really like the melody in this,maybe the spiccato strings are too loud,so i would eq them and ruduce velocity to help the drums come through but man i like it
Yeah you have all the standard sounds, so now you may want to work on getting them to sit together right. It currently sounds a bit like throwing presets after each other.
oh ok. i wrote a bassline in 1 sound then on every note i changed the sound preset. so the attacks should in theory be in the correct place. this was my first attempt at anythin like this
great start i like the main beats cant wait to hear this one finished. are you using a limiter on the track because the track go's low and high if so i would suggest removing it but its a great track all the same though keep them coming
I'm liking it, the bassline though, lower it down just a bit and cut the low end to about 30 - 50Hz, it's really clashing with that kick, other than that I look forward to hearing the finished version, it's sounding nice at the moment.
The Intro made me chuckle. 3/5 :)
You know what man, that's actually a sick grime beat. It might be loops but it's well put together realised and arranged. It's better than most grime beats I hear as a matter of fact.
Keep em coming man, will keep an eye out for more stuff.
like it, it works nice, the vocal level is perfect, you sound like an FL pro, i love this place for constructive critique, i will be putting some pellas on here on the weekend, do you know how people like them? i will put them on unaffected and without any tuning. anyway keep up the good tracks!
like it, the levels come through good on my studio monitors, i would be tempted to push the volume of the vocal a bit more and put a good dose of limiting on the output, but the track sounds good, well done from down the road in Wolverhampton!
Hahaha man I was listening to this track looking for some instrumentals to vocal and then I heard my pella come in! lol nice one! like what you did with it.
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damn nice work man keep it up.
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The Intro made me chuckle. 3/5 :)
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Keep em coming man, will keep an eye out for more stuff.
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I think the rest still needs some equalizing and stuff...
I really like that lead in the beginning!
Could you mail it to me as a midi file?
i think i can make a smooth minimal track out of it.
I'll give you credit when I put the track online ;)
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