lazyboy

I like it!
Cheers!

Yeah crack on and get it finished dude!! Its soundin good so far...

I agree with DjR, Keep up with this one. Nice melody and professional sounding mix. Its worth the time.

Cool track mate, good job!

Hey dude...Well I think you been doin some serious trance revision..this song has shown you can come up with some really good shit!!! Great melodies and great changes...Only thing missing for me was a break in the song with a lead, maybe around 3min or so!!! (but like i said, and i may be wrong here...) it does sound like you've been listenin to how the pros do it, and that for me is the best way to learn! It just sounds like since your last tune you have a better hold on melody and arrangement and stuff!! Very Well done! Keep it up..!

I like the mix on this one. It seems very contained if that makes sense? Like all the instruments are one in some way. Seems in some way a little sad...you feeling ok? lol sorry

As the other guys said, this track has great potential. Go back and mix it again though. Start with your kick and bass together...that way you'll generate the groove for the song, and when you r mixin watch your levels aren't in the red. Also watch the compression...coz it sounds as if there is too much of it..

Second, filter out the low freq on all your cymbals and hats etc...they'll cut through much better. And then work on your leads / synths etc...and you should find the mix sounds waaay better! Hope that helps man!! Keep it up..

i like the begining...and agree with kidOptimus

The levels are a bit high but i like the tune! Fix the levels, add a nice hark kick beat and some percussion, and your on your way to a decent track! Good work!

Kid Optimus

i think it sounds alright tbf...
the vocals can be a bit anyoying when it says kill me again and again..
and it needs bassline
but i cant do no better anyway lol

Yeah M2000 said exactly what i was thinkin...NEEDS a bassline badly!!! The whole point of a dance tune is to get a groove goin, which comes from a kick and bassline. Then you can stick whatever you want on top....

I know its hard man....best way to approach this is listen to top trance tunes .....really listen to them....thats what i do...how they blend the sounds, what makes you move and groove, then try to do what they do....know what i mean???? dont copy them but once you get it you'll never look back man!!! Keep at it, coz you got shitloads of potential!! Honestly!!

AHHHH!!!! I had a page long review written and I accidentally pressed cancel... Well I will summarize... When the vocals say it's just one more... that is when I would bring in the beat. Then run the lead through a filter when they die down and use a cymbal or something to bring it back in. The lead is a little repetitive, but good. It holds the lowest part of the arp to long... it goes high lower loweeeeeeeeeeeeest, maybe you could go high lower lowest highest? Just some ideas, and maybe another lead, something echoey. You also need a bassline, and they are not hard to create. Take an analog synth use two saw waves and set them in octave 2 with high filter frequencies.

Just do something like this.
K=kick
B=bass

K-B-K-B-K-B-K-B-

Or my favorite...

KBBKBBKBBKBB

Tweak the velocities to get great sounds.

Good track!

-DaMann

nice vocals, but the baseline is missing?only synth,drums and percussion?you have to try better!could be a nice song!

you got skills man, and for a beginner this is really good!!!

yeah man, get this track finished with all the trimmings!! Will be bangin!

Very beautyfull melodie end timmbre of this voice! Awesome!

Hey man this is a sweet track especially like the end good job!

I like the synths a lot, how they stack so well. Very happy and upbeat. The synth needs to be a little more dynamic. You have that great synth, but it almost never stops, which helps build tension and make it more energetic when it comes to the chorus.

Great Job!

-DaMann

yea likin this 1 good little chirpy number

Mhm, I gotta agree with Zighn that the chord changes are nice. The kick could be a bit more solid and not as loud maybe, but tbh i know nothing of trance lmao. I think you did a fantastic job for your first track, seriously. As Eshar said you seem to be a natural. Keep the great work up :DDD

For a first go this is awsome!! Better than my first..which is on here too!!! Sounds at least you got to grips with the mixer...unlike me on my first tune!! Nice1