I think if you ran your vocals through the right effect and dropped it down an octave your vocals would match the music a bit better. The background music makes me anticipate vocals more like Slipknot. Interesting track though.
Tight track bro. Mic is a little echo-y but all in all its tight. I like your rhymes. You can tell you think about em ;). Haha I would appreciate some creative criticism as feedback on my works as well. Thanks for the contribution bro! Sounds ill!
Crazy sh!t man....I thought this was going to swing into some sort of Johnny Wiesmuller Tarzan weirdness..but the jungle is in South Cong USA!..and apparently you have to tell your Granny everything there! lol..I dig that sleaszy beat....very 70's "Faust" ..(an iconoclastic German performance band that I used to get heavily into when tripping on mushrooms!)...Dola I want to see Dr Phil psycho shrinking you on Opra...man I would pay good money to see you freak that dude out!....Great weirdness!..cheers Dave
Yeah man this is pretty ill. Didnt I ever send you the track minus that shht at the end? If not I should have and you should have used that one. It sounds just randomly in there lol.
I dig this upbeat groove..it skims along..Man it's been decades since I used to get high,but then I've always had a bent perspective....Yeah I really like this one it's great!..wonder what it sounds like stoned! lol.....cheers Dave
Love this one dude! Video was cool as hell too. How much of the song is actually true? Sounds like some of it may actually be real no joking around but its hard to tell with you haha.
Thanks Conan. All of its real, even down to "bologna sammitches is what im eatin'" I actually had to town down the real life stuff to make it class friendly
i think the beat needs some more db.i like the reverb.you realy think airplay is about collor?ore is that your dolawhite humor? just wondering! cheers from tha base
"In the red corner..the cursing cool dude,the man with a fiscal feeling,the foldin with the golden,the currency with the light Complexion...DOLAWHHHHHHHITE!".... amongst associated catcalls and raucous dwindling applause we segue into the track........Sounds sharp man,especially when you arc into the main groove..and yeah probably being white doesn't help a rapper,however that's not my call..the only thing I might include is some heavy orchestral stabs occasionally just to bump the vocals along..but you carry the tune all the way through like stepping off the curb....cool! cheers planet
i tried to add some extra vocal ish to move it along but mixcraft left me high and dry when it turned retarded and staggered my stuff off point. ie: you missed an awesome whistling solo for verse 2. but oh wells. i do appreciate the feedback brotherman
Commented on A Song About Loss by dolawhite
omg this is awesome haha!
Commented on Scared by dolawhite
Not weird at all, but interesting....it's just a bit short::)
Congrats anyway____Orlando
Commented on Scared by dolawhite
I think if you ran your vocals through the right effect and dropped it down an octave your vocals would match the music a bit better. The background music makes me anticipate vocals more like Slipknot. Interesting track though.
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Commented on Scared by dolawhite
A bit short to start to jump... but fun. Thanks.
Commented on Look What I Did by dolawhite
This may be the greatest sh!t I've heard in years. The beat is fantastic and as always your delivery is great.
"Bring the McRib back MuthaF*cker" lol!
Commented on Look What I Did by dolawhite
cool song really digging the flow on the lyrics. sounds good nice track.
Commented on Now Im Getting High by dolawhite
Tight track bro. Mic is a little echo-y but all in all its tight. I like your rhymes. You can tell you think about em ;). Haha I would appreciate some creative criticism as feedback on my works as well. Thanks for the contribution bro! Sounds ill!
Commented on Look What I Did by dolawhite
Crazy sh!t man....I thought this was going to swing into some sort of Johnny Wiesmuller Tarzan weirdness..but the jungle is in South Cong USA!..and apparently you have to tell your Granny everything there! lol..I dig that sleaszy beat....very 70's "Faust" ..(an iconoclastic German performance band that I used to get heavily into when tripping on mushrooms!)...Dola I want to see Dr Phil psycho shrinking you on Opra...man I would pay good money to see you freak that dude out!....Great weirdness!..cheers Dave
Commented on Now Im Getting High by dolawhite
Yeah man this is pretty ill. Didnt I ever send you the track minus that shht at the end? If not I should have and you should have used that one. It sounds just randomly in there lol.
Commented on Now Im Getting High by dolawhite
I dig this upbeat groove..it skims along..Man it's been decades since I used to get high,but then I've always had a bent perspective....Yeah I really like this one it's great!..wonder what it sounds like stoned! lol.....cheers Dave
Commented on Now Im Getting High by dolawhite
booby trap flight data!
beers and hairless cats!?
Sick stuff man. Faved this.
Great beat and flow!
Commented on Alpha Dog by dolawhite
lol, absolutely love it. Straight to my collection of humourous tracks.
Faved and downloaded, my friend
John
Commented on The F Theory by dolawhite
"By the back of they mullets"
Haha your crazy man,...still.
Dola is back!
PS... Its a Mexican guy in your track. My buddy Troy. lol
Commented on The F Theory by dolawhite
cool track man
its PERFECT what else
cheers Zappo
Commented on Life and Times by dolawhite
Well, whatever adversity you have had to face, yopu seem to be handling very, very well.
Great track, my friend, all the best to you.
John
Commented on The F Theory by dolawhite
I thought you was playin about the tiger blood man but clearly you have it cause your "Winning"
Commented on Life and Times by dolawhite
Love this one dude! Video was cool as hell too. How much of the song is actually true? Sounds like some of it may actually be real no joking around but its hard to tell with you haha.
Commented on Depersonalization by dolawhite
Cool man, good beat and some good flows too. Keep at it fam.
Commented on I Rap by dolawhite
hilarious dudeeeeeeeeeeeee...nice raping!!!!
Nice work dude
hahahh lol lol lol
rocky productins
Commented on South Carolinas Finest aka The Smackdown by dolawhite
i think the beat needs some more db.i like the reverb.you realy think airplay is about collor?ore is that your dolawhite humor?
just wondering!
cheers from tha base
Commented on South Carolinas Finest aka The Smackdown by dolawhite
"In the red corner..the cursing cool dude,the man with a fiscal feeling,the foldin with the golden,the currency with the light Complexion...DOLAWHHHHHHHITE!".... amongst associated catcalls and raucous dwindling applause we segue into the track........Sounds sharp man,especially when you arc into the main groove..and yeah probably being white doesn't help a rapper,however that's not my call..the only thing I might include is some heavy orchestral stabs occasionally just to bump the vocals along..but you carry the tune all the way through like stepping off the curb....cool! cheers planet
Commented on High Like Planes by dolawhite
Nice track dude. It's missing one thing though...a sound bite of Tattoo from Fantasy Island "boss, de plane de plane!" That would be dope. lol. -np-
Commented on High Like Planes by dolawhite
clever way to get reviewed
im impressed
yea but i think im higer
lmao
your track is dope all around
Commented on Get Em a BodyBag by dolawhite
this track is ILL dog...if you get a chance check out my beats and my group's page:Prosthetik Intelligentz page...peace
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Commented on Nah Mean? by dolawhite
Thatz some good music right there! When r u gonna drop some more? Cant wait to see what your crazy ass comes up with next!!!