that's really cool...your vocs pushed this song to the right place...into the top league...bit depressive but stunning number...hats off for both of you...
Yes it is quite a Somber track, but over all i am happy with how it turned out. Your compliment about the vocs will make it easier for me to keep pushing in that direction. It catches some people off guard not to hear the screams mostly associated with metal.Thanks for listening, and for the positive comments, Rock on \m/
FatalDecline. First of all, that's a great metal handle.
At first I wasn't too sure about the vocal style against the music style, but after a bit, I got it. It's kind of a Fear Factory meets Korn meets Deftones thing. It's got a nice heavy vibe, even with the more droning vocals.
I think, though, that the vocals are a little muffled. They could use a bit of a scoop in the mid-low frequencies. Give them a little more transperency.
I'm on my third listen, and even though it's basically just two parts repeated throughout, I'm still really enjoying this. It works for what it is. Kudos.
Thanks brother ! My screaming days are over, So i tried a different direction. It does catch most people off guard , I have not decided if that is good or bad yet lol. I listen to def-tones and fear factory quite a bit, so the influence is there for sure!
I am still such a novice at mix downs it is almost embarrassing, I have a lot of trouble with my end results being "muddy" if that makes any sense? maybe it is just the equipment i use, but most likely it is my lack of EQ knowledge. So thank you for the advice .
Thanks for taking the time to listen, glad you enjoyed it, Keep rocking \m/
Pretty friggin mean. Guitars are really heavy and have a good tone. Drumming is awesome.
I wish the vocals were easier to understand. Too heavily effected. Would be cool if you blended the effected vocals with the dry versions. Keep the dry lower, but it would help with clarity and still keep the effects on the wet track.
Pretty cool. Reminds me of Deftones a bit with the voice.
Nice!! Diggin this co lab, vocals sounds crazy good, a perfect release for the moments moment. Thanks for sharing this, it greatly helps within. Keep the music going! Peace.
This definitely sounds like a Deftones track in the distortion and the vocals.
There is a lot of mud in the heavy guitar parts. May be able to eq that out. It's in the backing rhythm guitars. The vocals are a bit watery and non-distinct, but it kinda sounds like that was you plan.
This was a good listen. Kept reminding me of "Change(in the house of flies)". Well written. Good stuff!
Deftones is always an influence for me , so that's awesome you say that!
I am still learning the ins and outs of my software, most of the eq work seems to do little or nothing to my tracks, so i am still hit or miss with that. Any advice from you guys would be well appreciated !
The vocals were kind of a stream of conscious fade in and out sorta thing.
Thanks for the constructive criticism , as well as the compliments !
Thanks ! Sometimes I am a bit tentative to put vocals on stuff, my style is more stream of conscious poetry. no real structure.
I am happy we got you to listen to some metal ! \m/
The guitar work on this song is just brutal perfection, Nicetones101 is a true metal shredder \m/. I am happy the atmosphere of the song worked as I intended :)
solid guitar playing. very smooth, rhythmical. the basics count for a lot. I guess the placement of vocals is a matter of taste. You could have put them in front of the mix, but as they are it offers a cool, creepy new color on more of an equal level with other instruments. very effective track. congrats!
Nice thick guitars rock! Not enough great hard rock and metal uploaded here. Lyrics were a bit tough to decipher with the effects you used but your description said you were going for something dark and moody so maybe it was on purpose.
I like the flutish synth you used during the drum breaks, nice opposition to the ripping gits.
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Danke
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At first I wasn't too sure about the vocal style against the music style, but after a bit, I got it. It's kind of a Fear Factory meets Korn meets Deftones thing. It's got a nice heavy vibe, even with the more droning vocals.
I think, though, that the vocals are a little muffled. They could use a bit of a scoop in the mid-low frequencies. Give them a little more transperency.
I'm on my third listen, and even though it's basically just two parts repeated throughout, I'm still really enjoying this. It works for what it is. Kudos.
Skol.
V.
I am still such a novice at mix downs it is almost embarrassing, I have a lot of trouble with my end results being "muddy" if that makes any sense? maybe it is just the equipment i use, but most likely it is my lack of EQ knowledge. So thank you for the advice .
Thanks for taking the time to listen, glad you enjoyed it, Keep rocking \m/
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I think you've done a wonderful job here.
Well done.
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I agree with evisma's comments on the vocals.
Id make the drums a tad bit louder too.
Loved it.
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I wish the vocals were easier to understand. Too heavily effected. Would be cool if you blended the effected vocals with the dry versions. Keep the dry lower, but it would help with clarity and still keep the effects on the wet track.
Pretty cool. Reminds me of Deftones a bit with the voice.
Evan
Thank you for listening\m/
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There is a lot of mud in the heavy guitar parts. May be able to eq that out. It's in the backing rhythm guitars. The vocals are a bit watery and non-distinct, but it kinda sounds like that was you plan.
This was a good listen. Kept reminding me of "Change(in the house of flies)". Well written. Good stuff!
Evan
I am still learning the ins and outs of my software, most of the eq work seems to do little or nothing to my tracks, so i am still hit or miss with that. Any advice from you guys would be well appreciated !
The vocals were kind of a stream of conscious fade in and out sorta thing.
Thanks for the constructive criticism , as well as the compliments !
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I think this is brilliant...
Handshake, Danke
Thank you so much for giving it a chance :)
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Nice work!
I am happy we got you to listen to some metal ! \m/
Thank you for listening :)
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Thanks for listening !
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I like the flutish synth you used during the drum breaks, nice opposition to the ripping gits.
Definitely a cool track!
Wayne