Reading description and listening at same time I automatically my mind processed or thought of dimestop. And like I told him that's awesome that you guys like putting out your vocals because I could totally hear the confidence and that's what it's about the confidence. The beat or the track itself is really cool brilliance something that I know I cannot create at the moment I'm not there yet enjoy my listening man I like the description the inspiration
You know, I know perfectly well my voice is crap, and I used to never put my vocals on a track, but then recently I saw an interview with Dave Grohl and Taylor Hawkins and they were talking about America's next X-Factor Idol or whatever those programs are called, and how the Beatles or the Stones would never have made it there. Or Nirvana or the Foo Fighters.
So now I try to occasionally put my own vocal on a track - sparingly, I don't want to scare anyone, but bit by bit I learn, and I hope that bit by bit I get better.
This song just NEEDED vocals, full stop. I don't have any singers around... so I sang it... and all I can hope is somebody to say "hey, let me try that" :)
Thanks for listening buddy and for your kind words, much love!
great git bro, we have a lot in common when it comes to singing, we both think we're dreadful, we'd love to be better, but we dare, im 100% with you because you give it everything.
gorgeous lyrics i see your inspitation from the poem theres a R&B feel . i listened to this twice one on headset, the rhyme is so good the guitar just sings, you get a fav too, keep being you, i also agree if a female would sing the full vocal and you master it as a duet would be great, keep you in, dont do yourself down bro
Well obviously I'm hoping that Angelus or Jenna or Patricia (or Mayuri?) will drop by and make me an offer I can't refuse ;) but I probably shouldn't say that out loud ;)
Hey nice guitar sound there, and the tune is really enjoyable. Your vocal sounds ok, particularly on the lower notes. Maybe someone will duet with you? Some female vocals alongside yours would sound good I think.
Thanks a lot buddy! Much appreciated :)
I'm trying to match the emotions of the original lyrics... I think I'm getting closer but it still needs some work. It also needs loads of cleanup, which is not my strong point :D
Great track here, Bao! I've never heard that poem, but I'm definitely going to check it out now. The guitar work is so good. The change-up at 1:23 was enjoyable and unexpected. By the way, your vocals sound really good. It's unique and works well with the track. Thanks for sharing! :)
Thanks buddy!
The "unexpected" change has been replaced by a more smooth transition - I know you phrased it as a compliment but I think it's a bit better now :)
Thank you so much for listening!
BaoBou, much respect for the heart you put here. There's nothing more rewarding being a musician, writer, composer, studio engineer etc. laying those ideas down and bringing them to life. Hats off for that aspect alone.
Yes sir! I admit it's also frustrating at times - nobody else to blame for everything that isn't good enough :D but ok, that's why we learn:)
Thanks so much for the kind words man!
hi BB, echo Jynxz, man this this feels like being there! i really like yr vox and how they’re placed in the mix, it’s kind of shy but like a come-on still. cool, swinging stuff!
Thanks a lot man! I'm still very insecure about singing but bit by bit I'm learning. I've also decided to start taking singing lessons - I think that would help both me and my audience:D
Dude if this was my track I'd be very happy and call it done but then I'm an imperfectionist. Great guitars, tone on that lead is sexy, groovy as hell all round.
Hahaha I am just like you, I don't like obsessing too long over a track, but then I also know that when I come back to it later the false notes in the vocal, the uneven bits in the drums etc, all those will piss me off, so better to fix it now while I still have the energy ;)
Thanks for listening and commenting, very much appreciated my friend!
Listen, this thing is smooth. I'm diggin' it quite a bit. The ba-da bop bops are catchy as hell.
I think, as far as improvements go, you don't really need much. I'm picking up a lot of favoring of the right side. The Rhoads and the Guitar seem to both be panned to the right, leaving the left a little empty. Other than that, everything sounds great by way of mixing.
I may be wrong, but the vocals sound a little off time in a few spots. I'm not a vocalist, so I can't really say for sure.
Overall, this is a hit, man! I have a pretty broad taste in music, and if you had an album full of tracks like this, I'd buy it in a heartbeat.
