Very great work here EYEDYE. It's been a while since I heard one of your songs and I have to say I wasn't let down. The instrumental is so emotional and with your beautifully written spokenword, it makes it even more emotional and beautiful.
Amazing work. I give this track A+/10/10. Absolutely beautiful.
Modnex, good to see youre still hanging around. I took a hiatus for quite a while which is why you haven't heard anything for quite some time, but its a new year and I got a lot in the works!
I`ve been away slacking for a long time so just catching up with this one now....I did several music mixes for a spoken word artist a few years ago so have some appreciation for the art and the talents it takes to do it well....The backing music caught my attention right from note one..lovin it...nice fat piano...and the cello is great for adding emotional depth to most any kind of music..thoughtful lyrics even if they are dark (thats part of our journey too)....This is honestly one of the very best spoken word performances I have heard Eyedye (and I have heard many)..change nothing.....bravo...standing ovation from an old guy up North.....Ed
Ed, another talent I'm honored to receive feedback from. You haven't slacked much, only been up for a couple weeks so you're good haha. Dark is kinda my thing. To be put among your top performers is honestly awesome. To the old guy up North, I thank you for the time :)
That CELLO!! This is quite raw and contains so much depth. This is the first spoken-word song I have been able to listen to without cringing. You actually convey the feeling behind the words. Good job, I cannot commend this enough. The backing vocals add a touch of suffering that really carried this song far. Beautiful piece of art here. I hope you're doing better.
Brado!Im suprised you gave it a chance with others being cringy for you, but Im so glad you did. I am slowly getting out of a funk, and working hard this year to bring a lot to the table.
I assume youre talking about the underlying vocals. For those I down pitched them and equalized them to sound like it was coming thru a phone or old radio. Add a little bit of distortion and there ya go!
great job. the music is beautiful, words deep. I disagree with those who say rhyme. this is spoken word. an offshoot of jazz. I haven't come across your work before since I've been here, but you got my interest peaked.
I like the editing and adlibs at the beginning and I look forward to the vibes! Cheers to making it out of 16 alive and whatever 17 brings.. I'll be listening
im with LJ on this.. I think its great that you got to muse on this track but as a fan of the beat... RHYME!!! Make somethin we can vibe with you on. Even if I felt the same way as you, i cant play this more than once. NO DISRESPECT because I know there's a niche of people than CAN vibe with it but, for me, i'd like to hear something different.
This one was always gonna be a spoken word, better suited my personal taste, although ive dabbled with the thought of doing a part 2 where i do throw some vocal work on it...But Don't worry tekreck...I got a lot more in store, youll get your vibes ;)
Yo bro.... this is powerful....listen am working on my mixtape and I will really want this track to be in it cuz it relates with my title.... hit me back if you want to....I'll be really glad if you do
Wow, how did I not see this one? I think you emailed it to me, that's right! Sure, your voice is pitchy at times but that is an easily-fixable issue. The chorus is particulary catchy. I'm glad you did this one :)
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Amazing work. I give this track A+/10/10. Absolutely beautiful.
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Brado
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For me, music should be evocative and at least attempt to take you on some kind of journey, and this absolutely fits the bill.
Hats off, and thanks for sharing.
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I mean it could be good if you rap on it or somethin xD
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Sincerly,
Another Ignorant Artist
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so, what about making this a music?
"what about making this a music?"
A music what lol
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Cru
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this music is sacred and outstanding...it shows your shining talent...2017 will be yours...:-)
handshake, Danke
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The background music is really well done too, so props if you made that too!
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It is brilliant piece of music.
I love the vocal.
Well done.
Jamid
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The backing vocals really add the perfect touch to the meaning of this track. Good work!
I'm glad you made it through this garbage year :)
Stay strong!
Your friend,
Skwish Fish
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Brado