Description : Not sure about this one. I'm thinking its because ive said these lyrics a million times in the past year but im not really feeling it. I have tried these words on about 7 different beats but the 2nd verse never really worked right. So I tried them on a beat I made with loops and it fit perfectly. Added a lil reverb. Tell me whatcha think, always looking for feedback. This is my 2nd and last song about ish rappers.
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I like your attitude it's got a lot of dadaist leanings in it....the low grungy beat works with this apart from the seams...I'd like to see you step out of the rhyme occasionally and just use the words that present themselves to your images..the continual grip of the rhyming cadence while very effective seems to inhibit a more dynamic deliverance and compartmentalises the overall music..far from being a criticism I think you've got a great presence with a snappy attitude..I'd like to see it arced right up....cheers planet
I had to google a few of those words :)
I appreciate the review and your honest feedback. This past year Ive been putting some real effort into trying to make some good stuff so if you have any other tips on how to better myself musically Im all ears. Thanks again.
Damn, like this beat man! Especially the synths in the hook. Ill.
Lyrically, this track defines what I like most about you: your willingness to just do your thing. Instead of letting yourself be defined by what you don't do, you choose to define yourself by what you do. Respect.
Flow sounds good throughout. Not sure what problems you had on the second verse before but it works just fine here. Your last few bars on this just took the track out in style.
Description : This Is Just A Snippet Of My Song "When I'm Gone" Which Is A Reality Check For My Brothers And Sisters In The World. The World Is In A Bad State Right Now And We Need To Join Together To Restore Some Peace And Integrity. Vanity & Self Love Is A Start For Each Individual And Joining Together Afterwards Can Heal The Wounds We Put on The World. Like, Comment, Download As You Please.
Description : This is a song made by my mate, and Produced by The Real Triggz on Soundcloud. Really cool song! Please leave feedback and share! Check out his Soundcloud page: https://soundcloud.com/user-112820814/bxnner-blem-remix
Description : Something i did when i was about 15, and when i still made beats. This particular track is actually the reason i decided to get into composing at all. I had a good run with the beats and hip-hop scene, but i always had a leaning more towards composing and this, i think, is the catalyst for that revelation. This beat is 9 years old, and gives you a sense of what it was like to be a young, passionate, musically driven teen. Thank you.
Description : Lights Out is a weird mysterious track - I don't want to say too much, as you will be intrigued to discover the story unfolding for yourself! If you want to look deeper, check out the lyrics. Many thanks to Fish-Tongue for the fabulous loop and Rasputin for the guitars. If you would like to support our music, you can find us on Bandcamp under kayos2
Description : First track from the 'Organic Beats' EP COMING SOON CHECK THE VIDEO ON YOUTUBE www.youtube.com/watch?v=VRE29XSHRRc Featuring Canadian rapper Apollo Klipse, check his shit out (LF)
Description : Track 6 off "Mo$hpit Mu$ic", the latest mixtape I got streaming now on my SoundCloud. If you vibe with it, give it a listen! Follow me on SoundCloud and I'll follow back. Always open to suggestions and possible collabs, my email and DM's are open! Stay up Looperfam
Description : Everything but the effects i played out. made for them hard spitters def would love to hear what someone with a flow does to this. me and my boy murdered this verbally as i made it enjoy!
Description : This is kind of a remake of a 2pac beat with vox from another 2pac track..Created on mox8 and exported to Studio One.No eq or processing on any of the tracks..a lil compression and tape on the master buss..just having a lil fun with it.
Description : Let me know what you guys think of this beat! I did not make the melodies for this song, LilTiddy created the two loops. I created the drums such as the 808, Kicks, Hi-Hates, Snares and claps. I also Mixed and Mastered the Instrumental.
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Sad Post Malone X xxxtentacion loop Part 1 by LilTiddy
Sad Post Malone X xxxtentacion loop Part 2 by LilTiddy
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Description : My single leading upto my first EP coming soon, Produced by me and I mixed the vocals, i also took the first verse and hook. what you guys think?
CXRTER on Spotify & Soundcloud and message me on socials if you wanna work.
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I appreciate the review and your honest feedback. This past year Ive been putting some real effort into trying to make some good stuff so if you have any other tips on how to better myself musically Im all ears. Thanks again.
Lyrically, this track defines what I like most about you: your willingness to just do your thing. Instead of letting yourself be defined by what you don't do, you choose to define yourself by what you do. Respect.
Flow sounds good throughout. Not sure what problems you had on the second verse before but it works just fine here. Your last few bars on this just took the track out in style.
Fav'd and DL'd.