I remember this one. One of my favs of yours. Nice to hear the new verse, but why cut out the old one? Why not just make it a 3 verse track? "close me casket, hear raps coming out cus i rap bit*ch." haha. Well maybe you have other plans for that verse.
laziness. the last one needed an extra line added and i didnt take the time to rewrite it to make it work so i just replaced the whole verse. didnt feel like chopping up the beat to add another. fat girls/skinny girls coming soon! we better get on it, world ends in 2012
Yes! Yes! Yes! This is brilliant. The style the lyrics the whole nine yards You sold it to me. I love this. Totally faved bro. Ever heard of Curtis Plum?
" I'm a bike cop. Bustin wheeleis of justice"
Nice track and really liked the messege, living in the now, mindfullness, knowing what the self is. Great job mixing the vocals, nice tone, effects. Excellent!
haha.
Is this you!?!!?
OMG! You are amazing. Seriously. I do not issue idol compliments, because I hate giving them in the first place.
Your flow is totally different in a good way.
(and a fellow south carolinian too...haha)
I will soooooo make a video to that song if you got the lyrics....
i think u sound very very good on punk, really. no offense if u get what i really mean.
u sound like u were made for this beat or this beat was made for u.
and explicit as always, eheehhe.
ive always been a fan of punk but my lack of musical ability has made it to were i couldnt make punk tracks, now looperman takes the hard work outta playing instruments. i appreciate the listen and review very much
That's a Mr.E beat? Sick sh*t. The mix sounds righ to me. This Baby Jane-Dola combo works great. Back and forth like you're laying it down in the same studio. Both of ya offering up cool punch lines for us. Well done crew!
Im going to be extremely honest with you because i see you have the potential and drive. lyrically you're already there, but your production as well as your delivery was slightly off. going into the red is not always a bad thing it really depends on what kinda sound you're trying to produce. i say that because your vocals overwhelmed the instrumental. you delivery was choppy, almost like you were trying to rap like someone else. thats a problem i have with a lot of my artist. they try to mimic someones style making there song sound like they're reading off the paper.(rap like you rap and i promise you wont lose) Overall it was a great song. you got your message across and i was feeling it. like i said your lyrics are already there!!!! BTW that hook is killer....keep makin' hits
hehe, I found it quite funny at times, really cool. I especially liked the female vocalist, sounded really cool, clear and she has a nice tonality in her voice. Nice.
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sick track u got here homie
pc
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John59
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" I'm a bike cop. Bustin wheeleis of justice"
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J DOT - 2006
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The vamping in the background that is looped through-out the song. At first I was like ...that may be too much.
Boy was I wrong.
That "works" and it works WELL!
and g- check yo e-mail!
(see...I can rhyme...lol)
;)
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Wayne
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Is this you!?!!?
OMG! You are amazing. Seriously. I do not issue idol compliments, because I hate giving them in the first place.
Your flow is totally different in a good way.
(and a fellow south carolinian too...haha)
I will soooooo make a video to that song if you got the lyrics....
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on Dolawhite and Baby Jayne- Trailer Park Jesus by dolawhite
she has a really pretty voice
on Alpha Dog by dolawhite
u sound like u were made for this beat or this beat was made for u.
and explicit as always, eheehhe.
DextDee
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What's next, dolawhite doing folk?lol
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