lazyboy

Hey mate,
It's cool to name the site so long as posting this elsewhere isn't against their Terms. That'd be the only way that this would be against the rules here.

Ooh, ooh, I've got to ask, how'd ya get the samples off the site (coz I know which one it is) onto your PC so you could mix it and everything?
I think it's super cool that they're offering the song up like that, but hate the way they've got a Flash player 10 mixing app programmed into their site... It's the only reason I haven't done anything with it yet.

Anyways, I love how ya sped this up and how ya gave it a traditional trance feel. I've heard the original and this was a nice spin on it. Thanks for sharing mate. Later on!

I like it. Real Slick. I'd like to hear it in a club so I could get the full effect. Well crafted. Good job.

im diggin it but you should add echo to some parts of the vocals with some space reverb and a break down towards the middle of the song with a quick change up on the synth but all in all i like it.. if i may ask if you have the vocals by it self could you send me it in a zip wav or mp3 perhaps.. if not its understandable..

peace,
truththeory

I like it man, especially the opening pads. My only complaint is the kick is kinda muffled but maybe thats just my preference for wanting a really strong kick in my songs.

WHOa
The minute I saw Avril
I was like this has to be great

sure enough it is
:-)

I was so sad when it ended :(

Excellent job
x-_Bri_-x

I heard the other version
and I enjoyed it due to the hard
bassline. This is the only thing
that is not makin this track
as strong as it was

The synth is perfect
and so are the vocals

x-_Bri_-x

A club hit dude!! What more can I say! Just needs a break in the middle s'all! Wicked!

Yay

you have some new stuff
:)

Im seriously loving the bass
and drums, everything is just so great

In most trance, theres an intro somewhere
ha but your like na, I dont need an intro

And quite honestly I don't think you need one

This is just beyond great

Its Excellent

x-_Bri_-x

I tell you when it all fits together you got some skills man! And when you got your mixing skills better, your stuff will really cook dude! Keep it up...your gettin better with evry trak!

good job man...u impressed me with this one....

yea, this track was well produced. good one for sure. you know trance.

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really very nice trance song. thanks for your song for our world:-d i love this...

Yep, this is a real real trancer alright, great job... ;)

I agree with the others that the intro is very abrupt. It sounds like you need to run a compressor over the bassline so that it does not peak like it is. Maybe bring the melody up just a bit. It almost sounds like you are running a side-chaining effect on top of it also. I love that effects sound on almost any track. If bring the intro in with maybe just the bassline for about 4- 8 counts it would work well or maybe let the melody ride for this and then bring in the bassline with a build. Overall its a great beginning to a track. Also adding a buildup style of break would go perfect to add more flow. I would def spin this in a set of mine. Keep it up. God Bless.

Sounds great, but definitly a different intro, don't jump right into it. I think a bit of mastering would make it sound better too, I can see this being a top notch track with a little work! Also use a different bass sound, you are using more of a hardcore bassline, which is for, well hardcore, I prefer to use softer basslines, or actual bass samples, but nothing harsh.

Great Track

-DaMann

I loved this track.

Only suggestions: The beginning is abrupt unless you are going to do a butt-up type cross fade from another mix.

The ending is not as good as what you are capable of; as you demonstrated in the overall song.

I realy digg what you are doing.

Regards,
COL_GRINDER

Really good beat, and lots of good synth nice job. Like everyone else said the intro wasn't a high point for me but once it got to it, I was attracted great work

i wasnt sure at first but wen it gradually got into it i fell in love with it lol brilliant m8 i love it keep up the gd tunes :)

This is a good track man, love this style hope you get out of your musicians block soon ;)

Grtz

man if this is your first house track you are def on the right track, no pun intended. this shit right nigga, this shit right here is deff!! good job. keep up the good work. holla when you produce another and i'll check it out.
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Thats really good :) nice one!

you had me wondering for the first fifty seconds. from that point onward it was instafavorite. brilliance. can i ask what pads you been usin, n what version fl you got?

Dont need to be so technical dude!! Damann is Mr Technical...he's great but technical! You just trust your ears man! It sounds fine to me! That's how we get better! Keys and trance don't matter..listen to "Suburban Train" by tiesto! His keys match but his rhythm is all over the place till the hats come in!! And then it all makes sense!

How the heck did you
get the kick sounding so hard yet
not to hard to blow my ears off??

ive been messing around in blood overdrive
and i always end up messing it up

The melody is freaking genious!

Favorited
:-p

This i like mate :)

Keep up the good work ;)