Hey man, first of all good to see you're back and being creative. You're practically royalty here :)
Loving your compliments as well as the improvement points. Regarding the placement I usually (I'm lazy) have one rhythm guitar + keys to the left, one guitar + keys to the right, lead in the middle; and then I hope it balances out throughout the song ;) But that's just being lazy and I realise I haven't given that much of a look. In a previous song somebody also complained the balance, so that's a good reminder, thank you :)
I've left the vocals fairly organic, meaning indeed not very in sync. I fixed some of the worst bits (believe me, it was actually worse) but didn't spend too much time as I hope to record better vocals when my throat is sort of ok again :)
The final sentence makes my heart sing. That's super dope. Thank you man!
Muchas gracias Michael! I was actually considering to bring down the drums a bit :D but maybe I do need to do some processing/mastering on it to make them a bit tighter. It's so hard!!
Thanks as always for your good tips amigo!
Yo Baobou.
I diddnt need to cover my ears lol.
Zoals jij de instrumenten bespeeld is ongekend proffesioneel.
Je stem klinkt absoluut niet vals en goed op de ritme van de muziek.
Het zou inderdaad een idee zijn als je weet hoe je de vocal een beetje kan bewerken maar het begin is er.
Zelfs de beste zangers bewerken hun stem dus ik weet zeker als je weet hoe dan komt er nog iets beters uit.
Dank je wel voor de complimenten, ik bloos helemaal :) Ja ik denk dat een beetje meer kennis van vocal productions me zeker zou helpen, maar ik leer beetje bij beetje ;)
Wat betreft jouw tracks, ik ken je gevoel heel goed. Je hebt altijd ergens een track in het verleden waarvan je denkt wow, was ik dat, maar reken maar dat ik als toeschouwer van de zijlijn zie hoe je met elke track groeit. Ik vind dat ook superleuk om te zien; de horizon blijft steeds even ver weg, hoe hard je ook werkt, maar dat betekent niet dat je geen vooruitgang boekt. Reken maar dat ik het zelfde heb ;)
Volgens mij is het Chris Hoy die zei "Training never gets easier - you just go faster". Het is het zelfde met muziek: "Creating never gets easier - you just make better tracks"
Thanks a lot Steve! I didn't know Quiet Sun :o band from the 70s right? But I gave them a quick listen and I'll take it as a compliment :)
Thanks as always, you da man!
This track sounds live as hell.
I think the only thing that was
missing was the ambient sound of
the fans in the background listening
to your set. Bass, Drums and Guitar were
all on point. In fact I especially liked
the Guitar.
Haha awesome comment! Well, the funny thing about "fans" is that in a previous version of the vocals, I'd forgotten to turn the fans off - the standing fans keeping the place cool ;)
Great that you enjoy the "live" sound! I'm trying to get it to sound less garage and more pro, but as long as I get the energy across, I'm happy :)
hey BaoBou nice to have you back around, love the vibe you got going, the guitar is standout the bass guitar is deep funk and gives it that bounce.
you sound just like me on the vocal thing, I'll keep working at it :)) forget how many times ive wrote the same its not bad mate, your original that counts a lot.
Awesome Paul, thank you!
Haha yes we feel insecure about our vocals, but then I try to remember what Dave Grohl said - Bob Dylan also wouldn't have made it on "America's Got Talent" and he still made a pretty good career out off that ;)
i just want to say its not easy incorporating exsternal hardware into a pc software and putting the sounds to gethere specialy without £3000 of kit to do it right yet its easy to mix within the software so i know where Ba0Bou is comming from
Yep true. And to be honest, this track and the process made me realise more than ever, that my interest is:
- 60% Creating and Composing
- 30% playing and practicing
- 10% engineering, mixing and mastering
Yet the energy I spend now is the other way around. I don't spend enough time on the music, and the mixing and mastering (which I don't get, I'm not that interested in and which frustrates me) takes too much time.
I'll go back to just rushing tracks out the door as soon as I feel they're fun... and not perfect (I can't ever reach perfection anyway).
There is a lot more to learn on production than some people think..don`t sweat it my friend...it just takes time. There are some decent training courses on line at Berklee Institute but like everything they cost a bit. Some of the music magazines are ok too but they tend to be DAW or genre specific.If you can find a good mentor with the knowledge and patience that really helps..I was able to get several friends locally started back in the days when I had better hearing and was actively involved in studio operation...no worries...it will come in time. Happy to help if I can but my music time is really limited lately. Bet you will find some help here on LM...thats what its about.
Well, here's the irony. I signed up for a course here in London, and the course asked to submit a song that could be wored on - so I wrote the current song last Sunday.
