FatalDecline

heelllllllll yeessssn this is sick as f****ckkk yoo!

As a person who primarily listens to the rap genre I really enjoyed our music and I really enjoyed the flow and atmospheric tone of the song. Great work man.

frrfx

Reminds me of "stacking bodies" by Fit for a King, good job loved it

dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!I love it!Man your new mic kicks!very nice man!Yup!I gusta listen again!

your soft but emotioal vocs are balancing well with that riffage collection...pro work

congrats for both of you, Danke

nice man really

Nice, atmosphere \m/

Man this is awesome!lOVE THE END!!!!Very dark!Nice

loud and great at the same time...congrats mate

Man just revisiting our tunesssssss man love this track!

man just revisiting our works.Cool track man....I wanna redo or make up something using these ideas!!!!

fates just listening to our stuff again....FFFFFFFFFFFF this track is cool man!!!!!

Hi
Wonderful Dark Tune.
Great Beat.
Well done.
Jamid

dude bad ass

I really like this track, especially the vocals. Constructive criticism: Maybe spice up the guitar patterns a bit as I found them to get a little repetitive but overall I give this an 8/10 :)

very cool and different sounding track. vocals go well with the track, good work.

nice dude im gettin more into the 8 strings now had my seven esp for a while now

Dark and disturbing, reminded me a bit of Type-O negative and candlemas.

cru

Hey I really like this track ! Has a nice flow to it and atmosphere . Great job!

Weird!
Very basic growl.
But it works.
That is not a heavy metal voice.
But it works.
In fact the whole thing works pretty good.
Does need a bit of work doing on it.
I actually think the voice is quite wonderful against the growl.
There's a deathly pale hovering over this.
The grim reaper maybe.
The voice makes a refreshing change from the same old same old that metal seems to have fallen into.
Keep on keepin on.

You are absolutely correct how music will always be there for you. Keep at the grind my friend. Best of luck to ya, nice work.
Jason

Crowbar and Fear Factory had a baby..

This.

Needs work dude, it's not as bad as Judah says (listen to his most recent track, he can fuck right off).

The work is needed most in the mix and a few tweaks to the transitions, metal is difficult to mix and have it sound great, very difficult, I would be willing to try my hand at mixing it and maybe even add some accompanying vocals and tweaks.

If that interests you, send me a PM with the stems uploaded somewhere, preferably with as little effects on the tracks as possible.

I'm very interested in seeing your skills evolve.

Sir, this is awful. There was no cadence to the music (even metal has harmony. Screamo: blow that crap up with a nuke). The entire track basically exceeded 0db. Could not understand the lyrics until I put on headphones. Sorry, but there isn't a single decent point about this song. Edit: lower the gain, throw in a bass drop, a solo guitar, and amp the lyrics. I guarantee it will be a better version.

Hey Fatal!How you been mate?Man pretty awesome track,Well done on the vocals mate:)