dolawhite

Dude, what kind of drugs do you use...lol Great shit. Fat Joe probably does crush carseats.lol

Dude you silly as hell.Great Lyric parodies. Maybe you can double up your vocals to get a better sound(cheap mic and all)

seriously funny track and very well done man!
congrats!

this is awesome man the lyrics are kick ass...i wish the mic was better so i cud hear it all...but im sure ur workin on it...anyway the beat is really nice and ur voice has some serious potential

mandarosa

hahahahahahahahhahhahahahahahahahahah
dude i loved every second of this track man. so so good, keep it comin.

Spektre

dude i love it so real so funny and i love the track i want your album if you have one

what? ...up in you like overies? haha thats sick! let me get all the vereses to this i want to make a tribute to this dope song! and can i have this beat too? its ill, i'll trade you even!

Mos'

i love it hahahaa. i think the mixing does need some work but its good to hear someone doing something with track. i think chud it wrong though, you shouldnt pidgeon hole a genre just because thats how its usually done, if it sounds good... go for it!
if you wanna do any more just use any of my songs, i dont mind, just let me know when there done.
nice one.

sweet bro!
i heard the original of this!
i like the vox dude, but agree with the rest! when the vox are mixed in properly this will be heaps better!

sweet as though \m/

PEACE!
Butcha

The background tune is quite nice and yes, it is dubstep i guess, I would do something with those vocals tho, i agreewith Lucky Flaush you cant just whack vocals on the top of a track and expect them to be okay, you need to either double it up on some of the words (just like they do in real rap songs) and yeah shove some reverb on there and turn it down a tiny bit. I would change the pitch too..lower it a bit, it just sounds a bit .....white.

Traditionally Dubstep is usually accompanied by a Ragga Mc or a rasta of some type. Im not too sure if white boy mixes in well with dubstep, but its a good try anyway :)

You surprised me bro.. kicking. im digging this.. bigtime. Cool funny lyrics. Talented man. Invest in fl studio... a man like you would love that program.. Its good for the ole hip hop too. I have to agree with Butcher... a new proper mic is needed.. Really nice touch with the birds tweeting.. Super work my friend and a super title. Massive respect.

Ha ha!

this is better than any one thinks..but i no

Awesome track man. The beat is real tight. The lyrics are pretty cool and funny at times! The vocals could be a little more crisp though. You may need to invest in a better mic. If ya did your shit would be killer!! Not to say this shit isn't hop'n....cause it is!! Keep this shit coming man!

swell its cool and very funny pluss hardcore !!!

hey bro!

nice tune brutha!!!!
but you sure can tell that you used a cheap mic! im just imagining how sweet it would sound if it was better quality!
nevertheless, it was sick!

well done man

PEACE!
B.S