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Description : Not sure about this one. I'm thinking its because ive said these lyrics a million times in the past year but im not really feeling it. I have tried these words on about 7 different beats but the 2nd verse never really worked right. So I tried them on a beat I made with loops and it fit perfectly. Added a lil reverb. Tell me whatcha think, always looking for feedback. This is my 2nd and last song about ish rappers.

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  1. alex_era
    alex_era on Mon 16th Mar 2009 - 15 years ago

    dier hat ghezakt
    german
    mean cooll

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    thanks man, so whats up? we gonna collab? send me a message lets get it started.

  2. Planetjazzbass
    Planetjazzbass on Tue 20th Jan 2009 - 15 years ago

    I like your attitude it's got a lot of dadaist leanings in it....the low grungy beat works with this apart from the seams...I'd like to see you step out of the rhyme occasionally and just use the words that present themselves to your images..the continual grip of the rhyming cadence while very effective seems to inhibit a more dynamic deliverance and compartmentalises the overall music..far from being a criticism I think you've got a great presence with a snappy attitude..I'd like to see it arced right up....cheers planet

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    I had to google a few of those words :)
    I appreciate the review and your honest feedback. This past year Ive been putting some real effort into trying to make some good stuff so if you have any other tips on how to better myself musically Im all ears. Thanks again.

  3. TW1TCH970
    TW1TCH970 on Sun 18th Jan 2009 - 15 years ago

    i like the way u like fuk everybody your still gonna get your message across wit the song im feelin this one i know wat u mean wit this track

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    im me, and i cant apologize for that. thanks for the listen and the review bro

  4. MonsieurDongBag
    MonsieurDongBag on Sat 17th Jan 2009 - 15 years ago

    Damn, like this beat man! Especially the synths in the hook. Ill.

    Lyrically, this track defines what I like most about you: your willingness to just do your thing. Instead of letting yourself be defined by what you don't do, you choose to define yourself by what you do. Respect.

    Flow sounds good throughout. Not sure what problems you had on the second verse before but it works just fine here. Your last few bars on this just took the track out in style.

    Fav'd and DL'd.

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    Glad you liked it and thanks for the listen, review, Dl, and fav. I believe this is my favorite review thus far.

  5. freakwincy
    freakwincy on Fri 16th Jan 2009 - 15 years ago

    dopeness

    dolawhite
    Reply by dolawhite

    thanks for the listen

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