I think it would be an excellent thing to work with... but now the production course is probably not going to happen :D (facepalm)
So I'm weighing my options. There must be several ones; the teacher I mentioned actually studied at the Berklee you mention, so that's probably a good place to look.
BTW reuploaded an earlier mix. I had made a "cleaner" one yesterday but noticed just now that in fact it sucked (even more), so...
Has a cool retro vibe. I think you have about all the ingredients here,,the main issues are with production: needs to be stepped up in gain and lots of punch added. Good idea to start with compression on the individual tracks that need it (drums..quick release will get them perking...guitar, bass...you can nail the bass with lots of compression & a slow release..insert some soft-knee limiting on the master when you mix down...render a pre-master mix, then set up a new mastering project to finalize & bring a little closer to commercial volume...but don`t do the loudness war thing..it just squashes your instrument peaks...cheers...sounding good. keep it going..have fun
Thanks a lot Tumbleweed, some great tips - also some things I'm not sure where to start :D
I usually have some standard compression on the bass set up and some filters on guitar and vocals, but it's clearly not enough. Things to learn then, and that means growth :)
Thanks a lot for your help!!
I got a real "Sympathy for the devil" vibe from this one. it's a good tune, as Ben has stated it's in the mix, levels, and finally the mastering where you need this song to be elevated to the rightful lofty status it deserves. I need those vocals brought up louder. the only reason they are not is that you probably don't feel comfortable yet singing. This is where a taskmaster producer comes in handy kicking you in the gonads to bring that sound up. I would also bring aboard some Ozone 9 from Izotope to widen the mix with the relay, especially with those guitars. and maybe subtly add in Valhalla Supermassive for some space. Right now it sounds like a proper 4 track demo made in a basement. I can't wait to hear what ben does with it. If you need another perspective I can always lend a hand as well.
Good work.
Steven
Thanks a lot Steven! The Stones and especially SFtD are some of my favourites, so I'll take that :)
You're right about the vocals, both regarding the mix and the confidence, and yes I'll work on both.
I'm very interested in the tools you mention, so I'll give those a try :)
And thank you for offering your help! You bet I will take you up on that, always much appreciate your work and help matey!!
Happy to help. Make sure they are all dry (no post EQ, but "baked in" wet FX are fine, such as guitar pedal FX), and normalized (if possible). Also, I get to wait up to 24 hrs for OneDrive to "unfreeze," so I might be sending you a google drive folder link instead, we will see.
I think I still have a shared folder with you. If you want, I can send a fresh link. Drop your stems in. I will fix your loudness/saturation/muddiness issues, then explain what I did via email.
Hi Ben, that's an awesome offer man. Let me do that, we had the folder for the "guitar battle" right? I'll create some exports over the weekend. You da man!
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So now I try to occasionally put my own vocal on a track - sparingly, I don't want to scare anyone, but bit by bit I learn, and I hope that bit by bit I get better.
This song just NEEDED vocals, full stop. I don't have any singers around... so I sang it... and all I can hope is somebody to say "hey, let me try that" :)
Thanks for listening buddy and for your kind words, much love!
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gorgeous lyrics i see your inspitation from the poem theres a R&B feel . i listened to this twice one on headset, the rhyme is so good the guitar just sings, you get a fav too, keep being you, i also agree if a female would sing the full vocal and you master it as a duet would be great, keep you in, dont do yourself down bro
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Hm... I wasn't really looking for enjoyable, I was hoping for moving... but ok, I'll take it ;) Thanks for listening!
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I'm trying to match the emotions of the original lyrics... I think I'm getting closer but it still needs some work. It also needs loads of cleanup, which is not my strong point :D
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on EP track 4 - When I go - Donna Ashworth poem by BaoBou
The "unexpected" change has been replaced by a more smooth transition - I know you phrased it as a compliment but I think it's a bit better now :)
Thank you so much for listening!
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Mark
Thanks so much for the kind words man!
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Thanks for listening and commenting, very much appreciated my friend!
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Listen, this thing is smooth. I'm diggin' it quite a bit. The ba-da bop bops are catchy as hell.
I think, as far as improvements go, you don't really need much. I'm picking up a lot of favoring of the right side. The Rhoads and the Guitar seem to both be panned to the right, leaving the left a little empty. Other than that, everything sounds great by way of mixing.
