dolawhite

really dope job man love the first line u drop before the beat drops n the flow is defenetly on point
sick track u got here homie
pc

TP princess...nice. like the name too dolawhite. the song is great to man real hip hop feel to it. dark just how i like it. keep up the hood work.

this one is pretty cool...pls check out my version of this song https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/57297 i love the lyrics great job man

This is an excellent piece. I don't think I'd change a thing. 10\10.

John59

Thats all true dola, keep dropin that knowledge. Good work!

Damn Dola, very tight performance right here especially with that sick beat by Wounded. Good message and production my friend. Fav'd.

J DOT - 2006

This is killer.

The vamping in the background that is looped through-out the song. At first I was like ...that may be too much.
Boy was I wrong.

That "works" and it works WELL!

and g- check yo e-mail!

(see...I can rhyme...lol)
;)

nice instrumental

Nice track and really liked the messege, living in the now, mindfullness, knowing what the self is. Great job mixing the vocals, nice tone, effects. Excellent!

Wayne

Excellent rapping, I dont listen much to this kind of music but I guess you doing very well.

haha.
Is this you!?!!?
OMG! You are amazing. Seriously. I do not issue idol compliments, because I hate giving them in the first place.
Your flow is totally different in a good way.
(and a fellow south carolinian too...haha)
I will soooooo make a video to that song if you got the lyrics....

Nice man. I never expected anyone to put lyrics to this. Kinda made it as a random abstract intrumental. Sounds decent.

Nice beat mate i like it very much!
she has a really pretty voice

i think u sound very very good on punk, really. no offense if u get what i really mean.
u sound like u were made for this beat or this beat was made for u.
and explicit as always, eheehhe.

DextDee

I really like the Alpha Dog title and idea. Nice job with vocals.

What's next, dolawhite doing folk?lol

Im going to be extremely honest with you because i see you have the potential and drive. lyrically you're already there, but your production as well as your delivery was slightly off. going into the red is not always a bad thing it really depends on what kinda sound you're trying to produce. i say that because your vocals overwhelmed the instrumental. you delivery was choppy, almost like you were trying to rap like someone else. thats a problem i have with a lot of my artist. they try to mimic someones style making there song sound like they're reading off the paper.(rap like you rap and i promise you wont lose) Overall it was a great song. you got your message across and i was feeling it. like i said your lyrics are already there!!!! BTW that hook is killer....keep makin' hits

hehe, I found it quite funny at times, really cool. I especially liked the female vocalist, sounded really cool, clear and she has a nice tonality in her voice. Nice.

Aye Keep doin ya thang pimp because you got your own swag and long as you dont change you be straight.

Lol,...Baby Jane huh? Oh hell no.

hahaha That was great! Nice collab. Beat was nice and easy and vocals and lyrics were awesome. Great job you 2.

Wayne

Hey dolawhite,

Your vocal approach and lyrics are too much. I really like your style. You have a great sense of humor in your songs. Really liked "Serial Mic Murder" you did with DJAirBreaker. Think I faved and downloaded that one.

Great stuff!

Wayne

U A CRAZY MO FO MA MAN!!!LOL!!!DOPE TRACK!!!AN YA BOY HOOKED IT UP SWEET!!!!SOUTHKAKALAKN GUTTANESS!!!

Thats hot man keep it up.

comedy rap lol