album! :)
Pretty cool stuff!
Thanks again man! Have a nice day!
Hey Man! Thanks for the nice review! Glad you are back among us here on Looperman! :)
I'm happy to hear you liked what I did in this song and could sense the vibe I was going for! Have a nice day!
Random tid bit. The part in the description (word for grandpa) reminds me of the native amer word Papoose (not 100 percent sure I spelled that right)- word for infant or child.
The bass & main leads are prolly my fav bits of this song. The randomness of the drums was a nice touch too.
Watch out for yer levels (particularly on the low end) because the sound qual goes way down when I try playing this at higher volumes. And given their uber high frequencies, ya might wanna tone down the strings just a tad too (just to have 'em work themselves better in with the rest of the mix). Lates!
Hey Man! :) Thanks again for checking out another of my tracks! Yes you are right on that I also know that this is how the Native Americans call their small child this way.Always thought that was rather funny as growing up as it is also pronounced the same way too!
Glad to hear you liked the track and enjoyed how I worked on it! Thanks for the tip on the sound levels! Hadn't noticed that as I hadn't heard it on loud speakers only through the headphones so thanks for the tip! :)
Have a great day man!
The random:
A song for a GF, ay? That's cool, I've done that 2 or 3 times now (the first one started off as a collab with me trying to teach her how to use audio software).
The good:
The drum treatment at the beginning is superb (kinda reminds me of that one song that was played in the Bongo club in the movie The Mask). The way you start off the leads is pretty cool too. Like the simple double pluck that works its way into the more complex pattern. The track is beautifully done for the most part. Though synthetic is has a natural quality about it (like that Cricket sounding bit of percs).
The bad & suggestive:
I might work on the last part of this because it begins to sound a little repetitive for the last minute or so (where that whiny sine bit of synth comes in). Maybe you could work on dropping out certain elements of the song (where it'd only be the drums and the alarm sounding choir pads). Oh, and also reintroduce some bass somewhere in there. Anyways, cool stuff. Later on!
Hey Man! Thanks for your nice and always constructive review and checking out my newer tracks!
haha yes I get what you mean about the drumwork in here.Yes it also reminds me of that now that you say that even though I wasn't even thinking about that when I made it ;)
I agree with your suggestions also! Very good ideas man! :)
Glad you liked what I did with this track and thanks for listening as of course it is a special one for me! My inspiration was drawn from my girlfriend who I care about very much so I'm glad the song worked out so well!
Hey Man! Glad to hear you liked it! :)
Very cool that you want to include it on your compilation ;)
Thanks for listening and I will be sending you the link to it ;)
This has a really eerie vibe about it, which I just love! The guitar work is so well done, I've never heard the slayer plugin used so well! Those beats groove nicely! I like the use of white noise in this one, it really adds to the atmosphere, as do those reversed cymbals. The choir was unexpected, but it really fits in. I really like how this song progresses, it just keeps building intensity. Definitely one for a soundtrack! You and your brother have done a great job with this one! Great work!
Hey Man! Thanks a lot for your very nice review! I'm glad to hear you liked and enjoyed how we worked on this track as it was my first attempt at this kind of style and first collaboration with my brother! SO I'm happy to hear that we did a good job and you enjoyed listening to it! :)
Yeah the slayer plugin is very cool and he played it live on my midi keyboard.
Have a nice day and thanks again for your nice words man! :)
Very cinematic track with a nice variety of mood changes. I'm imagining something a bit epic. A few men about to face many with no hope of survival. Perhaps a rear action strategy like the Alamo or Thermopylae.
Hey Man! I see that you could sense pretty well what my brother and I were going for with the theme of this track! ;)
I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it and liked what I created here! Have a nice day man!
The random:
Kinda makes me think of what the latest Predator movie's gonna be like. It has this sort of tribal vibe to it and reminds me a little of some of the longer house mixes I was doin a couple of years back.
The good:
I really dig the basic beat and the atmosphere your synths had on this. You chose some really good sound fonts to go along with the light and airy vibe of this song.
