MOONLYTE

good track the beat sounds perfect for your vocals just gotta work on your delivery a little bit but your flow is pretty dope man! overall good s***

Nice delivery. Not a lot of people have that.

How can people listen to this the voice hurts my ears like a truck, what the hell.

Love your style.. !!

So What I like about this.
Your death metal screams are really good..professional sounding.
What I don't like.
Your rap Vox sound is a bit under polished (just a hint of whine in the vox.
You remind me a bit of this band
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8b88US-6ts
I chose this song from their catalog as I think if you started to overlap rap lines as an overdub over your other rap lines you would create something more interesting. And we have to make the "beat" , song you are rapping over to be a bit less cliche. You have raw talent but the music you are making is aiming for the generic. I think IMHOP. that for you to break through the fog of other rappers you need to come up with something more distinct. But please don't take this as a negative. I would only critique like this for someone I truly think has a lot of talent and ability and drive to be beyond the mediocre.Do you have any raw pella stems of your voice. I think I would like to work with them to show your what I mean.
Steve

good boy

Dam love the mix hella trill the beat is too nice

Nice man, keep it up!

NICE SONG

aaaaaay!!!! this is ill-the beat man geesh

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Heyyy I really like this. I like the emotion in this track, the controlled anger. Monotone rapping always kills it for me but this is anything but. I especially like the soft choir with the hard vocals. There also some really cool effects and transition effects.
The mix could use a little improvement on the mid to high end. Flow is solid. But this track now put you in my radar especially with that unique style of yours. I gotta keep a look out forr stuff you put out there. You style reminds me of Hollywood Undead if you've heard them.

Excellent work here.

Epic music dude keep doing this :3.

nice vibe, love it!

great :)

Oh heck yeah E! That is what I like, I would have gone the same road haha, Very nice job with this song. Really cool vocally what you did and how you did it, Sounds like a cool match, Ive been playing it over and over. Like your lil break down groove ha, that was sweet work. Enjoying how you used my loops too, and how you added to it. As it is I approve, keep up the lively music. Gonna go far kid. Thanks for sharing with us, Peace.

Sorry, screams i mean, not cryings. :)

Very Good Job!! Unbelievable Voice! The cryings sounds phantastic! But one thing, is that the right genre? ^^ Perhaps "Underground" or "Hardrap" but thats not important, 10 of 10 points!

Greetz

Excellent EYEDYE,the lyrics are great,i take it you dont watch Xfactor then?hah.Backing vocal towards the end adds to tension.

very cool backing music EYEDYE...love that bass ...lots of big power in those drums and the piano-string bits sound good...I have never been into rap but you do it well and the accompaniment is really top notch..creative stuff....Ed

Nice, Well made bro.!!

Fantastic...
great rapping , great fellows, great beat
hats off...

This nice it's different,check me out when you get some time let me know what you think

Nice work dude, mix sounds a little hot, but then again mine are usually too muddy &/or not bright enough.. granted I listened to it on a phone speaker, in a bathroom

There is definitely elements of this that I like, vocals are pretty cool and good use of loops etc. Nice!