I may be wrong, but the vocals sound a little off time in a few spots. I'm not a vocalist, so I can't really say for sure.
Overall, this is a hit, man! I have a pretty broad taste in music, and if you had an album full of tracks like this, I'd buy it in a heartbeat.
Take care, mister.
V.
Loving your compliments as well as the improvement points. Regarding the placement I usually (I'm lazy) have one rhythm guitar + keys to the left, one guitar + keys to the right, lead in the middle; and then I hope it balances out throughout the song ;) But that's just being lazy and I realise I haven't given that much of a look. In a previous song somebody also complained the balance, so that's a good reminder, thank you :)
I've left the vocals fairly organic, meaning indeed not very in sync. I fixed some of the worst bits (believe me, it was actually worse) but didn't spend too much time as I hope to record better vocals when my throat is sort of ok again :)
The final sentence makes my heart sing. That's super dope. Thank you man!
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Michael
Thanks as always for your good tips amigo!
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I diddnt need to cover my ears lol.
Zoals jij de instrumenten bespeeld is ongekend proffesioneel.
Je stem klinkt absoluut niet vals en goed op de ritme van de muziek.
Het zou inderdaad een idee zijn als je weet hoe je de vocal een beetje kan bewerken maar het begin is er.
Zelfs de beste zangers bewerken hun stem dus ik weet zeker als je weet hoe dan komt er nog iets beters uit.
Wat betreft jouw tracks, ik ken je gevoel heel goed. Je hebt altijd ergens een track in het verleden waarvan je denkt wow, was ik dat, maar reken maar dat ik als toeschouwer van de zijlijn zie hoe je met elke track groeit. Ik vind dat ook superleuk om te zien; de horizon blijft steeds even ver weg, hoe hard je ook werkt, maar dat betekent niet dat je geen vooruitgang boekt. Reken maar dat ik het zelfde heb ;)
Volgens mij is het Chris Hoy die zei "Training never gets easier - you just go faster". Het is het zelfde met muziek: "Creating never gets easier - you just make better tracks"
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Thanks as always, you da man!
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This track sounds live as hell.
I think the only thing that was
missing was the ambient sound of
the fans in the background listening
to your set. Bass, Drums and Guitar were
all on point. In fact I especially liked
the Guitar.
Great track. Cheers Mate..
PEACE...
Great that you enjoy the "live" sound! I'm trying to get it to sound less garage and more pro, but as long as I get the energy across, I'm happy :)
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you sound just like me on the vocal thing, I'll keep working at it :)) forget how many times ive wrote the same its not bad mate, your original that counts a lot.
Haha yes we feel insecure about our vocals, but then I try to remember what Dave Grohl said - Bob Dylan also wouldn't have made it on "America's Got Talent" and he still made a pretty good career out off that ;)
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- 60% Creating and Composing
- 30% playing and practicing
- 10% engineering, mixing and mastering
Yet the energy I spend now is the other way around. I don't spend enough time on the music, and the mixing and mastering (which I don't get, I'm not that interested in and which frustrates me) takes too much time.
I'll go back to just rushing tracks out the door as soon as I feel they're fun... and not perfect (I can't ever reach perfection anyway).
Thanks for listening Rockoff!
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I think it would be an excellent thing to work with... but now the production course is probably not going to happen :D (facepalm)
So I'm weighing my options. There must be several ones; the teacher I mentioned actually studied at the Berklee you mention, so that's probably a good place to look.
BTW reuploaded an earlier mix. I had made a "cleaner" one yesterday but noticed just now that in fact it sucked (even more), so...
We live and learn :)
Thanks again man!! Much appreciated!
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I usually have some standard compression on the bass set up and some filters on guitar and vocals, but it's clearly not enough. Things to learn then, and that means growth :)
Thanks a lot for your help!!
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Good work.
Steven
You're right about the vocals, both regarding the mix and the confidence, and yes I'll work on both.
I'm very interested in the tools you mention, so I'll give those a try :)
And thank you for offering your help! You bet I will take you up on that, always much appreciate your work and help matey!!
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TTYL.
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I think I still have a shared folder with you. If you want, I can send a fresh link. Drop your stems in. I will fix your loudness/saturation/muddiness issues, then explain what I did via email.
Up to you. Hope you are doing well, TTYL.