The bad & suggestions:
Be mindful of throwing in more variation into your longer mixes. Using the beat as my main example- you had them going mostly unchanged throughout 80% of the song (throwing in that drop-away fade during the last minute or so). Think of the way breakbeat & drum-n-bass DJs will have their beats suddenly cut off at one point or another in the track and leave them to hang for a few moments before bringing them back. I also suspect that the synths on this would be perfect for a hip-hop mix (possibly even including a vocalist or 2)- just somethin to keep in mind mate. Later on!
Hey Man! Thanks again for another good review! Glad to hear you enjoyed listening to it and liked how I worked with this track! Yes I could do that which you said about having a break and lifting up the track again stronger and more powerful than before! Nice ideas man,appreciate it! ;)
Interesting what you said about being able to do a hip hop number with this.Will keep that in mind ;)
Take care and thanks again!
on DJ DragoN-Back At The Liberty Bell by DJsDragoN
Thanks for your great review! :) Yes you just described exactly all I wanted to create with this track! I had a lot of inspiration on this one and am glad you enjoyed and liked what I did here :)
Thanks again and have a great Christmas celebration man!!
on DJ DtagoN feat Carmen La Puerta-Oiga Usted Senora by DJsDragoN
Good to see you have another piece up for me to listen too, now have reviewed them all again lol, so you need to get cracking with more tunes okies...Like the intro here, maybe little long, prob about 30s, so love the vocal when it comes in, sweet voice, no idea what she is saying but sounds sexy lol, nice beat, synths and guitar in this one, have to say it has a very relaxing feel about it, totally love it, another fav here I have to say...Respect my friend...Estefano...
Glad to hear you liked what I did here as this was a new attempt at another genre which interests me :)
The title means hear me señora and was written by Carmen stating what a guy would say to this woman.I'm glad you feel the essence of this track!
Thanks for the fave man! Don't worry I have a few more tracks finished and ready to be uploaded ;)
Will be coming by to listen to more of your great ones these days as well ;)
Enjoy your weekend and thanks again!
on DJ DtagoN feat Carmen La Puerta-Oiga Usted Senora by DJsDragoN
Hmm, I'm thinking that ya might wanna mess with throwing some modulation (or other similar effects) on this to add interest and more dynamic to the song before the vocals kick in, because though I love the vibe you've created here, it does seem a bit repetitive. Be a knob-tweeker, haha (sorry, bad joke from a sampler addict). I do think that this track blends well with the vocals. And I actually kinda like the raw quality of her singing (makes it seem more nature and live performance-like). Though, I won't hesitate from suggesting that ya experiment with effects on them too (just for the enjoyment of playing around in yer lab, ya know). Anyways, yer on the right track here. Just tweek it a lil and you'll be golden. Lates!
on DJ DragoN-Castelul Bran by DJsDragoN
That must've been really cool. In an odd sorta way though. I say odd because I've been to places here in the southeastern US where books & films were set. And a fun bit of useless trivia is- I went to basic at where they shot the movie Stripes. My barracks was right down the road from the ones seen in the film and we'd actually run around them for our APFT (we also ran the same obstacle course they did).
Nuff about that and let's talk about the song now.
This def has a nice open and airy vibe to it (which I'm sure matches the vaulted ceilings of the castle halls). And the combined quality of the fonts ya used give it a cool feeling, that I know is usually present in old brick/stone structures. The bass sequence's steady, almost monotonous nature aides in painting a picture of falling rain striking the ground. The pads are kinda like the echoes of light cast out/down from the lightning. On the tech-side, the only thing I'd suggest at this point in time (since this was done so long ago) is to work on smoothing out that sudden end (make it soft & smooth just like the intro was). Lates!
Yeah it sure was an unforgettable experience visiting it! And in the perfect setting weather wise too.Highly recommended if you are ever in Romania ;)
I bet you too witnessed some great places in your travels as you said.
