FrenchKid18

Yeah, I'm hearing a bass in this and maybe for it to break into some drums, a full--but sparse--band. Has a very 60's feel to it. Me likes! :)

Cyr

You maker great movie music. Seriously. Your stuff would make great opening credits music for films. I like this one. Even though it's about something not sdo positive, it still makes me think of driving on a nice day. Driving music. Good job!

Cyr

This makes me think of a David Lynch film. Or it would go well in that Breaking Bad series. Not sure if you're familiar. It has a nice raw, almost dark feeling, but at the same time it has a hopeful feeling. Does that make sense?? Very cool guitar parts, and your voice is unique (in a good way!). ^5

Cyryus

Great drum line and the fills just kill me man, Wayne you playing the lead? out of sight my man, out of sight, love it..

i am lost in space yeah

ash

As all the other reviews state, this track is pretty darn good just the way it is. It reminds me of The Clash. I think the track is good the way it is but if you really want a change in the beat, I would like to try a shot at it. Let me know.

Hi FK, What I truly dig is the totally live sound you produce. Music like this needs edges to give it that gritty quality, and this is first class grit (if you get my drift).

Cheers Slap...

yes - you have another really great one - love the minimalistic percussion approach for this one - it would still be a great song ... but so different if you had a full drum kit going here -but you did this one perfectly appropriately to get the feel of the song across- at points no drums at all - wow - i never think to go that way - thank you! Oh... and nice singing too, French kid!

Yo Frenchkid !! I'm no praying mantis but I saw this track of yours in the "featured" box and thought I'd give it a blast and a review. I'm glad I did...I agree with the other looper-reviewers, this is one class track worthy of airplay. A friend of mine's son produces mini album CD's of his own material and gigs across the UK. Your tune here is on a par with his and in some ways even better. I don't know if you gig or have a mini album with 4 to 6 songs on it but you could well do so and get interest. I know a lot of "unsigned" solo acts gig at colleges and Uni bars in the daytime. If you're gonna do any UK gigs I'll be your manager !! With each listen to your tracks they are improving and have developed your style. Great Song in every way.

Hey, I think it gets better each time I hear it!! Like the new beat, different than your usual beats. Look forward to hearing the next version with the guitar fills on it!

Wayne

so simple is the best
good voice you have on this track
good work frenchkid
cheers ZAPPO

Hi ,
I can say only one thing ''thank you''
I worked some songs and you know some alchols plus smoke and nothing.I was looking new inspiration offffff.nothing and nothing.and i meet your song.I remember a lyon night at a bar a man on the piano , he played and sang a song and i embraced a beautiful woman.I was danced with her , i was smell her neck and i dreamed endless love... I missed her , I missed her smell.thank you , i founded my inspiration.
peace

wow... it's such an inspiring track, this one, my friend...keep it coming...

Keep it coming,
Marj

Great work mate. This takes me back a couple of decades, but still sounds like it's from today. Well done, and I'd just compress the drums a bit harder and lift the level a touch. But I love squashed drums so don't listen to me.

hmm dude I think this has nothing to do with " electro" but still I like this track.. cheers..

You have such a good voice and lyrics Frenchkid. What this piece needs a stronger backing. I think your voice is a little forward in the mix. I'm glad to see you trying out the loop thing. Stick with it and you'll get better and better on the loop approach.

This is coming along nicely! The bass sounds cool, it kinda offsets the drum and guitar and works pretty good, imo!

Wayne

If I ever get A House Ignoble and Divided published, and it's turned into a screen play, I'll need to work out a deal for this to be in the soundtrack. I'm glad to find someone else who's contemplated the logistics of such a scenario.

I do believe this is my favorite Rock song of yours yet. Good call collaborating with Wayne.

Faved.

3rd up comment - hard-hitting stuff - I don't think you could nail it any better than this version!

2nd up comment - anti-naive cause the vx address the impact of war. the naive ones are those who register no impact.

Second K's comments re vox + drum. I think you have some anti-naive war lyrics, not the other way round. Powerful track.

This is a better version than the one you posted earlier. I think you mixed the vocals better this time. The guitars sound better in this mix as well, growly effect on it. Maybe turn up the bass a little bit. Like the lyrics alot. Keep working on the mix, this has potential to be better than it currently is, just my opinion. ;) Pretty explosive ending!! Cool tune, very 80's sounding!!

Wayne

Hi there, I like the emotions behind your sounds it is nice to see it good job guys, greetings from Mexico.

very clean. this song is great and stellar lyrically. i can really hear the diff. in new mix. nice work frenchKID.peace.

this is good man,but i feel it could have a few lil touches,but bein unexpierenced in this genre myself aswel i cant say what,still sounds good tho,i think the base is fine,showin your versatility in this one again,mal

its really a funny track. well well done my friend, really 90s punk genre. really thought it was well produced. the guitar is awesome man

Fantastic work, great composition, great brit pop vibe. Good work!

Terrific bs/gtr hooks - man thematically + musically you have got some cool opportunities to glitch that demo beat unmercifully and still serve the song. 2nd listen: Daddy Cool bass works!! Don't take that away! Can't wait to hear you step on this a little more.