dolawhite

lol this was crazy catchy. haha it all fit nicely, no critisism here.

You mix the vocals yourself? If so you tore it up sounds good!

TITS ON THEIR BACK? LOL OH HELL NO.

dier hat ghezakt
german
mean cooll

goood goood
peace man

YEAH MAN YOU ARE ALWAYS INTO SOMTHIN. BUSY MOFO.

Haha...cool! This tune is all "Bronzed Up" that's a peculiar Australian prison practice of when an inmate goes crazy and rubs his own excreta all over himself..lol....I dig your stuff it's not only a good groove but it's very humorous and real,with a hefty slice of irreverence thrown in...Australians like anything that takes the piss out of people and buckets them at the same time...great stuff! cheers planet

dola dola dola!! hahahah this is wikid LMAO
your a funny bastard, i love your flows...

hahahahhahahaha 'i can only rhyme with 4 letta words, like bird, word, curd and turd' baaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahhaha

you dope mate!

great beat! tite shizz bro!
well done

PEACE!
Butcha d-_-b

Thanks for the track...hot ish

It's all about exposure, freshayer

hot track i love your style! the dico pella i like to use it myself,great backing groove.diden't like the fade out WAY to soon,i want to hear more thats a good sine tis is good for me
you find the pella here on looper https://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/420
its from raver baby aka paul

nice track man, i love that female vocal, you got that anywhere?
if so could i have it. i like the bass and the strings in the chorus bit too, keep it up

hilarious. i bet this was a lot of fun to put together. well done dolawhite.

I like your attitude it's got a lot of dadaist leanings in it....the low grungy beat works with this apart from the seams...I'd like to see you step out of the rhyme occasionally and just use the words that present themselves to your images..the continual grip of the rhyming cadence while very effective seems to inhibit a more dynamic deliverance and compartmentalises the overall music..far from being a criticism I think you've got a great presence with a snappy attitude..I'd like to see it arced right up....cheers planet

i like the way u like fuk everybody your still gonna get your message across wit the song im feelin this one i know wat u mean wit this track

Damn, like this beat man! Especially the synths in the hook. Ill.

Lyrically, this track defines what I like most about you: your willingness to just do your thing. Instead of letting yourself be defined by what you don't do, you choose to define yourself by what you do. Respect.

Flow sounds good throughout. Not sure what problems you had on the second verse before but it works just fine here. Your last few bars on this just took the track out in style.

Fav'd and DL'd.

dopeness

Dude, that was some serious entertainment right there. Listening to that track play and looking at your avatar, well let's just say that you have crafted an excellent and very clever persona. The music sounds pretty good but could definitely use a touch more TLC. A little soft reverb to blend the vox and the music together nicely would be a good way to start. Thanks for sharing this track, I was laughing and smiling from start to finish (all in a good way). Peace, Six

maybe i can use it someday,if i do i let you know!whats the bmp?

I agree with soundvisionz, you sound add some reverb to the vocals. Other then that its a cool track. Some funny lines.

Classic bro!
i love your flow, so funny, but still kicks some sweet ass!

sick tune man!
Butcha

ok, i hear ya. beat was delicious. tweak the vox and u got a street single homie, lyrics kept me listening and the beat had my head noddin, its a keeper.

B.O.L.O.

love the way you deliver em 2... wikd musik, i love hiphop thats not so serious...time + place 4 everything...u guys are way out there, niiiiiiiiicccce story on your profile enjoyed the read, how much do u guys smoke???

Danm man dis is funny as hell bit utsa sick ass track love it would it be possible if you could maybe send me some vocals for one of my tracks id really really appreciate it thanks

Heh... Funny, Nice Job!

had to listen to it again!
love it, funny as hell man!