Yes man your description captured exactly what I was trying to portray in the song and what was taking place! Really glad you could feel all the atmosphere I put into the track! Very good! I agree on what you said about the ending.I got to go work on that ;)
Have a great day and thanks again for your time and nice words! :))
on DJ DragoN feat.Michael Pendland-Broken Thoughts by DJsDragoN
All The Best
John
You really should be making movie scores man! :)
Yes I agree about the vocals needing a bit of strengthening as well ;)
Have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN feat Tracey G-Bounce Back by DJsDragoN
Was here earlier to review this one for you then my PC frooze, so back again, hope to have better luck this time lol.
Liking the percussion, and the beat here, nice vocal by your cousin need to get her to do more, sounds good, sweet piano or is it a harp?? or both?? what ever it is it is very nice, this piece has a little bit of a ethnic sound about it, just occurred to me that you have this one under trance genre, not really quick enough for that genre, or strong enough bassline, I know sometimes it is hard to put them in set genre, to be honest dont know what other genre this would fit too, parts do have that trancy feel but mostly I feel it should be in another genre, claroty of it is sweet, good arrangement my friend, liking for sure...adding to fav's...Peace n Respect mate...okies off to check another one out now...Estefano....
EDIT
My friend I need more great tunes from you, just thought I would check out another one, no more :-(
Already review then all :-(
Wow you have reviewed them all! Got a few almost finished so be on the lookout to be posted soon!
Thanks again! Have a great day!
on DJ DragoN-Summer Of 2009 by DJsDragoN
Glad to hear that you liked what I did with this track and also that you could feel where I was trying to go with this one :) It's one of my faves so I'm glad that you liked it! Have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN-Summer Of 2009 by DJsDragoN
feeling it
Sludge City
on DJ DragoN feat Tracey G-Bounce Back by DJsDragoN
Thanks for checking out my new track!
Thanks for your really nice review! :)
I'm glad you really liked it as I tried to something a little bit different with this track.
Will be checking out more of your stuff soon as well.Have a nice day man!
on DJ DragoN-Summer Of 2009 by DJsDragoN
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it a lot and could get you want to move :) It is a fave of mine as well and I put a lot of feeling into this one as it was one magical summer :)
Glad my description worked with how the track sounds also! Have a nice day man!
on DJ DragoN-Un Giorno In Venezia by DJsDragoN
I'm glad I could intrigue you with this track and capture your attention.Thanks again! Have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN feat Tracey G-Bounce Back by DJsDragoN
I appreciate it! Glad to hear you liked what I did with this seeing as it is also one of my new tracks!
Thanks a lot for your cool comments! Have a great day!
on DJ DragoN-Pappos Theme by DJsDragoN
Here to check out another of your tunes, interesting sounds you have going here, notice you have it under trance, to me sounds little more techno or more industrial, arrangement is good here as it keeps changing and keeping the listener interested, I am listening to this one on a laptop, some levels seem little high but that could be the speakers on the laptop, great synths and affects you have here, really liking them, have to say a extremely good listen, adding this baby to fav's, dude need more works from ya, run out of tracks now lol, really looking forward to your new piece's soon, Peace and respect my good friend...Estefano....
I'm glad to hear you liked what I created here as it was a bit of a different style I attempted just as you mentioned.I consider it Trance with elements from more underground styles.
Got to check out that about the sound levels.Haven't heard it out really loud on big speakers so am not sure but will check it out.Thanks!!
Thanks also for adding it your favorites and of course for your constant support of my tracks! I appreciate it man! :))
Have a great day and don't worry I have a few new tunes coming the Looperman way shortly ;)
on DJ DragoN-Un Giorno In Venezia by DJsDragoN
on DJ DragoN-Summer Of 2009 by DJsDragoN
like you say to me "keep up the good work man" :p
greetz DJ RV-Tex (rsmisch)
Always appreciated :) Thanks again and have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN-Babel by DJsDragoN
well done
Trax
FlorinB92 that is another user here on Looperman has selected it to be on his compilation called Mystic Dj Presents Summer
Nights:Trance Compilation Vol.1.It will be a mixed and unmixed formats.And JoyfulWAVE
is making the covers for the album! :)
Pretty cool stuff!
