dolawhite

wow homie ya did ya thing on here man great job god bless and keep it Real

When I saw the title,I wasn't sure,But I was pleasantly surprised when I gave it a listen.A really good track with well thought out lyrics.Love the Growing Pains ref.(G0 Leo,Go Leo,we gonna party like it's your birthday!)Gr8 stuff guys.Like it a lot!!

another hit track!! the dubs came out good too keep it up

this is a nice track too man you are a hit i like the way the hook is dubbed too
"Its dolawhite not no fu(kin john mayer" lol
come on cuz you killin my buzz !!!!!!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT

Dude this track is so tight I like the way you rap ,lmao at this like I said before dub your voice and it will sound a LOT better its already really tight all im telling you is dub it and it will sound a HELL OF A LOT BETTER (not that it sounds bad at all now!!) dude you are a hit I'd like to collab with you on some music I make tracks,play guitar,write and produce ( I also rap) but I'd rather be behind the scenes I have a whole lot more things that are not posted, songs I recorded for other people and 10 tracks on myspace www.myspace.com/openmindentertainment80 or seach myspace music for: SMP80 ..............keep in touch man

cool raps,nice punch-lines, I'm diggin it
I think you should do 4 dubs of your voice:2 tracks of the whole rap,1 track of "in and outs" (every other word typically rhyming words) and the 4th track ad libs which I did hear in there and they sounded good.Also I think the music track should be turned up a little or maybe the mids especially the snare/clap.....I have been recording people and producing for 10 years and thats basically how its done....if you do that to this track it will sound a lot more professional ...e-mail me the results (mp3) at: keep doin ur thing man

heard this song somewhere, nice flow on ur part. well said words.

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, dude, i like the story, well said soft voice, i like the synth, hahahaha, but u still lost something. somethi.. ohw sh*t!! u had no hair on ur ball, funny ass sh*t. hahaha, for the chorus, get more voice, say like 3 ppl singing that part.

Yo this is so funny! I like humor rap so much! Keep doing music like this and your bound to blow up!

ha ha man u ripped dat nice lyrics and beat like how u dropped all da names the way u did it

your stlye makes me think of this line.........i contridict myself........punchlines are funny but my flow aint no joke!
i love this ish"i eat rappers like pussy" dope

keep doin your thing

Rollin with ol' JC huh?

man love this song alot it the truth keep it real for him homie hes shy were all alive God Blesss

Did you win the comp? After you posted this everyone got scared and wouldnt post their stuff. Lol. Ive been trying to find the forum mentioning the winner no luck so far. You won in my book either way. Dolawhite the Entertainer!

Well hey if you still want to you can, and i want to hear it too, sometimes i feel like it's all thats missin with my muzic

This is too funny man....i cant believe i'm listening to it again....this is just too good. funny, rhymes are funny, and the rhymes are funny....good work though

dang dis is hot great work yo keep it up

yeah yeah! this tight hommie, i've heard yo shit before,"stompin on you beanas keep you lickin on my weena." ha, that shits fly!

Dolawhite, you're on point with this track. You had me interested the whole way through with the name dropping and what not, and leaving the door open at the end with the botty hole. lol. Very creative lyrics and sick delivery. A+

Haha, this track is sooo frickin hilarious man....Just too funny! Check out my new compitition track

Ok Dola, man we have grown to be friends (if thats what you want to call it) But man, dude....you got some real talent! I know we got a ton of stuff in the works but I just wanted to tell you you are great at what you do! I look forward to doing a ton of shit with you! Kudos to you foo!!!!!

HOT DAMN DOLA!!!!!!!!!!! wtf did u do wit dis beat???? u aint have to kill da track like dat man lmfao!!!! im diggn it tho homie real talk dis shit is hot man u makin it hard 4 a nigga to win lmfao and da end a dis track had me rollin "next time im goin str8 4 da bootyhole" lmfao u a fool!!!!!! bet dat up 4 da name drop 2 homie lol u damn near dropped everybodies name on da site lmfao tight work tho man i think u won!!!!!!!!

kilt it love that you threw my name in there im honored Ill hand my crown down , but you cant have my ring , Im sponsoring the next one so dont think that the next one wont be so easy to take , but madd love baby do what you do ,you still kept that sick dolawhite touch and I love the no cussing homie Im OUt KIR God Bless

homie this is sick im mean literally nah i mean hahaha heard you kilt me congrats keep up the unique killa work KIR God Bless

Awww snap! Apparently you are the only comp entry. Hands down winner!Lol.