Description : DL'd a track from 3Runner and wrote this yesterday, recorded it today. I normally like to have my lyrics memorized but just went ahead with this. Take a listen and give me a review, if anything sounds off let me know. Thanks looperman.

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  1. gSkrillla
    gSkrillla on Wed 10th Mar 2010 - 14 years ago

    Thatz some good music right there! When r u gonna drop some more? Cant wait to see what your crazy ass comes up with next!!!

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    im working on a few new ones now. in the meantime you can check out my album, free dl, http://www.mediafire.com/?mvz1lym3okm

  2. SMP80
    SMP80 on Fri 17th Apr 2009 - 15 years ago

    cool raps,nice punch-lines, I'm diggin it
    I think you should do 4 dubs of your voice:2 tracks of the whole rap,1 track of "in and outs" (every other word typically rhyming words) and the 4th track ad libs which I did hear in there and they sounded good.Also I think the music track should be turned up a little or maybe the mids especially the snare/clap.....I have been recording people and producing for 10 years and thats basically how its done....if you do that to this track it will sound a lot more professional ...e-mail me the results (mp3) at: keep doin ur thing man

  3. KIESERSAUCER
    KIESERSAUCER on Wed 15th Apr 2009 - 15 years ago

    Yo this is so funny! I like humor rap so much! Keep doing music like this and your bound to blow up!

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    that may be the most constructive review ive had

  4. PrizeBeatzEnt
    PrizeBeatzEnt on Sun 29th Mar 2009 - 15 years ago

    Haha, this track is sooo frickin hilarious man....Just too funny! Check out my new compitition track

  5. Sixfingermusic
    Sixfingermusic on Wed 14th Jan 2009 - 15 years ago

    Dude, that was some serious entertainment right there. Listening to that track play and looking at your avatar, well let's just say that you have crafted an excellent and very clever persona. The music sounds pretty good but could definitely use a touch more TLC. A little soft reverb to blend the vox and the music together nicely would be a good way to start. Thanks for sharing this track, I was laughing and smiling from start to finish (all in a good way). Peace, Six

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    Thanks for the feedback and the listen, I really appreciate it. Definately what I lack is quality production. I love writing, love recording, hate production, Im spreading my wings though and will be working more on that end. Thanks again.

  6. Reverse1984
    Reverse1984 on Tue 13th Jan 2009 - 15 years ago

    I agree with soundvisionz, you sound add some reverb to the vocals. Other then that its a cool track. Some funny lines.

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    I messed around with it a little last night with reverb but liked it better without, reverb comes with my next track. Thanks for the listen and review, its appreciated.

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