Thanks again man! Have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN-Summer Of 2009 by DJsDragoN
I'm happy to hear you liked what I did in this song and could sense the vibe I was going for! Have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN-Un Giorno In Venezia by DJsDragoN
Glad you enjoyed most of it! :)
Thanks for taking the time to review it also ;)
Have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN-Pappos Theme by DJsDragoN
Random tid bit. The part in the description (word for grandpa) reminds me of the native amer word Papoose (not 100 percent sure I spelled that right)- word for infant or child.
The bass & main leads are prolly my fav bits of this song. The randomness of the drums was a nice touch too.
Watch out for yer levels (particularly on the low end) because the sound qual goes way down when I try playing this at higher volumes. And given their uber high frequencies, ya might wanna tone down the strings just a tad too (just to have 'em work themselves better in with the rest of the mix). Lates!
Glad to hear you liked the track and enjoyed how I worked on it! Thanks for the tip on the sound levels! Hadn't noticed that as I hadn't heard it on loud speakers only through the headphones so thanks for the tip! :)
Have a great day man!
on DJ DragoN-Draga Mea (2010 Remix) by DJsDragoN
The random:
A song for a GF, ay? That's cool, I've done that 2 or 3 times now (the first one started off as a collab with me trying to teach her how to use audio software).
The good:
The drum treatment at the beginning is superb (kinda reminds me of that one song that was played in the Bongo club in the movie The Mask). The way you start off the leads is pretty cool too. Like the simple double pluck that works its way into the more complex pattern. The track is beautifully done for the most part. Though synthetic is has a natural quality about it (like that Cricket sounding bit of percs).
The bad & suggestive:
I might work on the last part of this because it begins to sound a little repetitive for the last minute or so (where that whiny sine bit of synth comes in). Maybe you could work on dropping out certain elements of the song (where it'd only be the drums and the alarm sounding choir pads). Oh, and also reintroduce some bass somewhere in there. Anyways, cool stuff. Later on!
haha yes I get what you mean about the drumwork in here.Yes it also reminds me of that now that you say that even though I wasn't even thinking about that when I made it ;)
I agree with your suggestions also! Very good ideas man! :)
Glad you liked what I did with this track and thanks for listening as of course it is a special one for me! My inspiration was drawn from my girlfriend who I care about very much so I'm glad the song worked out so well!
on DJ DragoN-Babel by DJsDragoN
If u have send in HQ
Thanks
Very cool that you want to include it on your compilation ;)
Thanks for listening and I will be sending you the link to it ;)
on DJ DragoN & Joe-Darkness Of Mind by DJsDragoN
Yeah the slayer plugin is very cool and he played it live on my midi keyboard.
Have a nice day and thanks again for your nice words man! :)
on DJ DragoN & Joe-Darkness Of Mind by DJsDragoN
Nice work :-)
John
I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it and liked what I created here! Have a nice day man!
on DJ DragoN-Pappos Theme by DJsDragoN
EDIT: No worries, I mean what I say. Even tho our tracks are very different have a listen to mine and return the favour/review. Easy mate.
Glad to hear that you liked and embraced the originality of this track!
Thanks again!
Have a nice day!
on DJ DragoN-My Butterfly by DJsDragoN
The random:
Kinda makes me think of what the latest Predator movie's gonna be like. It has this sort of tribal vibe to it and reminds me a little of some of the longer house mixes I was doin a couple of years back.
The good:
I really dig the basic beat and the atmosphere your synths had on this. You chose some really good sound fonts to go along with the light and airy vibe of this song.
The bad & suggestions:
Be mindful of throwing in more variation into your longer mixes. Using the beat as my main example- you had them going mostly unchanged throughout 80% of the song (throwing in that drop-away fade during the last minute or so). Think of the way breakbeat & drum-n-bass DJs will have their beats suddenly cut off at one point or another in the track and leave them to hang for a few moments before bringing them back. I also suspect that the synths on this would be perfect for a hip-hop mix (possibly even including a vocalist or 2)- just somethin to keep in mind mate. Later on!
Interesting what you said about being able to do a hip hop number with this.Will keep that in mind ;)
Take care and thanks again!