MOONLYTE

I like your style, bro. Keep it up!

ok beat

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I wanted to let you know that I've included this song in my segment intro titled "Get you there". This is part of my new documentary titled "Triathlon Now" about the triathlon community of Orange County.

https://youtu.be/j3Ue0RImgns

I've added a link to the song on the YouTube sample and will gladly add you to the credits of the film. Please let me know how you would like the spelling of your name.

Thanks

Nice job.

Hey Dude!Great track Keep at it you are sure to rock hard!Im heading in for another listen!

I like the beat a lot!

I heard this before and I'm glad to be reminded of it - thanks to your collective efforts.

nice job!

thanks for sharing

So nice

Wow, how did I not see this one? I think you emailed it to me, that's right! Sure, your voice is pitchy at times but that is an easily-fixable issue. The chorus is particulary catchy. I'm glad you did this one :)

Brado

I make MMA videos. This is sure to be featured on my next. I will credit you and provide a comment link here. Thanks

Sounds great!

Wonderful music with strong impact in all elements!

Awesome track!

This is super nice!

It's okay, it has art and talent but nobody can take you seriously with this ID delete it.

Checking

Idk yet

I really like Brado`s music mix...but the hard limiting knocks out most of the dynamics and brings everything up to a similar level and blurrs the vocal...I see you already have some feedback on the pitch issues...I think you have the song and the rest of the ingredients Evedye..just a matter of spending some time on getting everything to work together...keep on doing it.....Ed

hi
I mostly agree with the comments below. There is simply some vocal practise needed to make the vocal sound better in tune. You're mostly far too 'under' the correct pitch throughout the song.
I know this was partly intentional probably but your special and somehow 'dirty' vocal style does not correspond stylistically with very clean instrumental track that much. The huge reverb only emphasizes the pitch issues. Also I think when rapping you're slightly out of the proper timing too. Overall this one sounds very much like a raw sketch of a song so far.

I am simply trying to say something useful so do not worry about all this to much. Just my opinions.

Congratulations on making some good songwriting work on this one. I like the vision but there is still so much that you can possibly do to get a better final recording (including fixing the mastering issues too)

Hi. Music is good, but vocal I'm not sure.